VriMar TS - Yaariyan!

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Posted: 11 years ago
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Vrimar OS-Yaariyan
''Baarish''

Hello ppl...its me Ishita Sahni.. I knoe so
many of u ppl dint knoe me as m not a active member here.. So let me introduce
myself to u oll.,hi guyys M ishita sahni..Nd m a huge TaaRey & VriMar
fan...

So i wont irritate u frm my bak-bak nd will come straight to d point..

I was listening d song Yaariyaan from d film YAARIYAN nd at d same time i was stairing on my phone's wallpaper which is one of VriMar offscrean pic...All of sudden smething strike to my mind nd I thought to write an OS on VriMar..Its a short story completely based on my Imaginations..So if nyone has ny issue regarding d topic Plz stay away frm Reading nd commenting...If u like my work plz do Give ur Feedbacks.
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''CHAHTA HAI KITNA TUJHE,KHUD MAGAR NAHI JAAN SAKA...''
It was a rainy day...D month of August,wen most of d places in India were getting wet due to rains & enjoying d weather... In Mumbai
A flat in a building of 6floors in Bandra(W) side of d city...
A Guy was standing in d balcony of his flat..A coffee mug in his hand, enjoying d chilled weather due to Rain..It was not raining heavily bt d weather was pleasant.. The guy was having his coffee on d off day frm his work.
Although he is busy person aftrall he is one of d Tellywood star ''The
KunwarAmarjeet Singh''... He usually never takes leave from his work bt as of
today he was not willing to go nywhere..He wants to spend some time Alone with
himself..

It was almost abt 5months of off-aired of his first t.v. show.

He actually miss those 3 nd half years of tht time..All d
masti,dance,drama,fights nd each n everything which he has done tht time.As now
every person to which he had shared a very good bond,are busy wid their own
life nd no 1 is gonna bother abt him.Y would ny1 will ?? The kind of behaviour
he showed to every1..aftr tht is he expecting nything positive frm there
sides..

Bt today he was alone,missing every1 bt d most he was missing a person,who used
to b his onscrean g.f..She was not his best buddy or nything bt was special to
him.. bt d reason of her specialness was only known to him..No1 knoes whtz
going in his mind & heart..or may b he himself was confused tht time.

Bt now he is pretty sure abt his feelings regarding her..He was actually
missing her.Her every antics,her actions,her moves,her talks nd everything
related to her.He was missing to b wid her... Bt sometimes his so called Ego
was not letting him to confess his feelings.

Wen he was enjoying his coffee sitting on a couch,all of sudden he falls asleep
& d view in his front was d most beautiful view..It was out of dis
world..All d moments he spent wid her were coming infront of him as
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(M describing d flashback wid d song sequence i had mentioned
earlier...Yaariyaan song frm film yaariyaan-male version.Plz play d song in
background to feel d actuall emotions...)

<font color="#FF0000">Dil mera hai nasamajh kitna,

Besabr,ye bewakoof bada...

CHAAHTA HAI KITNA TUJHE,

KHUD MAGAR NAHI JAAN SAKAA...

{is dard-e-dil ki sifaarish,ab krde koi yaha..

Ke mil jaye ise wo baarish,jo bheega de puri tarah...} 2

Yaariyaan we...yaariyaan...

Kya hua asar tere saath rehkr na jaane,

Ki hosh mujhe na raha...

Lafj mere the zubaan pe aake ruke...,

Pr ho na sake wo bayaan...

Dadhkan tera hi naam jhane,

Ankhe bhi paigaam ye de, </font>

<font color="#FF0000">Teri nazar ka hi ye asar hai,mujhpe jo hua...

{Is dard-e-dil ki sifaarish , ab krde koi yaha...

Ke mil jaye ise wo baarish,jo bheega de puri tarah...} 2 </font>

He was dreaming of his special some1 bt unknown to him,his eyes were getting
wet...May b becoz dis time his eyes were also in his heart's favor nd want him
to accept his feelings.

Frst to himself den to nyone else...

He opened his eyes slowly nd was expecting to see tht special some1 in front of
him bt it was his badluck...

As his special some1 is far away from him...She was somewhere close to his
heart bt was far frm his view...

He neither tried to call her nor send ny text...He was not in touch wid her at
all..

Merely dey meet smetime,smewhere randomly becoz of their mutual frnds & at
ny media gathtogether... Rather den tht he never tries to contact her...</font>

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Bt now he was feeling guilty of his ''stay-away behaviour''...

He is realizing his mistake of taking her for-granted wen she was near nd close
to him..

Its not tht he fights wid her or nything bt its also true tht he never tries to
be wid her...

Bt as said ''der aaye,durust aaye'' finally he accepted his feelings nd he
wants to tell her abt his feelings...

May god help him to confess his love 4 her...

TO BE CONTINUE...
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[U]<font color="#FF0000">P.S:</font>Thank u so much 4 reading.I dont knoe how was it as it was jst my
imagination...Its d first time i had write something..

Plz do comment if u like...

My imagination ends here only..

U guyys must be thinking y i wrote To Be Continue in d last ??

Its bcoz Every new story starts frm d ending of d past story...May be i will
write it further in near future bt not sure...

Plz read it nd give ur feedbacks...</font>

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Cupcake. thumbnail
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Awesome start
amar realuze his mistake and going to confess
update next part soon
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Posted: 11 years ago
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good start, continue and pm me.


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Posted: 11 years ago
#4
Hi Ishita 🤗

Lovely OS 😃

Loved it 😛

You have beautifully penned . . .
Loved the way you have penned Rey's feelings 👏 👏

Please continue . . .
Give a happy ending . . .

Anyway, this won't happen in real 😒 at least in fiction

Thank you Asha for the pm 😊
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Posted: 11 years ago
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hi ishita...love ur TS...
finally amar realize his fellngs...nd going to confess..
pls continue it nd try to give a happy endng...at least in fiction vrimar will be together forever...
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Hey ashu thanks 4 pm
Hi ishita, nice os , beautifully written
Nice potray of rey feelings 😛
Its nice ki he is missing her
Waiting 4 his next move
Plz update soon
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Good one 😛
Hi ishita, yr 1st time writing is good
U write it beautifully 😛
Nice now rey is missing her
Realize her importance 😉
Waiting 4 his next move
So, update soon 😛
Hey ashu , thanks 4 pm me
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Posted: 11 years ago
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amazing update...
u described rey's feeling very well...

update soon...
Edited by mehreen_taarey - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Awww loved it.. fantastic... plz update sooon n pm
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Hi Ishita!
Loved the start of this TS!
Amar realizes his feelings is a big thing!
Can't wait for the next part!

Luv
Taanya

P.S
Asha thanks for the PM!

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