Aaslok new OS : once upon a story part 7 updated on page77

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Posted: 11 years ago
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hey guys...😊
as per current track i have a thought in my mind and i just want to share that with you so here i present my new Os upon Aaslok so enjoy and tell me also how is it...
guys please give your comment whether like or dislike 😊
so ...keep reading and keep commenting😊
one more thing i want to know the reaction so that one is little short or just intro part if you will guys like it then i will update next part ...
till then please read it ...😊

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part 6: https://www.indiaforums.com/forum/post/98744401
part 7: https://www.india-forums.com/forum_posts.asp?TID=3847190&TPN=77&#p100133855

PROLOUGE

"There is the height of torture now...it is my turn now to show you your real face Mr. Shlok Agnihotri😔. Until now, I suffered a lot due to you but now it is your turn. Now I will live your house according to you itself but you will want to leave me then... See what I can do now🤢" Aastha thought in her mind and wiped her tear from her eyes.

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" Aastha we have to go to honeymoon dear you remember na😈" Shlok smirked slyly at her. Aastha smiled little bitšŸ˜‰.

"Yes my dear husband. As you said... I packed my bag for this.. I am also very excited to go to our honeymoon. Look at me how happy I am." Aastha also said cunningly, when Shlok gave a confused look. Was his plan backfired to him or anything else? He could not understand what that was.

"Don't look me like this...I realized that if I have to survive then I should follow all your order perfectly" Aastha happily said but her heart was weeping on her fake emotions. She did not like pretend but she had to do this.

" okkk...then take off my shoes.." shlok said again smirked because he knew that Aastha never like that.

"Oh dead meat now it will take all your finesse now. You can never win over me," Shlok thought in his mind with craftiness.

"Yes sure I was waiting for your order to this. It is my primary duty. Sit down and relax I am taking off your shoes. I know you are very tired and your hands must be aching." Aastha constant chattered and was feeling like previous Aastha before marriage and it was not going well with Shlok. He irked with her behavior. He shouted at her

"Stop all this crap. I can do it myself. You get lost and get a coffee for me. Didn't you learn any manners that whenever your husband comes back in home you should ask for some refreshment" he scolded her

"OMG you are absolutely right. How can I forget this, please punish me for this mistake if you want. I am just back in two minutes." Aastha continuously annoyed Shlok with her behavior. He was surprised how could be this happen overnight. How could be she change so fast in one night? She was entirely different from this. He knew that very well that why he enjoyed her pain. But Now she gave him a headache.

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Posted: 11 years ago
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please continue very nice start, i even imagined what shlocks reaction would be if she did something like this, and i love how you made him stop taking of his shoes...waiting for more
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like her reactions šŸ˜†šŸ˜†
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Originally posted by: latha_555

please continue very nice start, i even imagined what shlocks reaction would be if she did something like this, and i love how you made him stop taking of her shoes...waiting for more

thanx and you will find more interesting in next
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Originally posted by: Serviana

like her reactions šŸ˜†šŸ˜†

you like it thank u very much
love ya
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thank u
love u dear
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hahahahahaaa Awesomee yaaar šŸ˜†
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Originally posted by: .Siham.

hahahahahaaa Awesomee yaaar šŸ˜†

yeee you guys like it thanks😊
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Originally posted by: roshanii

yeee you guys like it thanks😊



Aashta should dooo this šŸ˜†
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Originally posted by: .Siham.



Aashta should dooo this šŸ˜†

may be after all that update CV will get any ideašŸ˜†

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