ASYA: ON MY WEDDING DAY.... MARRIED A STRANGER INSTEAD OF MY BRIDE !! - Page 51

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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: Linsie



Karan Singh Grover@Asad Ahmed Khan always


Thank you dear !
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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: khadupam

Hey happy new year
Overalll it was nice i know its starting of the storyy soo it will take time for the bounding between two
i dont know but your story is going little slow i guess rest is fine
Overall i liked it
Now officially waiting for their mission to start
Update soon waiting for it ... 😃


Thank you !!
Yeah... Slow coz I want you all to understand the characters a bit !
Then,the story will run😆
Ok😉
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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: Linsie

Zoya: see aunty, ur son is not letting me sleep ... !!

Vanshika: how can he let u sleep?😲 ... It's ur first night after all😉

Complaining like a small kid ... Don't u know that u r not going to sleep on ur wedding night😡 😡

U have other imp.😳😳Works to do other than sleeping, my dear 😳😆😆!!

To asad ... U carry on my son, 😆this time I'll support u😆 !!😆


🤣 🤣


Even I like this part the most😆
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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: anopama

nice update
I dont see those two becoming frenz
much less husband and wife
so very hard to figure them out
continue soon


Thanks !!
Yeah... For me also 😆
Ok😉
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Posted: 11 years ago
when r u going to update reyna ??😭
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Posted: 11 years ago

Part 7:


( if u like my story, please do share it with ur buddy's as the response is very very less for 350 pm's !! u can check the last part likes n comments to know it better ... i'm really upset, but thanks to all those who like n comment !! )


vanshika: here are asad's diaries ... !

she hands him a set of them ... He takes out 2013 diary, and starts to read it

~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~

Jan 1, 2013

Happy new year to me ... It's a surprise start for this year !! I donno from where all these things happened, but ...out of blue, aenna proposed me today !

~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~

varun stopped reading it n went for 2012 diary ...

vanshika: why did u stop ?

varun: coz , this diary didn't have their first meeting !

may be ... they met even before 2013 ! we'll read from start abt them !

he opens the 2012 diary ...

Vanshika: now, are we going to read his whole diary for her info ?

Varun: just wait ... We'll see the first day of each month ... if aenna's name will be there ... we'll know wen she met him from the before month !

He is checking first day's of every month ...

~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~

Jan 1, 2012

Happy new year to me ... For the first time, I'm welcoming new year with friends rather than with family ...thanks to mom !

~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~

Vanshika: how sweet !! ...see ... This is my son ! ... He even thanks me in his diaries !

Varun: wait vanshi ... Who knows wat all he has written abt u wen he didn't accept for his marriage ?

Vanshika shuts her mouth n lets him continue ...

~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~

Today, we went to beach and played beach volleyball ... it was fantastic at first ... But ended on a serious note for our team !

After certain maches, we heard a female voice calling us ... N we turned around

The girl said us that they don't have a team to play against n hence asked us to play with them !

I was the first one to reject, but wat to do ? ... My other fellows were soo desperate to play with girls, that I had to agree !

We started the match, everyone in their positions n they served first !

We've let the game as loosely as possible coz ...after all they were girls ... N we didn't want to disappoint them !

As the game was progressing ...i found that centre position girl was doing extremely gud n they were not leaving any chances to win the game rightfully !

As it was going out of our hands ...we've decided to play hard on them n then began the original game !!

That was almost going to be a draw wen that centre girl hit the ball to straightly punch on my face n we lost the game !

I wanted to meet her n really appreciate her for her play, but I was angry on her

I never thought I can have a grudge on anyone ... but now, I really n strongly have a grudge on that girl whom I even donno !

One day, I should give her hit, back !!

I saw that girl going ... I wanted to talk with her or thought to atleast ask her name n address so that I can play again against her, but I couldn't !!

~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~

Varun: boys lost to girls ? ... How shame !!

Vanshika: don't underestimate girls varun ...see ... ur son has paid that price

Varun: vanshi ...it's our son !

Vanshika: ok, our son !! but, ... is this girl aenna ?

