SwaRon OS - The 'Object' of my affection

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934800

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Posted: 11 years ago

#11

res 😊

forgot abt this res
commented on page 3 😃

Edited by Swaron.maniac - 11 years ago

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User123

@UserM123

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Posted: 11 years ago

#12

RES :)

Okay, so i have just one word for this master piece, BEAUTIFUL! 😳

I loved it, It was just perfect!

I was hooked to it, from the First line to the last! 😊

IT was just pure Perfection!

Great Os! ❤️

A Superb Piece of Work Neeti 🤗

Love it 😛

Love,Mini 😳

Edited by --MiNi-- - 11 years ago

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rosy kohli

@rosyrkohli

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Posted: 11 years ago

#13

res

unres

cong8 neeti for writing so Marvelously

i hav never seen such intense piece

thr were lines used in this os tat just stayed wit me

''Her eyes were what intrigued him and made him continue to stare at her for God-knows-how-long.It was as if her eyes could speak a thousand words which her mouth never spoke''

they reflected how much swayam saw thru her n how much passionately he was in luv wit her

.''He sighed sadly, cradling me softly in his hand, as if I was Sharon herself. ''

these lines were beautiful .

swayam's side of the story was very seamlessly written

he discovering about dance n his luv for sharon

was amazinggly potrayed

i m grateful tat we have such a strong voice in indiaforums 👏

do write more n dont forget to pm me

i wud appreciate tat 🤗

Edited by rosyrkohli - 11 years ago

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medha

@ToujoursPur

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+ 2

Posted: 11 years ago

#14

neeti---

i dont know what to say---

this one just out of the world---a very very well documented observation of the love story which glues me to the tv come 7 pm...

and from a pencil!

just my salute for writing this well---and please continue soon.

your story is so nicely written that its like watching videos on youtube of tanha.

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lakshmi

@ShasthaaPriyaa

Dazzler

+ 2

Posted: 11 years ago

#15

Wow!i mean just amazing yaar!I seriously do not know how to appreciate your beautiful writing!I loved it!Do post part 2 soon.😃I could imagine the expressions of Tanha while reading your story!Loved it.😃

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Destiny_015

@Destiny_015

Sparkler

Posted: 11 years ago

#16

Neeti neeti neeti! What did u do bak there dude! Im having my xamz round the corner nd wasnt planning to read anything. Bt then I started reading this and I got stuck to it like a fevicol. :P nd got so so so engrossed that I ended up reading this thrice bak to bak. This is simply narration at its best. The flow that the OS has is simply wonderful. Nd its written brilliantly. U were always a wonderful writer and this write up of urs is simply ur BEST. Such a innovative concept and such a unique potrayal of the SwaRon story. And being a die-hard Swayam fan this was a huge treat. The Swayam in ur OS is the exact replica of what he actually is. The OS had signature Swayam. And u have maintained and outstandingly portrayed that in every stage. I can't tell u how much I loved the journey from the Sharon's box to Sharon's corner. So so so Swayamish. His journey towards becoming a dancer. Discovering himself. And above all his growing love for Sharon. U gave us very beautfiul view of Swayam's initial 2years of Swayam's 5 saal ka pyaar. I so so so loved it. eagerly waiting for the 2nd part. Once again a BRILLIANT PIECE OF WRITING!

Edited by tannu_swayam - 11 years ago

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934800

Hibernated

Posted: 11 years ago

#17

hats off to you for coming up with such a brilliant and unique concept, did i ever read something of this sort before ? let me think (thinking) aaa ..nop never ever i ready anything like that so unique, mind blowing concept a story from a sharon's pencil's point of view, which actually was describing swayamz feeling and his journey.

i totally loved how you warped almost all the important memories of swaron like sharon's corner, secret admirer and all, and my God so beautifully written. absolutely loved reading 1st part..very excited to read further. i must say u r a great story teller.

love Ammie 😊

Edited by Swaron.maniac - 11 years ago

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kapoormenka

@kapoormenka

Rocker

Posted: 11 years ago

#18

Only one word to describe this OS KHOOBSURAT...

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meenal singh

@swaron_arshi_07

Navigator

Posted: 11 years ago

#19

it was great

start o end it was amazing to read it

unique idea

awesome way of expressing

the start was very interesting

do update soon

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Sunil

@Suni1986

Sparkler

+ 2

Posted: 11 years ago

#20

Superb update
It was exact replica of Swaron story bt third person POV give life to this story.
Amazingly u penned down all ur emotions in dis update.
I love d whole update

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