NEW POEM : Have you lost that fire ?

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Posted: 11 years ago
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A poem again ? Yeah ... 😆
So this one's called "Have you lost that fire?"
And don't tell me i didn't warn you ...
This one is even worse than the last one because my mood was even worse ...

HAVE YOU LOST THAT FIRE ?

When everything around has stopped

When your existence has been clogged

You feel like that helpless hungry stray dog

Wandering here and there

The moment when you totally broke

In those tears you got soaked

You wanted to tell the world something

But you got no chance

Every time you had a great fall

You stood up in spite of a stall

Like that small spider you climb hard towards your dream web

Like that restless mouse you run here and there

Even though you are dead the spirit is still alive

You have work hard like those bees in d bee-hive

You do everything to reach to the top

Still everything comes out as a big flop

Now u start degrading

As you start underestimating

You throw away that filthy unlucky attire

Then the only question your brain acquires

Have you lost that fire ?



I can see the rolling eyes ... 🤣

Anyways, how was it ?




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..IshqShava.. thumbnail
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Posted: 11 years ago
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The poem is wonderful Vidhi👍🏼👏
do write more of them!
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Awesome!!
Doing a great job!
Thnx 4 pm
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Posted: 11 years ago
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R u a writor or poet???..how this idea came into ur brain/mind ????😲😲 i think ur very creative and brilliant at studies...
now coming at the poem it is written brilliantly...great job..ur worthy of
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Hey Vidhi very inspiring poetry about life..👏😊

great job 👍🏼

Are you somehow inspired from the Miley Cirus song "The Climb"? coz the inner meaning of your poetry is reminding me the lyrics of the song..😊
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Nice one... I got it bt nt completely...
Its abt failure, aspirations, capability of achieving d dreams...
Right? ??
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Why do i feel scared after reading your poem?...When will your mood change BTW?? ...Do you scold people in verses rather than words when you get angry at them?😲..But that's a grt idea..They will have to think back before shouting at you in return as they will have complexes at first, thinking about your hidden talent.😉

Ok..Now coming to the poem it was beautiful n I must say the way you goive examples of small things like Spiders etc shows your ability at many things..You are indeed very talented..As i say your enemies will have complexes😆

Grt work👏👏..Keep it up..But next time have a god mood plz
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Beautiful Vidhi.👍🏼❤️👏⭐️🤗
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Posted: 11 years ago
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LOVELY CHOTI... UR CREATIVITY VERY FLEXIBLE😉
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Superb Vidhi! Seems like someone is getting melancholy...

Loved it!

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