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abhayprsingh

@abhayprsingh

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Posted: 11 years ago

#221

koi sath nai hai rone ko..

na koi wajah khush hone ko...

jo mera tha hi nai us k lie roi..

kai baton me khush hui..

pr kyo?? kis lie??

vo to mera tha nai..

sth usne dia nai..

fir ab kyo??

badh chala vo mujhe chodh k..

saare waden sb kasmen tod k..

ab bs main hun akele..

pr haar na manungi main..

aage badhungi..

use jitna chaha ab nafrat karungi..

vo kashish vo tadap sb khtm ho gai..

ab nai rha kuch hmare darmiyaan..

kaisi hai??

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Bhanu

@Cherishh

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Posted: 11 years ago

#222

jaldi kar..par do kyun I wonder

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daredevilisback

@daredevilisback

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Posted: 11 years ago

#223

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Love u all guys...Thank u so much😳

From next time will reply to all comments just before update...so that u can read it easily...😳

Edited by daredevilisback - 11 years ago

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daredevilisback

@daredevilisback

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Posted: 11 years ago

#224

Part 1

Present:

Its morning, fresh start of the day...he woke up from the bed & came towards window of his room rubbing his eyes cutely...he opened his brown eyes saw the serene scene in front of him... sun arising from the mountains like sun also woke up rubbing eyes came towards window like him... he took deep breath Good morning Maan...he wishes himself so peaceful morning ...that's why I love hoshiyaarpur ...

He gets ready & came downstairs...where his parents waiting for him for breakfast...Good morning mom...morning dad... they wished him back...as he sat beside his dad ... his mom came and indicated him towards third person in hall...he looked up ohh hi sameera... sameera came hugged him I missed you so much she whispered in his ears...he gave her awkward smile. He always gets stiff when she comes near him. He doesn't know how he is going to spend his whole life with her. How can she be his fiance when she can't even be his friend.

They did their breakfast. All sat in hall... Maan beta we were thinking, now we should proceed to your marriage... it's been 2 years now to your engagement his mom dropped bomb on him...obviously he knew this will come today or tomorrow. And he have to marry this non-bearable woman but he have to do this for his parents. He always had been a sweet, sober, soft heart person. He can't think beyond his parent's happiness. Mom I know but I need sometime. I just came yesterday. And besides that I want to build my career first...please he whispered at the end hoping that they will agree. Of course you will build your career Maan ...today itself we will leave to Delhi... Dad will hand over KC (Kapoor construction) to you Sameera said excitedly hoping he will be ready for marriage Sameera I want to build myself on my own... I got call from one of the company from Mumbai...so I am moving to Mumbai He said it softly it's not his cup of tea to be an arrogant with anyone ...with that he gets up indicating end of discussion.

Next day he was in Mumbai train...He was happy that he is going to complete his dreams. His phone rings he saw caller ID Dracula uff.... He sighed frustratingly. He pressed answer button Hey maan baby I am going to London tonight I got a new contract...will miss u baby...ok sameera...ohh baby I told you so many times call me Sam and won't you miss me he rolled his eyes yes sam I will mis..even before he could complete ohh maan have to go...getting call from London...bye love u... He stared at his phone even being successful model why she wants to marry me...ufff Dracula kahi ki... He ignored all other things concentrates on his favourite hobby...observing things out of the window... Mumbai here I come ...

Precap: What do you think 😉 of course most awaiting the meeting.

Part 2

Ok guys done with first part...add a base line to every update that I m nervous...😆 because i m hell nervous...this was difficult to reverse the role of maan & geet...I know there must be some reverse role stories but concept is different here...so keep faith on me...Hope you are liking this...Like and comment😃 suggestions are most welcome😊sorry for any mistakes...
And those who want pm send me a buddy request😊

Edited by daredevilisback - 11 years ago

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_Maaneet_

@_Maaneet_

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Posted: 11 years ago

#225

Omg me first meri wish puri hogayi!!! 😲😆

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my maan, hayee looking so handsome 😳

now coming to update...

Great update but inta chotu sa kyu??? Bada dena next time se!!! Here maan seems totally different , like normal nice guys not my MSK type but still love him 😳

aww... He is engaged to sameera but doesn't like her, good!!! Maan's marrige with sameera kabhi nahi!!!

Maan calls her Dracula 😆

maan going to mumbai ,thank god dracula se durrr to meet his saccha pyaar geet!!!😳

Me confused now is maan the same guy which geet was thinking about in prologue, maan ko dekh kar ab aisa nahi lagta!!! 😕

Waiting for maaneet's meeting now!!!

So update soon!!!!

Edited by -MSKdeewani- - 11 years ago

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Bhanu

@Cherishh

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Posted: 11 years ago

#226

Awww...hayeee Mere Maan se start...the banner is hot and cute😉, I guess we gonna get a new banner for each update..

Maan and in hoshiyarpur...yeh ulta😲😆

eww he got engaged to her😡, but happy that he doesn't feel anything for her

He is going to mumbai..is he going to work in Geet's company, that would be interesting, though u haven't mentioned where Geet is staying but putting guessing Geet near beach and Maan to mumbai, but this theory will wrk only if its the present, not past of Maneet life and hoping that him in prologue is Maan😛😆

Sam and Dracula🤣...she perfectly is one, I already started hating her, but enjoying Maan's antics😆

yeh toh pura reverse roles, with their characters to the places they stay...

A very cool update dear...woh bhi Maan ka❤️

Edited by Cherishh - 11 years ago

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abhayprsingh

@abhayprsingh

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Posted: 11 years ago

#227

nice part..

maan geet k just opposite wahi roz ki stories se alag hai.. nd DRACULA!!😆

maaneet ko jldi se milwao ab..

dis means dat "HE" is nt maan..

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Bhanu

@Cherishh

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Posted: 11 years ago

#228

Originally posted by: Appy
koi sath nai hai rone ko..
na koi wajah khush hone ko...
jo mera tha hi nai us k lie roi..
kai baton me khush hui..

pr kyo?? kis lie??

vo to mera tha nai..
sth usne dia nai..

fir ab kyo??

badh chala vo mujhe chodh k..
saare waden sb kasmen tod k..
ab bs main hun akele..

pr haar na manungi main..
aage badhungi..
use jitna chaha ab nafrat karungi..
vo kashish vo tadap sb khtm ho gai..
ab nai rha kuch hmare darmiyaan..

kaisi hai??