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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: rashmivaish

tu chhupi hai kahaan

hum taraste yahaan😆🤣




WAhi jaha koi aata jaata nahi...😆
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Posted: 11 years ago






Part - 4

In Geet's Room...

Maan - Abhi bhi dard hain kya Geet...


Geet Looked at Maan...His face was showing concern...Haa...bas thoda sa...


Maan - Aur kaha chot lagi...He asked looking at her ...Geet didn't reply...


Maan folded his hands (typical MSK style😉) - Geet maine kuch poocha hain...


Geet pouted seeing his angry face...looked at him for a second and turned her face to other side...


Maan murmured ...iska kuch nahi hosakta...seedha pooch toh nahi batayegi aur thoda gussa karo toh muh phulake baith thi hain...


He went to the door and peeped out to see someone is coming or not...He can see Dadi talking on phone at the ended of the corridor...He came and sat on the bed beside Geet ...


Geet startled... ..yeh aap kya karr rahe hain...


Maan looked at her and turned a little and lifted her salwar a little to see any wound is there...


Geet - Aap yeh kya karr rahe hain...plz jane dijiye ...koi aajayega...dadi aati hi hongi...


Maan - Koi nahi aaraha hain geet...maine check kiya...And he started inspecting her legs...


Geet tried to stop him and and bent a little...Aah ...She moaned in Pain...her back was aching badly...


Maan immediately left her leg and moved towards her ...Geet uthne ki kya zaroorat thi...Main hoon na yaha...Dekho ab hilo mat...Tumhare pair par bhi chot aayi hain...thoda swelling bhi hain...and he bent down and took the pillow from other side and kept it under her leg which has swelling...


Geet - Maan plz aap yeh sab chodiye...


Maan - Chup bilkul chup...ek toh apna khayal nahi rakti ho...aur main kuch karoon toh aisi baatein karti hoo...tumhe pata hain main kitna darr gaya tha...tumhe aise dekha kar...He placed his hand on her left cheek and said...apna khayal rakho geet...Geet also held his and on her cheeck...angel bachi nain...tum bhi uske saath bachi banne ki kya zaroorat hain...he leaned forward and Kissed her forehead...Geet blushed...plz apne liye nahi toh mere liye apna khayal rakho Geet...They heard footsteps and Maan immediately stood and moved a little away from the Bed...

Dadi entered with a lady...


Dadi - Beta ab aap kaisi hain...dard badha toh nahi ...


Geet -Haa dadi..thoda dard horaha hain...


Dadi turned towards alkaand said Yeh Geet hain alka...isse chot lagi hain...zara dekho beta.....


Aur Geet yeh alka hain...Mr. Khanna ki beti...hamare padosi ...doctor hain alka...


Alka came farward and sat on the bed...She started examining Geet...first she looked at her leg injury and then turned to look at her back...but stopped realizing Maan is there...She turned to Maan and said - Aap plz zara bahar jaayenge...mujhe inhe examine karna hain...


Maan looked at Geet and Dadi, nodded and went out...


He rushed to his Room...freshened up in record time and changed to casuals from his office attire and Ran back to Geet's Room...by then alka finished her examination and talking to dadi about geet...


Alka - Kuch nahi hua Dadiji...woh sliding ki wajah se back thoda strain hogaya hain aur Pair me moch aayi hain...Bas thoda aaram karengi toh theek hojayengi...aur meine medicines prescribe kardiya hain toh plz mangwa lijiye aur time se lelijiye ga.....


Dadi - Thanks Alka beta...phone karte hi aagayi...


Alka - Plz dadi aap thanks mat kahiye...yeh mera farz hain...aakhir ek doctor jo hoon...main ek baar Angel ko bhi dekh leti hoon...kahi use bhi toh chot nahi aayi...


Alka left from there...


Maan - Dadi aap ne Alka kyun bulaya...hamara Doc ko kyun nahi bulaya...


