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tremendous speechless breathtaking
you have done Ph.D. with writing emotions

awesome!
It was mindblowing helina!
I loved it to the core!
Trust me and i completely agree with preity_d!
You are a fabulous writer!
I loved all your previous works!
They were magical!
Where were you all these years huh?
Waiting for such an excellent writer!
Loved how you showed virat's feeling actually change of emotions!
Manvi is truly an angel!
Wow virat loves her at first sight...oops...kiss!
Truly!!!!it was magical!
Plz plz continue i know u ended it but i want atleast another one part thats it!
Hate that shifali!
But i am thaanking her!
If she wouldn't have pushed him on the road and if he dint meet with that accident then maybe he wouldn't have even met manvi!
Awesome writing!
Wonderful job!
Try and give another part pls pls pls!
And please add me as you buddy!
And keep pming me for your works!
SUPERB!

awwee lina where wer u all these days gal, if u've joined this forum before we would have gt many more os's frm u... omg u r an awsome writer i must say.. im thinking that if u write os this awsome then how would u write FF??!!... nw i want ff frm u... aftr reading this os i was numb fr few minutes.. its so true nd ur explanation was quite touching.. i loved ur os concepts..

Originally posted by: ..nikki_vijay..

I loved all your previous works!
They were magical!
Where were you all these years huh?
Waiting for such an excellent writer!

hey even im thinking the same...

Its really beautiful!! U shud continue

Originally posted by: sreshta90

<font face="Comic Sans MS, Times, serif"><font size="4">hey even im thinking the same...</font></font>

HI-5 yes!
Even i was thinking!
She is a way too awesome!
magical writing!

Wow its so nice do cont ur works

Brilliant OS..! loved how u have described humanity...:) Kushal this name made me smile,, :)!

Hello...dear girls...thank you so so much for your long, adorable, sweet comments...you made me happy with your comments...thank you all who commented and liked my woks...you girls rock...


girlies first, you asked me to continue FakeFiance. now you are asking me to continue this...what you all are planning to do...trying to turn my os's into ff/ss haan...lol...

those who are interested in FakeFiance, i decided to continue that...thank you once again sweethearts...

be happy...

Hey Lina,u r awesome buddy.👏
Hmm...so we have a newbie with so many stories.i loved this one specially.plz carry on n make it a long story yaar.will wait for ur next update 🤗