SwaRon OS - The 'Object' of my affection

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rope_and_anchor

@rope_and_anchor

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Posted: 11 years ago

#31

Can I just tell you, it was BEAUTIFUL, and beyond! SwaRon love story in itself is unique, and this brilliance of an OS that you wrote brought that out perfectly.. Like most others, I was caught in your words right from line 1.. Rarely does it happen to me, when I'm reading something that is not on paper and print! I was aware of nothing going on around me, and the sheer flow and beauty of the story-and the stroke of creativity you used to employ the pencil to narrate this story for us.. It was out of this world,believe me! The story is well known to us-one that we are aware of, every awaken and sleeping moment of our lives, and yet reading it as written by you-it still felt so fresh...bless you!
Plz update soon, and kindly PM me if possible... :)

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Ananya

@ExpectoPatronus

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Posted: 11 years ago

#32

update kr... plzzz 😭

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Anonymous--

@Anonymous--

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Posted: 11 years ago

#33

Oh My God everybody thank you so much for appreciating this OS🤗It means a lot to me when you'll say you guys liked my OS. I will update it as soon as this festive season gets over and I have some time to myself😊 And Meera di, your suggestion is really nice. I'm already gettting idead about incorporating Sharon's POV into the story. Hope the 2nd part meets expectations. Thank you once again, all of you. I love you all🤗❤️

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Sanskriti

@SanskritiS

Rocker

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Posted: 11 years ago

#34

Awesome Os 😊

well penned

Continue soon

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Phosphenes

@Phosphenes

Voyager

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Posted: 11 years ago

#35

Dude you have a way with words. This was so confident and the storytelling was baap!! The pencil narrating the SwaRon story was very very engrossing!! There were moments when i was chuckling at the clever and funny lines you wrote. Like "but then Ramu kaka really wasn't aware of what he did in his room. Except that he made a lot of noise while doing so." EPIC. xD

Well like everyone, i was hooked from line 1. I cannot believe the way you've so beautifully given us a part of their story that we could only imagine. I mean, the way you've written about how he saw her, how she taught him to dance, how she inspired him, how he saw her dancing alone in the rehearsal hall but later began missing it when everyone started dancing with her there and he could no longer see her dancing alone, the only time she used to be herself, away from all the attitude throwing..when she was just Sharon. It was beautiful, the way you've written it. Khoobsurat. I loved it. I loved it tooo much.

Cannot wait for the next part!! Please please update soon!! ^_^

Edited by D3fication - 11 years ago

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Phosphenes

@Phosphenes

Voyager

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Posted: 11 years ago

#36

Originally posted by: roshni_rj
Can I just tell you, it was BEAUTIFUL, and beyond! SwaRon love story in itself is unique, and this brilliance of an OS that you wrote brought that out perfectly.. Like most others, I was caught in your words right from line 1.. Rarely does it happen to me, when I'm reading something that is not on paper and print! I was aware of nothing going on around me, and the sheer flow and beauty of the story-and the stroke of creativity you used to employ the pencil to narrate this story for us.. It was out of this world,believe me! The story is well known to us-one that we are aware of, every awaken and sleeping moment of our lives, and yet reading it as written by you-it still felt so fresh...bless you!
Plz update soon, and kindly PM me if possible... :)

So True. SO TRUE.

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Shardha_Swaron

@Shardha_Swaron

Dazzler

Posted: 11 years ago

#37

It was awesome
Beautifully written
SwaRon love story from pencil POV superb
Its a master piece
I love to read next part
Please update it soon
You hv penned down the emotions, love, pain so beautifully
I dont hv word to describe
It was just Superb 👏