Aaslok new OS : once upon a story part 7 updated on page77 - Page 39

Originally posted by: Prasai

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All positive characters is a plus.. And shlok not yet known...nice way to portray...

The love depends..loved it again your skills amaze me,.

Very nice imaginations like reality...great skills you have...

oath that I will save her until seven births so it is my duty as a husband"

am Shlok Agnihotri and I am very possessive for everything related to me

"Please tell me who are you and what connection between us is" Shlok hold her hand and told

" Shlok Agnihotri ...your husband and you are Aastha Agnihotri my wife.

Loved the above ones felt connected to present track..

Lovely.

Hey! I finally caught up with this story. What a twist! Shlok is still confused with his feelings. But I loved this twist of Astha forgetting everything. Poor girl I think for a while it's good for her to relax without all the baggage. Great update.

Thanks for pm and lovely update

awww...it was so emotinal but awesome update

every emotion beautifully written

update soon

awesome part...
loved it
so she forgot everyone and only remember shlok name
continue soon
thanks for the pm

Originally posted by: meerab...

awww...it was so emotinal but awesome update

every emotion beautifully written

update soon

Originally posted by: niki795

awesome part...
loved it
so she forgot everyone and only remember shlok name
continue soon
thanks for the pm

Hi new friend if get time i will read all ur ff and thank u for pm me

Originally posted by: Rekha-radev

Hi new friend if get time i will read all ur ff and thank u for pm me