Aaslok new OS : once upon a story part 7 updated on page77 - Page 40

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Posted: 11 years ago
Nice update . She is faking memory loss waiting for update.
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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: dakshaavi

Nice update . She is faking memory loss waiting for update.

she is faking ??????????
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Posted: 11 years ago
Lovely updt as usual :)
So finally astha said something.
Can't this shlok undestand that he loves her. Stupid.
Btwn thanks for d pm.
Do continue soon.
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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: fiza1995

Lovely updt as usual :)
So finally astha said something.
Can't this shlok undestand that he loves her. Stupid.
Btwn thanks for d pm.
Do continue soon.

thanks and love ya
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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: roshanii

hey thanks dear and where is your detailed comment😆
i am waiting
😉😃


I thought this was detailed enough 😉. Kiddng! Didn't read through this yet. Commented on your other work too 😊.
Edited by ipkkndfollower - 11 years ago
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Originally posted by: ipkkndfollower


I thought this was detailed enough 😉. Kiddng! Didn't read through this yet. Commented on your other work too 😊.

thanks buddy love ya but dont forget me😊
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Posted: 11 years ago
omg dat was such an awesome update
loved it
ok so finally astha has gain her consciousness and she just remembers the name shlok dat is the irony of life the person who wanted to destroy her life is the one nw going to help her live her life and try to make her remember
lets see hw shlok deals with this situation
do update soon
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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: ruhakhan

omg dat was such an awesome update

loved it
ok so finally astha has gain her consciousness and she just remembers the name shlok dat is the irony of life the person who wanted to destroy her life is the one nw going to help her live her life and try to make her remember
lets see hw shlok deals with this situation
do update soon

shlok will soon learn his lesson
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Posted: 11 years ago
happy new year guys
wish you a great and happiest next year for u and your family
may new year bring your all good luck😊
this one is bit Short but i promise for the next big wala part.
comment also please...

Part6:

"You are my husband? Really?" she widened her eyes. Shlok looked her with pale face

"Don't you remember anything? You are my wife...you said always that you loved me most in the world" he told her and held her hand.

"I said it..." she asked with surprise while Shlok nodded his head

"Yes" he caressed her face while she jerked his hand

"What did you say always?" she asked with his twinkling eyes. She looked him constantly. Shlok gulped with her question

"I said... I said ..." He looked her. She gazed him and waiting for his answer.

"I said nothing" he quickly said and held her shoulder "now you should do rest" he helped her to lay on the bad. He took her pillow under her head. Aastha was looking him with confusion

"Yes you are my husband that's why I remember only your name. Maybe I love you really" she said him. He was speechless.

"Do you want something?" he asked while she shook her head in no

"You are so silent. I think you did not care of me much." She again asked while he became uncomfortable with her questions. He signaled to the nurse to take care of her and went to the Doctor

"Yes Mr. Agnihotri I am waiting for you" Doctor saw him and said. He came and set on the chair

"Doctor she doesn't has remembered anything except my name. She does not even remember my face. When will she get back her memory?" he asked to the doctor.

"Mr. Agnihotri. She has a head stroke so she will take time to get back normal. Now I can just say that she need you care and love to be healthy" he said to him and smiled.

"My love and care..." he thought for a second and compose himself "yes doctor. You are right" he said and gave handshake to Doctor and went out.

He walked towards Aastha room. He made him ready for Aastha's questions. He did not want to go to her but he had to take her care so he went.

*****************...************************

"I don't like this place. Take me with you to your place" Aastha made her face to Shlok. He fed her soup. He looked her with surprise. It had been almost a week. He cared her only. He forgot his office and his family. Varad and Kavya made a visit often. Her parents visited her daily but she did not recognize them yet. She became friendly with Kavya. Her cute antics with kavya made Shlok smiled sometimes. He was so childish.

"When will you take me home?" she again asked him while he looked her and said, "Don't worry, I asked to doctor" he caressed her face. She smiled and then made a face again

"I don't like this soup also. Please give me something else" she shook her head when he brought the spoon close to her mouth, and demanded to him. Shlok was so surprised at that moment. She was looking like a stubborn child at the time. He was so helpless. Nurse went out when Aastha gazed him. Shlok looked at her. She spoke so much in this state also. While he remained silent most of the time. He changed a lot in this short time.

He looked at her as if he wanted to ask what she was looking. Aastha glared him and questioned

"You are really my husband?" she asked while Shlok became anxious. He asked the question instead of reply

"Why are you asking this?" Aastha looked at him and replied; "because I don't feel that you are really my husband." she looked out from the window. Shlok set close to her and held her hand.

"I am your lawfully wedded husband. Just believe me," he said with emotion in his voice while Aastha looked at him with prickling eyes

"Then prove it..." She glared him while he became stunned for a second. What did she want? She wanted his love. She wanted her right. She was not old Aastha. She was a changed person completely. The old Aastha was not bold enough to claim her love and anything from Shlok. He thought for a while. She looked him continuously. He bent to close her and cupped her face. She closed her eyes when his hot breathe touched her soft pink petals slowly. She blushed badly and turned her face in other side.

"You asked to prove it. I proved now do you believe this?" he asked huskily while Aastha was busy to carrying her unsettled breath. Shlok looked at her and he could not remove his eyes from her face. He felt suddenly a new feeling in his heart for her. He gazed her blushed face. Her face turned red and she could not match her sight with him. Suddenly he wanted badly the three magical words from her mouth, which she always said to him before even between her bad interactions.

"Aastha please say that you love me like you said before" he said in his ear while she turned down her face and told him

"First you say that you love me. You told me that you never said me this before so now you say me first then I will say you" she smiled and turned the table to him

"I ...I ...I...lo..." he tried hard to say but he could not say that properly. He became irritated with himself.

"Why he cannot tell the three damn words to her. He lied her many time before but now why he cannot say that" he thought and muttered on himself.

"What happened?" she shook his hand. He turned towards her and tried to diverted her attention

"Hey I have to meet with doctor, I will come back in 15 min" he said and walked out from the room. Aastha smiled wholehearted.

"You will say this to me very soon. I can see love for me in your eyes." she said in her mind and laid back.

*************...******************

Edited by roshanii - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago
Lovely update. Thanks for second gift

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