Varun: how can I know ? ... even he doesn't know her name ! we'll read feb 1st n if there is her name, then we can confirm that this girl is aenna !

~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~

Mar 1, 2012

Once in four years came yesterday ... 29 th feb !!

I'm glad that this day has come ...coz, I've met one of the most brilliant n stupid mind of my clg today !

I've seen her name almost everytime in notice board beside mine in the toppers list ! she is the topper of their branch ... N I always wanted to meet her n have a chat with her ... As I wanted to know how she thinks n how her ideas are !!

there was a call for scholarship application ... N I went to library to fill it n handover !

I saw this girl sitting beside me, and seriously filling the form as if she was in her exam !

Though I never initiate conversations, I couldn't stop myself ...as it has been many days that I wanted to talk with her atleast once ...n I didn't want to leave this opportunity !

I was trying to recollect her name, which I saw on notice board many times, but didn't register in my mind !

before I could get her name, she stood up to submit her form !

as sharp as eagle, my eyes caught the wrong date on her application n I immediately spoke ... excuse me, u wrote the wrong date !

she answered back ... " wats yesterday's date ? "

I said 29th

She said ... " that's wat makes today 30th !! ... Don't try to talk with me uselessly ...I've been observing u from quite a while ... ur observation is close to me n far from ur application ... It'll be nice if u concentrate on that poor application than me ! "

I was shocked at that !

How can she think soo low of me ? ... I let her go as she'll herself find her mistake a while later !

I expected her to come back n apologise me, but that didn't happen !

I was disappointed , but submitted the form n left the library !

~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~

Vanshika: is this girl eanna ?

Varun: will you stop it vanshi ? how can I know ? ... Are you letting me complete this or not ?

Vanshika: ok, carry on ! ... but like this, it'll take a lot of time ... N before we can set them up, they'll become miles apart !!

Varun: then wat can we do ?

vanshika: first start mission 1 ... N wen that's going on, we'll read these diaries n remove aenna !

varun: yeah ... this is right ...as we don't have soo much time also !

vanshika: to make them friends, they should atleast like eachother !!

varun: to like eachother ... They should know eachother's positive points

vanshika: yeah ... we know about asad, but about zoya ?

varun: we'll ask her parents ! ...he calls her parents n they all assemble in zoya's house ...asx asad's house has both asad n zoya as obstacles !

varun n vanshika tell them about everything that has happened n how they both hate eachother

aditya( zoya's dad): so ... Now ... We should make them like eachother

Zoya's mom: ok ... Zoya doesn't know how to do any housework ... U know, we've brought her up like a boy n that too with lot of pampering ... But she knows everything about business, shares, n everything of that sort !!

From here onwards, the story will run ... With each character's depth n understanding !!

Wait for aenna's, asad's n zoya's complete past to unfold in next 3 parts !!


i want long comments for my long update


********** love ... reyna

This story will be updated every Thursday !!


my first story: BEST FRIENDS TO BEST LIFE PARTNERS

https://www.indiaforums.com/forum/fan-fictions/3823857/best-friends-to-best-life-partners-upd-epilogue-11-2


Lemme know if u liked it !!

Buddy me for my pm's !!

I'll only pm to those who'll comment ... !!

reyna's index: fusion of ff's , girl's corner n kid's corner !!

https://www.indiaforums.com/forum/qubool-hai/3762857/reynas-index-fusion-of-ffs-girls-corner-n-kids-corner

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Posted: 11 years ago
awesome update
i loved it

waiting for next
Edited by 11sinal - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago
i loved it
eagerly waiting to know there past
please continue soon
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Posted: 11 years ago
really a very lovely and nice update
eagerly waiting for the next part to know about their past
continue soon and thanks for the pm😊
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Posted: 11 years ago
lovely update reyna👏
Finally varun & vanshi started thier mission 1👏 👏
Cute dairy reading part but short.. 😃
attitude aleena 🤣🤣
No asya in this part😭
Zoya interested in business😳
Looking forward to know the past asya & aleena.
Edited by Ani-asya - 11 years ago

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