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virmanhus

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Posted: 12 years ago

#21

wow!!! what a thought lina..

i just love u so much for having these different thoughts..

wow is really an understatement..

get going lina!!! u are a rocking personality

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Sumana123

@Sumana123

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Posted: 12 years ago

#22

OMGGG ...OMGGG ...OMGGG ...I m breathing heavy just like Viraat in this OS ...Are you some angel or what ...How can you write so amazingly. You know honestly after reading it I had tears in my eyes. Do I need to chant more how I love your narrations. And Viraat's mind I was laughing and loving him both at the same time. The Husband Name Part...😆..LOL...and The way Viraat imagined Maanvi were so impeccably penned down. Girl you are damn talented. Last but not the least , I wanna thank you for the message you brought out from this story. You message of making people realize value of Love and Care and value of just a moment hit the right chord. Indeed we just need one second to change our views be it for good or for bad , just one second is suffice to make a life changing decision. For Viraat this accident was a blessing in disguise he got his direction in life and understood the value of his LIFE...I always like reading things which leaves an imprint behind it and this piece is an example of it.

LINA ...YOU ARE SIMPLY AWESOME

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roshreb

@roshreb

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Posted: 12 years ago

#23

one of the best OS that i have read so far!!!!

it's just beyond awesome...

unique concept!! ❤️

virat's pov!!! love it to the core...

"Her voice is pleasant like symphony with a soothing effect. See, now I m in heaven...
Guess what!! She was kissing me. For me, it was a kiss. But for her it was an artificial respiration...I smiled and replied "I love you" before nurses taking me to the theatre... 😛

and the kushal part 😉...