I love you damm it (AkDhaOS)

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hello every one am back ..tho ye mera phele Os hey..before this i never tried my hand in One Shot ...tho wish me luck yaar..😆😆 i know sab yehi soch rahi hongey ye per aajayi ..humey mar waney ..but trust me guys mera wo erada nahi tha ..but kya karu jab meri dimag me idea athey hey tho kud ko rok nahi patihi hu...any ways phele tho sab ko Advance happi new year .. .hope you all well like this one...and i don't know how the OS will come out so please don't hit me if it is not upto the mark..i know mey bohat bak bak karahi hu..chalo am i will stop it here ...

I LOVE YOU DAMM IT (AKDHA OS)

jalan wahi hotha hey jaha mohabat hothi hey ...

-our sweet salima begum

"why is jodha begum so interested in helping my bestie??? why is she being so goody goody to him ??"i thought to myself in really pissed off mood... and that is of curse because of jodha begum ...me,jodha and my bestie haider were walking in the garden since few hours but she is not even giving an damm to me and is go on talking with my childhood friend since hours and is so happy in showing him all around...am really not able to understand why she is doing all this?? do she want to taken an revenge on me for mistaking her and using benazir to make her jealous??so as a revenge for this she want to make me jealous?? .Allahh why is she testing my patiences??here am controlling my angry with an great difficult ..and look she is hell bent on making me jealous and angry..what was it necessary to fall into his arms by acting as if she lost her balance ..wait a minute she was not acting ..she really did lost her balance..and she got an injure on her leg too.. dam me what all shit am i thinking ?? while i was lost in my thoughts haider helped her to sit on the steps and started check out her wound ...then she try to get up but she was not able to ..without think a minute i lifted her in my arms and marched towards her room and as you people may be guessing yes she did protest against me lifting her in my arm ..but i didn't give an daam to her protesting .i place her on the bed and order for an hakim to cure her..

The hakim put an bandage on her leg and give her an medicine which made her sleep ..all this time i was near her .caressing her face and locking her hair behind her ear..lost in her beauty ..admiring her.. i must agree she is the most beautiful woman i have ever meet..not only external beauty but internally too..she is the perfect example for beauty with brains..she was the my only begum who has guts to stand against me..she is one who made me realize that i do have an heart which beats only for her.the problem with her is she never ever understands my love and what i feel for her just loves to fight with me..well i do enjoy pulling her legs and her shudh hindi bashan's ...am not complaining about it as she looks great even in angry you see...but i didn't like what she was doing since few day ..she was being so close with haider .she cooked food for him , she showed him the whole place ,and even sang an song for him...which are the reason of my current state...she slowly opened her eye..i was lost in her eyes..we shared an small eye lock but soon i noticed that she was staring at me as if i have done an great crime in the world...thats because my hand was still on her forehead caressing it ..i remove it with an jerk ..she sat up and asked me"shansha ..what are you doing here??","well .umm you are injured right ?so i was taking care of yo u "i said," as if you care "she mummed."what do you mean?"i said"i just mean that you may be having much more important appointments with your khaas ones ..then why are you so here canceling them all and BTW why are you so concentrated about me?i don't mean any thing to you right?"jodha reply with all the harshness she can..i can see she was hurt by behavior toward her ..but how do i tell her that now i understood what was she undergoing those days..."listen jodha..i know .."before i could complete she strated talking"look shansha i not at al interested in what your talking i just wanna be alone just leave me alone..i don't wanna care for them ..who don't care for me"said jodha saying so she turned her face aside.. i held by her shoulder and made her face me. ."who said i don't care for you ..who said that you meant nothing to me?? you know without you how do i feel??do you know if you ignore me how do i feel?? do you how do i feel i see you talking to some other guys?? i never thought jodhathat i would be possive for an woman in my life ..but see today am possive for you ...jodha i may fight with you ..insult you or hate you ..but i can't ignore you ...and now don't lie jodha that you don't like or don't have feeling for me if that was the truth you would never be jealous of benazir..you would never risk your life for mine...and this tear which are rolling from your eye would never show up ..you are an important part of my life without which my whole life incomplete..yes jodha..i feel incomplete without you ..do you know why???"i almost shouted at her...she nodded her head in no .."Becoz I LOVE YOU DAMM IT" i shouted at top of my voice

Tears were rolled down from both of our faces..i saw love for me in her eyes and i can consider it an yes for her side..with out waste an minute her hugged her as tight as i can .. in a way that i would never ever let her go ..after few minutes i let her loose just to hear those three magical words from her mouth " I LOVE YOU TOO SHANSHA"she said it through hersmile in between the tears..i cupped her face and kissed on her on her forehead and pulled her again into an tight hug from which no one could ever separate us...

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Pheww.. hogai hey ..i know it was really an piece of shit ...muje nahi pata meney kya lekahey ..but ah kuch tho leka hey meney ..😆😆agar apko meri ye ajebsa Os pasand aya tho like aur comment bhi karado..plejj..agar pasand nahi aya tho bhi comment karo ...and ah ignore typos as i have not done any proof reading ..please do like and comment ..criticism and suggestion are most welcomed...

With Lots Of Love,

Renu..

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Originally posted by: SShreShthA

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Originally posted by: sweetystubborn

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Superb dearu vearu 👏👏

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