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Posted: 11 years ago
#41

Originally posted by: NonComposMentis

Gosh, lady!!

This. Is. Brilliant!

This:
"Life is like a beautiful canvas, if the colors are used in right portions with right moves they create a splendid picture, but one wrong move, or an odd proportion of the colors can cause the damage. It can create nothing but an ugly picture. "

Wow. I mean, wow.

Cannot wait for the update!

Mugs.


mugs 🤗

Thank you so much!!!! 😳

it feels so nice to hear such words from you.. when you are really good writer yourself! 😃 thanks dear..

will soon update! thanks for your comments 😳😳
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Posted: 11 years ago
#42

Originally posted by: Quixotic

Wow dear...superb prologue!👏 The person who is narrating this is indecipherable, but my guess is that it is Vardhan. I hope I am write. 😉 Loved the elusive mood of the prologue. Greatly written!

Shris




Thank you much! 🤗

haven't seen you since long! where have u been??

will soon update hun! thanks for all the support 😳
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Posted: 11 years ago
#43

Originally posted by: soumeesg

The prologue ws too good to b described in words n i meant it...d words...they touchd d chords of my heart!! But i dnt like where they r going...its either vardhan or randhirs points of view...n i dnt want either of them to die...plz no...😭so, u better update soon n pm me wen u do...otherwise i wnt b able to concentrate on any other work!!😊


hey thank u so much..

i am so glad my words made way to your heart 😳 it really means lot to me!! thanks dear..

will see who will die and who will survive 😉 just be patient 😳

aww.. dont worry will soon update!😛
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Posted: 11 years ago
#44

Originally posted by: Abhilashaarsha

res

dii agar unres karna bhool jao toh yaad dila dena plzz..
unres..

1st of all m really sowiee dii me bhool gyi..

secondly awsum prologue dii..👏

its just amazing..

haye m egarly waiting for update soon

nd thnxx for reminder..😛


thank u so much abhi 🤗

hehe glad to remind u anytime as long as u unres 🤣

updating in few 😳
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Posted: 11 years ago
#45

Originally posted by: ..nams..


Thank you much! 🤗

haven't seen you since long! where have u been??

will soon update hun! thanks for all the support 😳


I know I missed reading your stories...actually my computer had broken down and I had to send it to get it repaired... So excited to be back! ⭐️
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Posted: 11 years ago
#46


Chapter One

~Instead of crying because of past pain, it's better to smile for future; even if it's a fake smile!~

Sanyukta.

The sound of her luggage rolling on the streets echoed softly. It was just 2am, the time between the night and sunrise. Her steps were heavy as if with each step she was leaving a part of her behind. Her eyes were dark and swollen. her cheeks were colored with the stains of dry tears. Her lips were pale as if she had been chewing it since long. Her hair was tied in an odd bun. Every part of screamed that she was tired, but she wont give up! Never!

Her eyes fixated on the horizon, she was walking with determination. But she wasn't alone, not that she cared anything about those thugs who were following for god knows from when! She didn't bother that she had been stalked. Because to her there was one aim, to reach her destination!

She heard few nasty comments from the footsteps that had now reached dangerously close to her. But, she didn't fear, she didn't care! The street was deserted, not that anybody would have cared anyway! She felt the footsteps slow down, she could feel the voice close, very very close. A flick of fear passed through her nerves, and disappeared just as it had come. Suddenly the sound of car screech echoed loudly, she turned around to face the BMW that had stopped inches away from her. She could also see the blur images of few thugs behind the car who were shocked by sudden intrusion. But to her, it didn't matter.

A man in his late twenties or early thirties or whatever, walked out from his car. He was wearing black, from top to bottom, even his spectacle were black lined. The stubble in his face complimented his looks. No, she wasn't checking him out, she was surprised instead. Surprised by what this man was doing by almost running his car upon her. Giving no heed to the intruder or those thugs, she turned on her heels to walk away.

"Girl and Midnight is deadly combination, even Ghandhiji agrees! Akeli ladki, Andheri raat, sun-saan sadke, is a bad equation if you didn't know miss."

She tripped on her toes when his deep voice stuck her ears. Not that she didn't expect him to speak, after all he was right. It wasn't everyday scene that a girl, young teenage girl walking with her luggage on a deserted road!

She glanced at her side bag which was now lying on the road with her things spilled out. She didn't like it. She didn't like it when it was a mess, she was already tired of cleaning her own messed up life and she couldn't afford any more mess in her life. She bent down gathering her stuff while he continued to stare her with eye brow raised.

