SanDhir FF |Destiny| Closed! Pg30

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I will be taking down this story very soon. sorry for all the inconvinience and any queries regarding why you can read here

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So yeah, well guess with this, i might end all Sandhir stories as well.






*Thank you KJ for such an awesome banner! love ya!*



..Destiny..

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Prologue


The screams and cries of pain surrounded his ears as fog covering the clear sky. He could clearly hear the pain and unfortunately he could feel it too. He struggled to breathe but the smell of ashes, burnt engines masked his nostrils. His efforts to open his eyes, too, went futile. All he could do was try again.

He could feel the blood in his hands, legs and for that matter everywhere! Not just in his body, but in the whole area. Burnt bodies lay beside him like a sack, he wanted to scream! He wanted to yell and say, he was alive, atleast still. Finally he found some movement in his hands, as on cue his eyes too helped him by allowing him to open them up. Slowly and steadily he tried opening his eyes, but the smell was still there. To his right there lay a lady in mid 40's, deduced into ashes approximately. He flinched and tried to move away, only to hit another person lying to his left. He was a young man, may be of 30's, he too lay there his body fried like a toast.

He heard some screams of pain from far end, he wanted to help. But he couldn't. he wasn't in that condition. He knew he wont survive for long, he knew he was destined, destined to die very soon than he had assumed. But he had something to complete, some task that needs to be fulfilled before he took his last. It was their rights, and he shall give them their share!

Life is like a beautiful canvas, if the colors are used in right portions with right moves they create a splendid picture, but one wrong move, or an odd proportion of the colors can cause the damage. It can create nothing but an ugly picture. And today it was in his hands; colors as well as the moves! He shall now create a beautiful picture. A picture of life that needs to be given second chance! Yes he shall paint it, with words, from his own hands.

So he started, against the pain his body was combating, he walked with his torn legs. His shirt which was white colored initially was now bloodshed, he had lost the count of wounds he had. He had forgotten how many parts of his body was burnt. The explosion was indeed huge, it had its impact to miles. The whole area was reduced to ashes, but he had to survive. After all, he always had heard her say it- Its destiny. May be it is!

It was miracle that his bag was unscathed, taking out his huge diary and pen he started. He didn't know how long would he survive, but he had to start it somehow. Even though his body kept alarming him about the pain, hurt, injuries and what not, he didn't listen. He was the man with a mission and he shall complete it.

So started a story. A story in her words- Destiny. Today he had finally understood what she meant! This would be his tribute to them, Randhir and Sanyukta.


Then his words formed a story, a story that was set 5 years ago, when the two lost souls had stepped into the same platform- their Destiny.



x-x-x-x-x-x


A/N : Frankly speaking this story has nothing to do with Sadda Haq, it was something that i had written on the last pages of my note books- during those boring lectures (engineering ofcourse!). And then today when i finally put all the pieces together i felt i could write them with my favourite couple- SanDhir.


yes its bit of emotional at first, but don't worry i love humor, will add some in future chapters.


i want to say Heart felt Huge Thank you to all of you who have liked and commented in my previous Oneshots. Thanks Guys! you are awesome! šŸ¤—


These are the two one shots i had written on SanDhir -

1. Way To Heart

2. I Love You More

Do check them if you haven't yet! 😳


this is nothing like anything i have written before. its an experiment with myself. please help me with this journey?


Oh and guess the person in prologue? i bet you won't be able to! šŸ˜†


Continuation of this story depends on your reviews! so guys do let me know what do you think.


Index next post below šŸ˜›


If you want Pm updates to any of my stories please add : Sunshine_Bliss to your buddy list!




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Index


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Prologue : Page 1


Chapter 1 : Page 7


Chapter 2 : Page 11


Chapter 3 : Page 13


Chapter 4 : Page 17


Chapter 5 : Page 20


Chapter 6 : Page 21


Chapter 7 : Page 23


Chapter 8 : Page 26


Chapter 9 : Page 27


Chapter 10 : Page 29






Edited by ..nams.. - 10 years ago
rabia297 thumbnail
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Posted: 11 years ago
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osm strt...waiting to read ahead..nd yeah...i think the person in the prolouge wud b vardhan..jus a guess...
plzz update prt-1 soon..waitingg..

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Posted: 11 years ago
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res
dii agar unres karna bhool jao toh yaad dila dena plzz..
unres..

1st of all m really sowiee dii me bhool gyi..

secondly awsum prologue dii..šŸ‘

its just amazing..

haye m egarly waiting for update soon

nd thnxx for reminder..šŸ˜›
Edited by Abhilashaarsha - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago
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nice prologue.. Continue soon.. Love it..
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Posted: 11 years ago
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amazing prologue...šŸ‘šŸ¼
waiting to know more...
cont soon
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Posted: 11 years ago
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woww.. i am looking forward to it.. but plzz make it a happy ending..
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Posted: 11 years ago
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ohmygod!!
this is damn good!!
the prologue is so intriguing...!!!
I want to know who the person is although i 1st tot it was RanDhir but the end it seemed to be in a 3rd person..!!
i donno Sanyus friend? who she had narrated their story to..!!
i don care if its not related to the show coz gal this is jzz fab!!!
i donno wad to say... u have an amazing talent of writing...and making me fall in love with it..!!
i have read and comment on both of them a time ago donno if u know me...
the crazy chica wid huge comments!! 🤣
nyways this is beautiful!! the pain of being the only survivor..!!
the beauty of wanting to complete the unfinished business...!!
the pain of explosion around him!!!
gosh its simply lovely gurly i cant point at one thing i hate..!!!
jzz a awesome start to this fantastic FF..i cnt wait for the chap 1 honest..!!
UPDATE FASTT PLS?
well hope to receive a PM
regards
safrena
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Awesome... .. and interesting..😊.After sooo many days i'm reading your ff.Nd i know it will be the best as usual...update soon
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Thank You everyone for all your comments! šŸ¤—
will soon reply to all..

ill update tmrw or day after :)

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