THE GREAT WARRIOR part 2 page 9 5/1/2014 - Page 4

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Posted: 11 years ago
#31
Wow awesome update dear, loved it a lot... The way you explained everything is superb. I felt like i am seeing the movie. Princess and maan are dead, so sad but needed.. continue soon dear.
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Posted: 11 years ago
#32
Lovely update

Maan & geet r dead nw ... & sher khan is witness of these ...

So nw story will be in present times with maaneet's rebirth ...

Waiting for nxt part cont soon ...
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Posted: 11 years ago
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wonderful start...

how Maan and Princess die...and Sher Khan really had tears in his eyes...

will this curse of killing 100 people before they die will continue in next birth also...

waiting to know more...

thanx for pm...


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Posted: 11 years ago
#34
Yot got me with d story buddy.

Historicals are my weakness and if its on Maaneet then toh Sone pe Suhaaga.Loved the first part.

I know Maan will be back to complete his incomplete love story.

Shall be waiting for his reincarnation as MSK.
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Posted: 11 years ago
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sound good...

cont soon...

pl add me n pm whn u update nxt...

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Posted: 11 years ago
#36

PART 2

400 YEARS LATER

Between the sun a bike take a high jump

Girl : bas 10 min mai bike champion race shuru hone wala hai jis mai ek se bad ka ek youngster aapna talent dikhange joh sab se high jump karega wohi hoga winner . here comes over event organizer reshma

Reshma : kanchan lets start the game

Maan comes to the bike race

Reshma : hi maan how are you

Maan : stop flirting shart kitne ki lagi hai

Reshma 1 is to 5 five times your money

Armaan maan's childhood frnd

Armaan : tell the height

Reshma : only 20 feet

Armaan : only 20 feet aise bol rahi hai jaise 20 inch ho not interested

Girl comes and say : mere 5000 shaam par

And shaam is shown racing and what is this he fell down on tht jump ohhh poor shaam

Reshma counts the 5000

Reshma : kya huwa maan you still want to do it

Maan nodded his head in no

Reshma : mai janti thi

Maan : ek ka panch bhi koi bet hai ek ka dus ho toh batao

Reshma turn towards maan

Reshma : ok done

Maan to armaan

Maan : give her the money

A girl comes to maan and ask are you taking part after all this

Maan : yes I am

Girls shouts : maan is doing it

And everyone goes to reshma for betting on maan

Girl announce : next participate maan

Maan puts his hand on the gear

Leg on the start and move the bike with full speed

Reshma indicates his man to put it on more 5 feet height and he does that

Armaan sees it and call for maan

Armaan : maan

But maan does it very coolly and complete the championship

Armaan runs towards maan

Armaan : arre yaar jaise hi height increase hote hi meri bp bhi increase hote ja raha tha

Maan hand over him pepsi

Maan : yeh thanda le aur chill mar

Maan is searching for reshma and says : toh kahan gayi meri Swiss bank ka locker

And here reshma hides the money and run from there

Reshma runs towards a mill and find a man over there

Reshma : boss kuch ladke mera picha karke mujhe parehsan kar rahe hai who bhi aapke aream mai aa kar aap zara unko dekhiye na

Maan comes there with his gang and see's the man over there with full of style

Maan : Namaste boss

Man: kya re ladke pe line marne ki koshish kar raha hai

Maan : mera baap mujhe ghar se bahar nikal dega yeh toh aise hi time pass

Man : kya time pass

Maan : yaa

Man was about to put his hand on maan shoulder maan stps him and cleans his shoulder

Maan : aab rakhiye

Man : dekh beta dance ka matlab sirf body ko hilana nahi hota aise step lo ki logo ke upar se chat udh jaye

Maan : aabhi toh bike udhai hai chat bhi udha lounga

Man : ahaaan kafi confident lagta hai tu

Maan : bilkul aapne baap pe gaya hoon

Reshma comes in between

Reshma : kya re mere boss ko dance sikhaga tu

Maan moves a little fwrd and reshma gets scared and put the man in between

Reshma : mera boss tujhe se zyaada aacha dance karte hai

Man : arre kya kar rahi hai mar waegi kya

Reshma : please boss

Man : karu na

Reshma : hmmm

Man : thik hai toh phir ho jayega

And the man starts dancing

Maan is shocked to see his dance move what a dance wow

Reshma is full happy to see his dance

Man finish his dance

Man to maan : kaise laga shock laga na

Resham comes

Reshma : kya dance kiya aapne boss

Man : thanks aab kabhi ladki pe line nahi marega yeh

Man to maan : ghar jake dance ki thodi practice kar

And man moves out of the place

Maan : aye chori

Reshma : kya re

And the ohhh god what is this maan is doing the same dance moves what that man did but no he is doing much better then that man

Reshma is shocked and ohh that man is all seeing from the exit area how maan is dancing

Man to himself : guru godh hi rah gaya chela (student ) shakar (sugar) ban gaya

Maan takes all the money from reshma

Maan : aye swiss bank aapne se panka nahi huh

And gives money to reshma

Reshma : woh bhi do na (seeing more money in maan's hand )

Maan moves a little fwrd and she gets scare and run away

Later at evening

Maan and his friend in auto

Maan : kisne kaha tha tujhe dimag chalne ke liye bachpan mai school gaya hota toh gawar nahi rehta gadha kahin ka do paise bachne k chakar mai taxi ki jaga auto mai leke jaa raha hai meri image ka kya hoga

Armaan : arre image ko chod iss traffic mai aur mere budget mai auto hi padti hai

Maan : agar time pe airport nahi poche na toh tujhe hospital pocha dounga

Autowala : kya baat hai itni jald baize mai kahan jaa rahe ho

Armaan : bangkok wahan bike race aur jumping dono hai

Autowala to armaan : shakal se lagat nahi tum rider ho

A girl in rain standing on bus stop waving her hand for auto

Armaan see's the girl

Armaan : wahan dekh ladkin auto ke liye haath wave kar rahi hai agar hum usse lift de toh

Maan : chup rah warna muh tod dunga tera

Maan waves his hand for saying a sign of no

Maan slightly touches the finger of the girl and a current pass thru him he gets a slight flash back of his memories

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Posted: 11 years ago
#37
nice update buddy
maan completed d challenge
do cont soon
thnx fr d pm
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Posted: 11 years ago
#38
hi thanks 4 da pm n terrific update! He completed the challenge! update soon! Well written
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Posted: 11 years ago
#39
aaj k update magadheera se milte hai...toh geet is standing in d rain...

beautiful update...

loved it very much...

thank u very much fr d lovely update...

waiting eagerly fr d nxt prt...

continue soon plz...

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Posted: 11 years ago
#40
awesome update
maan toh toapori nikla re😆😆😆

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