MG*Bhula dena...new story link on 153...

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Prologue
Night of November, it was cold and freeze weather out...she step down of her car & came towards beach It's so cold out there still she did not felt anything cause she holds so much coldness in her heart it doesn't matters how the weather is . She walked lost in her own world oblivious to the other things around her she even didn't notice that people looking at her admiringly cause she is the youngest businesswoman who own the award of best businesswoman of nation some looking at her for autograph but she didn't even notice just walked out other side of beach to find some solace. People thought it was rude but they knew GEET HANDA is arrogant, cold hearted, short tempered businesswoman so they ignored...
Bhula dena mujhe
Hai alvida tujhe
Tujhe jeena hai mere bina
Safar yeh tera, yeh raasta tera
Tujhe jeena hai.. mere bina
She was staring at nowhere in particular. Her eyes are aching due to continue staring but she didn't blink... Because she knows if she blinks water will split away from her eyes in form tears. But Geet Handa is not weak to shed tears.
Ho teri saari shoharatein
Hai yeh duaa..
Tujhi pe saari rehamatein
Hai yeh duaa..
Tujhe jeena hai mere bina
Bhula dena mujhe
Hai alvida tujhe
Tujhe jeena hai mere bina...

Today is THE DAY when she lost what she loved so dearly. Today is the only day when she falls weak out of emotion. Today is the day when she lost HIM. Once upon time she loved him... loved him with all her heart. But now she hates him to the core. She hates him because he left her... Left her alone to die, to suffer . He promised her to live a life with her, to love her, to marry her, to have kids with her...she smiled bitterly thinking about those promises. Her heart cried as he broke his all promises. He forgot all those promises... Ohh I hate you so much she whispered. But she knows she can't hate him...she loved him beyond limits. She gulps the sob arising in her throat but alas the pain in her heart will never die. She knows he will not come back to her. But she will wait for him till the end of her life...

koi sath nai hai rone ko..
na koi wajah khush hone ko...
jo mera tha hi nai us k lie roi..
kai baton me khush hui..

pr kyo?? kis lie??

vo to mera tha nai..
sth usne dia nai..

fir ab kyo??

badh chala vo mujhe chodh k..
saare waden sb kasmen tod k..
ab bs main hun akele..


pr haar na manungi main..
aage badhungi..
use jitna chaha ab nafrat karungi..
vo kashish vo tadap sb khtm ho gai..
ab nai rha kuch hmare darmiyaan..
[poem by Appy... Love u sis❤️ for this beautiful poem 😊]



ok this is it...pheww...I know u all know me as a reader and cool spammer😉 Me too shocked that I too can write😲😆...plz don't hate me for this... 😉
Love u all...
Thank you...
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daredevilisback thumbnail
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Me finally back on IF😳...toh aise kaise res karne ka mauka chodati😆...mera bacha finally writer ban gaya

Loved the prologue👏 and ofcoures ur writing style too...aur abhi toh meri expectations bhi badh gayi hai😉...so be prepared wid awesome updates😳...becoz am a very bugging reader😆
Abt story, it sounds promising...geet is hurt and i know its maan😛...but make sure the reasons r ryt...kyuki mujhe negative maan pasand nahi😡...so writer jee, chahe jitna maaneet ko seperate karo par epilogue tak jarur mila dena😉...warna samjh le tera kya hoga🤣
All the best for this awesome story...n keep rocking...aur apni family ka ashirwad sada tere saath hai devil beta...
And lastly wana say,
that love u lots se bhi jyada😃
Edited by mahimaneet - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago
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jerry kya surprise dene waali ho

bataya nahi
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Posted: 11 years ago
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res...😉
😎

nice start yr... tu bhi writer bn gai..

hm hi akele unemployed hai!!!
koi nai..😉
koi dimag khane k lie bhi hona chahie...☺️

nice yr.. you showed geets condition amazingly..
or i hope he's nt maan!!!
Edited by Appy - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Congrats for becoming a writer this new year and congo-shongo for the first story❤️

Me still can't believe you have given it so very soon...muaaahhh DA🤗🤗🤗

You say that you can't right😲😡...gosh that was so beautiful

Emotions ek dum perfect, ganaaa ek dum perfect, though I haven't heard it before😆😛...ek dum perfect and challenging Prologue...I am looking forward to it

Waah...Geet ke intro se shuru, nice..woww she is successful, hope more than him😉...but me all set to beat the hell out of u for such a sad, sad prologue with a broken Geet, but knowing your love of Maaneet me sparing😉😆...

She loving him even though hate him for breaking the promises he made and breaking herself too shows the depth of her love...hope he gets lucky soon to be enveloped in her love's warmth soon😳

Now don't make us wait more and update soonn
Edited by Cherishh - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Originally posted by: mahimaneet

res😉🥳

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me finally back on IF😳...toh aise kaise res karne ka mauka chodati😆


hm to tere piche piche aae...😳
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Originally posted by: mahimaneet

res😉🥳

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me finally back on IF😳...toh aise kaise res karne ka mauka chodati😆


hm to tere piche piche aae...😳

mera net bht slow hai!!!🤢
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Posted: 11 years ago
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jerry tune tho surprise bomb daaldiya😆😆😆

wow iam very happy ab tubhi writer bangayi ho



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Congrats...🥳





Awesome start...




by the way who is HE




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