Dadi - Maan...maine call kiya par woh busy the aur doosre doc aane mein waqt lag sakta hain...aur alka ko isliye bulaya ki kam se kam first aid toh hogi...kal subah aap Geet ko hospital lejayiye...


Ali came with hot water bag for Geet...Dadi helped Geet...


Maan - Ali jao...jaake Geet ka aur Mera khana yehi lekar aao...


Hearing Maan's Words Geet looked at Dadi...


Dadi ...Ali ruko...Maan Aap yeh kya karr rahe hain...Aap neeche jaake khana khayiye sab ke saath...hum baith te hain Geet ke paas...


Maan - Nahi dadi...aaj nahi...maine bohut dekhliye...isse aise hi choddenge toh aur bhi laparwahi karegi...


Ali - Woh meera ji bhi aap ko pooch rahi thi...he said slowly...


Geet - Aap jao ali...Mera khana lekar aao......


Ali went away from there...


Geet - Maan plz aap neeche jaayiye...Meera aapka wait karr rahi hain...


Maan - Nahi Geet...Main tumhe chodke nahi jaoonga...aaj toh bilkul bhi nahi......said Maan stubbornly...


Dadi - Yeh kya Zidd hain Maan...Alka ne kaha na ki Geet theek hain...toh kyun itni zidd karr rahe hain...


Maan - Nahi Dadi nahi...Main nahi jaaoonga...Aap meera ko manage karlijiye ga...Jaise itne din manage kiya...


Dadi- nahi maan aaj aapko baat karna hi hain meera se...ek baar baat kijiye......


Maan - Kya baat karoon dadi...kuch bhi nahi hain hamare beech baat karne ke liye......


Dadi - Maan ek baar meri baat maan jaayiye...woh din bhar aapka intezaar karti rehti hain...usse itna ignore mat karo maan...uska tabiyat aur kharab hojayegi...yaad haina doctor ne kya kaha...


Maan - Mujhe sab yaad hain dadi...issi liye chup hoon...Lekin aaj nahi Dadi...


Dadi - Aapko Geet ki chinta mat karo hum sojate hain aaj yaha uski help ke liye......


Maan - App kaise soyengi yaha dadi...aap ki bhi tabiyat theek nahi rehti hain...aur jagah change hone par aap ko neend nahi aati ...aur Agar Geet ko washroom jana hain toh aap kaise lejaayenge usse...


Geet was embarrassed in front od Dadi with the comment Maan made... ...Main manage kar loongi...aap jaayiye...


Maan - Plz Geet ab tum bhi shuru mat karo...Maine ne decide kar liya hain...jab tak tum theek nahi hojati main kisi ki baat nahi maanoonga...and that's final......


Maan declared his decision...


Dadi - Maan ghar mein sab kya sochenge...plz aap kuch gadbad mat kijiye abb......


Maan lost his cool and asked with anger filled voice...Kya galat karr raha hoon dadi...Sab ki soch se mukhe koi farkh nahi padta...Main sahi hoon yeh main jaanta hoon aur aap bhi ...toh iss baat ko yehi chod dijiye...

Geet - Lekin Maan agar gharwale kuch poochenge toh kya jawab denge...


Maan turned to Geet and Said -Agar poochenge toh Batadenge ki Tum Meri BIWI ho...


He called Ali through intercom and asked him to get his dinner to Geet's Room...


Maan - Dadi Plz aap jaake dinner kijiye aur aaraam kijiye...main hoon Geet ke paas......


Anu came there to see Geet...


Anu - Kaisi ho Geet... Dard to zyada nahi haina...


Geet - Nahi Anu...ab theek hain...Doctor ne dawai di hain...Tumne khana khaya....


Anu - Nahi, Main Dadi aur bhai ko bulane aayi hoon aur tumhe dekh ne bhi...anu smiled at her...tumhe kuch chahiye toh mujhe batadena...


Anu called Maan and dadi for dinner and went down...


Dadi - Theek hain Maan aap ki marzi main ab kuch nahi bolungi...with that she went away from there Leaving Maan and Geet...


Geet - Maan aap kyun gussa karr rahe hain...main theek hoon....


