Thrd:2 MN:Once Upon Atime,Love Story last chapterPG7 28/12 - Page 6

Amazing story beautiful ending.

mayur are living happily with thier cute child
i loved the way their son utter bah bah- so sweet

beautiful ending of a beautiful FF
its called fairytale
awesome

fantastic part
loved it so much Api
you are just brilliant
plz come back with new mayur ff

Your love give me strength to live day by day
To enjoy my life to the fullest forgetting that painful past behind
To understand that life is a journey
And that we can travel it together
Your love teaches me thet love is unconditional,
And that our love will never die
It will go through many changes,
Just as our lives are in constant motion
You have taught me to be secure in our love
The way u love me give me butterflies
I feel strangly light headed
I look forward to your touch, the sound of your voice
The comforting words you offer
And your undying support
You have taught me that love can last a lifetime
And that you must work at it
Something this precious cannot be given up
The way you love me lights my life
And burns a fire deep inside

Wonderful n perfect ending api...
This is one of the best n most beautiful n pure lovestory I have read... mayank n nupur both face a lot but with the help of their love they handle everything very well.
My fav scene hmmm that one month both live together ... q ka ose doran to nupur feel like a normal girl ..they way mayank treat her... n second they wedding night part..sach api ro pari thi me os part ko pardh kar...matlb mujhe kitna intezar tha os part ka n jb wo aya to meina jo socha tha osa totally different .. nupur ka dard oska emotions apna itna acha sa describe kiya ka ... is ff ka sab sa best part h wo..n heads off to u to write it soo well 👏 👏
N third nupur n samraat scenes I really like it very much.. specially the scene when nupur gifted him..
N forth one is nupur pregnancy part mayank reaction u have h heart in ur stomach awee soo adorable... n that stair scene I love the most mayank actually feel like father who is protecting his frightened baby...apiii ap kase har choti choti chiz itna acha sa describe kar lati ho...I soo wish me apse atleast ek bar zaror mila life ..taka apko hug kar sko..for giving us sach a beautiful stories..
I m going to miss this ff very much..ek attachment se ho gyi h is ff sa ..jaise Ardhagani sa hui thi.. abi tk os ff ko bhol nhi ski me almost 50 time pardh chuki ho osa still feel like reading again n again...
Plz api ff likhna kbi mat chorna .. n comeback with new ff abi nhi to kuch time bd per zaror ..thk h
Love u n thanku again for giving us such a beautiful ff..waise mera dil ko abi b nhi lg rha yeh ff end ho gya h..sighhh

FINALLLYY THE BEAUTIFUL STORY OF THE MOST BEAUTIFUL COUPLE COMES TO AN END...😳😳😳

Originally posted by: crazymayurian

sweet

thanks alot dear

Originally posted by: gopi06

perfect & happy ending fiza
it is a different mayur story ..loved this mayur ..it's very challenging to make their life into a fairytale ..but they did it with the support of each other
thanks for the pm & story

thanks alot gopi...
yup me n happy endings go side by side ...
thanks for liking ths story and remaing here and with all of my work always.. yes it was differnt and really challenging for me as i have to step out of my comfort zone to write it ..
love gives u a faiytale n as u said they did found one
thanks for staying her
thanku

Originally posted by: Maria.

A very Beautiful Story Fiza.it was really a tough subject but you done your job really well.Keep it up good work,i'll wait for ur new FF.:)

About your question .i liked all the initial chapters most.

thanks alot Maria...
yup a tough n challenging subject
thanks for liking it and staying here with the story

New ffs... not cuming up anytime soon need to finish my on going ones
thnks alot

Originally posted by: -Paulomi-

At last I completed reading the whole story.😃😃

First of all,I wanted to confess that I want to kick myself a number of times I wish to miss such a wonderful story which is so away from the show.I beg of you,please forgive me.I hope you will.😳😳

no issues dear... u came here and read ths more important... i harldy ever write on the show things.. hardly on CS of MJHT...

Now coming to the story.As you have confessed so Iam also not hiding the fact that I also disliked the fact of Nupur being a prostitute,but then I realized that its a kind of reality,girls being prostitute,some on their will and some being left with no option left.I also realized another fact that,all stories need not have to be like fairy tales and sometimes you have to face the harsh truth.The beauty lies when you take out the beauty from a worst thing and for that hats off to you!👏👏

thanku so much for actually understanding the main aspect of this story.. i really feel amze and very happy whn my readers can read beyond jst mere words...

Npur was at first raped by her step-father😡😡That part of update was really horrible.😡😡Huh!Now even in some cases a girl can't trust her biological father,there are ample of examples to that where a girl is raped by her own father,which is the most disgusting thing🤢🤢Parents are the only one to trust blindly,but now the word TRUST brings another question with it ON WHOM?😭😭
ya true but yet i am surly not still confortmable addressing many truths so i kept it step father... its diffcult mayb cuase we r moving away frm our religious n ethical aspects

But yes,some girls are not so lucky like Nupur.At last GOD smiled to her and she got a family with a husband like Mayank.She never desired for anything in her life,but its said that if God punishes than he himself fills their life with happiness and thats what happened Nupur.😛😛After passing those horrible 8 years,at last now she is happy forever with her own family.😊😊
yup bt she happens to be ... 😊

Lastly the disgusting Mr and Mrs Sharma😡😡I wish if that bas***d woyuld have been stabbed by Mayank when he was talking ill about Nupur.Its said na SAU CHUHE MAAR KAR BILLI HAJ KO CHALI.Kutta,kameena,saala suwar,gutter mein sar sar ka mar ja tu.Iam soory Iam using such words but Iam helpless because that filth desrves it and yes Mrs Sharma,you woman,at least you should have supported your son's decision and moved on with them,I would have much more happier.She can't see person behind tag,but what about her own husband,isn't he a ruscal behind the tags,at that moment when she was staying with her hubby even after knowing the truth,where her morals gone?I hate that woman too.😡😡

ya khuda... itni galiyana.. she is a woman but more thn tht she is a mother and no mother will evry like to have a pr** as his son's wife.. not matter how she isor have been ...

The verbal slap to Esha,bi***,but yeah I loved it.👏👏

While concluding,I must say its very tiresome to read the whole story at one go,so I promise to read regularly according to your updates,for my sake of understanding the story better.So please please send me PMs wheneer you update your story.😃😃

Thanks for giving us such a wonderful story.😊👏

One question,why did you choose this title?Does that resemble your story?Iam unable to understand that.😕😕

thanks a lot dear... and i know its tiresome to read the whole story in a go spl one like this whoes updates were evry long... i hope to see u on my other writngs to... though i m hell irrgular these days..

abt ur question
i think it is very simple ... this is the only title tht has nothing very thoughtful to it...
th stroy i f u have read my note in the start is a fairytale... and evry fairytale starts with ONce Upon A time... so tht from where the title came in

thank u so much