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Posted: 11 years ago

Part 10

(Past in green)

Geet was ready to go to office came downstairs. Geet bte, I need to tell you something... Dadima told Geet once she settled on dining table. Yes Dadima... Beta, do you remember Shila aunty? Woh tumhare papa ki bua... Geet nodded for continue... She met me at the temple yesterday... She was missing you. And... Dadima, What's the matter? hmm beta uski beti Aarti uski shadi ho gayi last week so kal woh reception ki party rakhna chahte hai... Geet looked at dadima waited for her to continue. With a pause Dadima continued Woh beta tum toh unke halat janti ho... And saare paise shadi me kharch ho gaye... Dadima... Geet said sternly indicating her to come to the point... How about reception party will be held in HM (Handa Mansion)? What!!!!This never gone happen Dadima... Bete humne promise kar dia unhe. Dadima how could you do this, You know I hate all these things... And should have to remind you that they didn't call you in wedding but now when they need us aur waise bhi you very well know dadima I don't like these types of functions... Beta one day you too have to go through all this rituals... That day will never come. She left the office with those cold words.

Maan, Is there anything you have to tell me? You look sad all the time... where is my buddy who loves to talk nonstop yaar? Adi asked. He was noticing Maan since Shimla... He was too much happy then and now too much sad. Nothing Adi... Maan tried to shrug but it's like Adi was adamant this time. No maan this time you have to tell me...what's the problem...? Adi... Whatever it was... it's finished now...and if anything happened I promise you will the first person to know it. Adi nodded understandingly left to his cubical...

Dadima was pacing in her room thinking about ways how to get Geet's consent regarding this reception party matter. She wants to give Geet a relation to call her own. Geet is getting away from every one day be day. She is all alone... Dadima knows this all suffocating her inside. She wanted a good future for Geet... And Geet is running away from every relation. She knows her past has left deep mark on her... but that does not mean she will not have good future. Dadima was determine with her thought this time... She wants to Geet come out of her shell... live her life... be happy again... Ufff... Iss ladki ko kaise samjhaye hum sighed feeling sad.

Geet was working heavily since Dadima has raised her marriage topic. How can Dadima think about my marriage? Does she really think I will able to move on? No dadima I can never forget him she whispered... Her reverie broke ringing of her phone Dadima I already told you my decision... I just wanted to remind you Geet this is related to your Papa. Agar aapke papa zinda hote toh who kya karte Geet? Bas itna hi kehna tha hume... Dadima waited for a minute for her reply but she didn't utter a word...Dadima sighed dejectedly she never gone change mind. She was about put the receiver down a broken voice stopped her from doing so Dadima...Geet beta, I am sorry... No Dadima, I am sorry... Tell them reception party will be organising in HM... ha bete...

Papa, find me... A shout with giggle of four year old Geet came from across for her papa. They were playing hide n seek... Geet baby... I can hear you, I will catch you soon. Her papa could see her though acting like playing searching for her opposite side. After ten minutes of their play finally her papa said Uff baby, I can't find you...come out.. you win. Yea yea...I won papa I won... you lose. Geet danced her victory dance. Her papa laughed whole heartedly seeing his baby so happy... Geet stopped her dance looked at him confusingly. Papa how can you laugh? You lost the game... Her papa chuckled at his cutipie. She is the only one who can fill his life with laughter after his wife. Baby, if I cry will you able to laugh and dance? Geet just closed her eyes and imagined her papa crying her tears start flowing with the thought only... Awww...rote nahi bachcha...Her papa took Geet in his arms who was sobbing by now ... after calming her down he continued... Baby the way you felt imaging me crying the same way I am laughed seeing you laughing, happy... Geet stared at her father getting his point to her maturity level. I love you papa... Geet said hugging her papa.

Geet tell us the name of superheroes you know? Teacher questioned little Geet. My papa... Geet told her teacher proudly. How? My papa brings me ice-cream & chocolates; he gives me all the gifts... He saves me from bad Miss. So he is My Superhero na...

I miss you papa... A tear rolled down from her eyes.

Adi I need best party designer in city. for which party ma'am? There is reception party in HM. Adi's eyes popped open hearing her answer... he laughed in style...he he but ma'am aapki toh shadi bhi nahi hui...Adii!!!!!! Ok ma'am...It will be done ma'am Geet nodded.

Precap: The function.

Part 11

I know this is small... will update again soon... so tell me how's this part... ? plz suggest if I am lacking somewhere.

I will tell you in example if anybody still has confusion with present and past...
from part 1 it is present...
past 2006
prologue 2010
present 2011

And green wala past is different obiviously when geet is small... The past which will be in 2006 that is the main past...I hope I cleared things here.

Do comment and like...

Thank you!!!

Edited by daredevilisback - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago
Hai mei maahan hu😎
see i proved it again 🤣

beautiful banner..
dadima is manofying geet to make her agree for reception party, but she didn't agreed!!!!
here maan is quite -quite nowdays, even adi to noticed it
when adi asked her denied it and said will tell him everything at right time!!!!!

geet agreed for reception party at HM because of her father's sake!!!

loved the past
beautiful bond between father and daughter!!!!!😳

loved the whole update!!!!!!

Edited by -MSKdeewani- - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago
chutku sa update from chutki...me liked this surprise update DA

The best part was Geet and her Dad moments❤️👍🏼

Emotional ones were the sad glimpse of Maan and the tear drop from Geet's eyes...they touched me


Reception thing was unexpected...are we going to get something interesting here I wonder

Banner was nice..par sad, sad...waiting for all the sadness to wash away from her life soon-soon😳

Thought Maan will reveal his feelings in front of Adi, but guess its a bit too soon to do so...glad to see Adi's concern for him
Edited by Cherishh - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago
Didn't knew u were updating...off to read
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Posted: 11 years ago
ab samajh gayi poori katha😉😆😆😆ab adi ko bhi doubt hone lagi hai kuch tho gadbud hai maan mein😛

so geet is very much attached to her father and dadima ne kya karne ki koshish karrahi hai poor dadi
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Posted: 11 years ago
I thought people only wanted 2 know when they r good!!!
Chalo ye bhi theak h..
Waiting for the next !!
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Posted: 11 years ago
res!!
abe bhule nai!!! tym nai mila...

is br to hm race me hi nai hai..😆

geet ko apne relatives nai pasand pr apne dad k lie maan gai..

geet missing her dad...

adi tu bht lucky hai..geet ne tjhe job se nai nikala!!!!
Edited by Appy - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago
kuch toh hai geet k past mein...jo geet ko aisa bana diye...

awesome n wonderful update...

loved it very much...

thank u very much fr d lovely update...

waiting fr d nxt prt eagerly...

continue soon plz...
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Posted: 11 years ago
eventhough it's a small update but it have touch my heart,,specially geet past with her papa😭😭😭..simply a beautiful memory..her papa is her hero...cant imagine her pain yaar..pls cont soon..
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Posted: 11 years ago
part 9
loved it
maan got call from sameera that reminded him he was engaged to her and he want to distance himself from geet ...he didn't know that if geet and he has future together geet will reciprocate his feelings so he decided to stay away from her...he even changed his team he dont want to be member of geet's team
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part 10
awesome loved it
adi asked maan what bothering him but maan said nothing to worry...and told.when time will come he is the first one to know
dadi want to help her relative to allow to do reception in HM mansion but geet was denied it
dadi called geet office and asked if her father is alive will he do like this ..geet agreed to help them and called adi to enquire about party organiser
geet remembering her days with her pappa...
eagerly waiting for the next part

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