Maan didn't say any thing... went to the balcony door, opened the bolt and went to his Room...Closed his Room from Inside and came to geet's room through balcony...


Ali got their Dinner...


Maan - Ali neeche jaake kaho ki mujhe koi disturbance nahi chahiye...aur dinner ke baad Geet so gayi...


Ali - Ji baba...


Maan fed Geet her food and even had his...He called Ali and told him to clear the plates...


Ali left...


Maan locked the Room from inside...gave medicines to Geet...and settled himself beside Geet...


Maan - Ab sojao Geet...Main yehi hon...Agar kuch chahiye toh mujhe jaga dena...aur bed utarne ki koi zaroorat nahi hain...



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Plz Ignore the type errors and Hindi grammatical mistakes...


Plz Give me ur Views...Will be waiting...

Edited by -indu- - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago
lovely update indu👍🏼
To ab ye raaz khul gaya ki Maan and geet are husband and wife😃
I m happy now
achhha ek baat bataao jab wo hubby and wify hain to
wo office me windows ke blinds down karke kya kar rahe the😉
wo bhi dikha deti to sab khush ho jaate😉
yahaan to maan gussa hi ho raha hai uspar totally in MSK style😡
aaj to zid pakad li hai ki khana to wo geet ke saath hi khaayega aur soyega bhi ...NOT BAD MAAN BABU😉😉



the way maan is reacting for Meera ..
i don't think that she is his wife
baat kuchh aur hi hai😉

achchha ek baat bataao ki jo baat dadi aur Maan ne ghar walon se chhupa kar rakhi hai
wo baat Ali ko kaise maloom
wo bhi tha kya unki shadi me?


ek aur baat bataao ki maan aur Geet ki bakcony me kitna distance hai?
wo baar baar up and down kar raha tha na issiliye poochha maine
I was scared ki kahin usko chot lag gayi to usko kaun uthaayega😉😉

gussa ho gayi kya😆😆
arre arrey gussa mat ho yaar
bas aaj mera mann kiya ki main kuchh
comic style me comment kraroon to kar diya

I hope you won't mind😛😛


waiting for the next update..😃😃

Edited by rashmivaish - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago

awesome update di

maan angry on geet for hurting herself
so geet and maan are married aur maine sahi kaha dadi ko patha hai ye sab
app ne itna sataya maanu ko ab he is in his MSK mode 😆
he is not ready to leave geet and wants to be with her😳
dadi and geet ne kitna samjhaya ya par nahi
ab jaldi se next update do Tom ji
waitingg...
Edited by valli30 - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago
itna bada jhatka diya tune😲😲tho maan and geet already married hai aur yeh baath dadi bhi jaanthi hai.

ab yeh meera ki kya chakkar hai


lagtha hai already maan poori tarah se frustrated hai aur upar se geet ki chot so now he doesn't want to leave her and dadi bhi maan gayi hai.
Edited by priya111111 - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago
maan n geet married😲😕
agar geet maan ki patni hai to ye meera ka chakkar kya hai😕
maan n geet k bare me ghar me sirf dadima ko pata hai...
ufff main confuse ho gayi inki agar shadi hui hai to baki family ko kyun nahi pata aur ye meera kaha se tapki inn dono k beech me!!!

Edited by goldenmoon - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago
awesome update
loved it
it's getting intersting with each part
i have guessed it right both maan and geet knew each other before but never thought she is his wife...
dadi ma knew this and i think even ali know about this...
but why are they keeping it cecret
maan is stubbourn he didn't liseten to dadi ...and he wants to stay with geet ...
eagerly waiting for the next part
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Posted: 11 years ago
😲😳..awww maaneet are couple and even dadi know this..lovely yaar..maan is sooo possesive of geet welfare..sooo sweet...lovely update..pls cont soon..
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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: -indu-




thanks for the comment...

Tumne toh story hi likh di...try ur hand in writing in hand...😉


meee and writing😲.gud joke🤣
waise me reader hi thik hu 😃

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