"F.I.T.E?" he asked scrutinizing a small sized token that had fallen somewhere to where he was standing. He picked it up glancing at the name "Sanyukta Agarwal?" he asked. Sanyukta looked up to meet his eyes with an alarm. Did she start hating her name too? She sighed for the first time that night.

Knowing that he wouldn't get any answer from her, "Shall I drop you? Am I on my way to F.I.T.E!" he offered with an authoritative tone. She didn't like it. Uh. She had started disliking many things now. Isn't it?

Without a word she sat inside his car with all her stuffs dumping into the seat next to hers. He was surprised, that would be an understatement to say. Nevertheless, he didn't care either. He gave her F.I.T.E card back to her once he was inside his car. She took it without casting him a look. He wanted to ask why she was clutching a file so dearly, but he chose not to. This girl was, um well different? But the girl lacked brains, and he didn't appreciate girls without brains!

Randhir.

He stared out of the window crawling up in his recliner like an abandoned ball. It was dark, in his room, outside world as well as the life he was leading. He believed he knew how to lighten up the darkness, but he couldn't save himself from such days, such days that resembled an eclipse. Such days where he was vulnerable; such days where his lighting powers went missing! Such days where he remained in a dark room as tears graced his cheeks. It was one of those days where he could do nothing but hate his fate.

"Randhir baba? You didn't sleep yet? Its 2 am at night go to sleep baba" the old maid of his house entered his room with voice full of concern.

Sometimes randhir really wished he would have been born in this poor man's house. He would be much happier; he would be in peace to the least.

"Kailash Kaka leave me alone!" he said, his voice showing no emotions but dejection. Kailash had learnt one thing over the 18 years he had known this boy, when Randhir was emotionally weak listen to whatever he says! And so the old man decided to leave him alone. "Actually, wait kaka. It's good to see you before I leave" Randhir said as the room lights turned on. Kailash could now see randhir fully dressed and his duffel bag pulled up his shoulders.

"Where are you going baba?? What do I tell to Maalikh? Why are you going baba? For how long.. and-" Kailash fired him questions one after other in panic. Randhir cut him of by placing his assuring hand on his shoulders "I will be fine! Trust me" was all randhir said. "But-" Kaka tried to object, he couldn't see his little boy go away for god knows where and how long. One look in randhir eyes he knew, Randhir needed this break. A break from everything that was going around in his life lately! Kailash gave him a small smile. Pulling his bag up his shoulders Randhir marched towards the door.

"And haa, Maalik se kehna- I won't return, ever!"

Sitting on his bike randhir looked towards the gate with determination. He would be gone. Gone away from this house, he would free! Not that anyone had ever restricted him, but he felt suffocated to be in this house.

x-x-x-x

With the highest speed he fled, far far away to his destination. "F.I.T.E I am coming!"

There in the other corner of the state, a huge college stood in all its pride. As a black BMW made its way inside the gates, she smiled with pride "F.I.T.E I have come! "

x-x-x-x


Helloo! 🤗


first of all, thank you so much! so much for your precious comments.

So this is the start, and chapter two will be up soon in two-three days.


and yes just to make it better for you all to visualize i might as well use some SanDhir scenes from Sadda Haq! with its own little twists and mystery.

oh and i got a new banner ready for this FF 😉


so yeah do read, like and review!!! 😳


If you want Pm updates to any of my stories please add : Sunshine_Bliss to your buddy list!



thank you all again! :)


love

nams! :))

Edited by ..nams.. - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago
#47
Yeah me first...
And awesome update... N amazing banner..
Loved it to core..
Plz update next part soon..
Can't wait to read more..!!
Edited by shalini_shakti - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago
#48
res..
is time paka nhi bhoolungi..😆 hopefully..🤣
unres..

haye kal hi toh ek unres kiya tha..aaj wapis..😭

btw awsum banner

i loved it..

haye awsum update dii

haye intros mast hai..

update soon

me sorry nhi bolongi..kyu ki i knw nxt time wapis bhoolne wali ho..🤣
Edited by Abhilashaarsha - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago
#49
Incredible. U r a marvellous writer. The way u portrayed everything is just amazing. Pls update soon. I m eagerly waiting to read more from u. 👍🏼
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Posted: 11 years ago
#50
Nice update...update soon😃

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