SwaRon OS - The 'Object' of my affection

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Amirita4

@Amirita4

Dazzler

+ 2

Posted: 11 years ago

#21

i m speechless 😲

i luved it sooo much 👏

i always wanted to knw pre D3 swaron story.. n here it was soo perfect... cant even imagine dat part any other way...
n god keeping pencil as the narrator was so creative 👏
want the 2nd part soon pleaseee...

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prakriti mondal

@prakriti4u

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Posted: 11 years ago

#22

omg neeti this was freaking outstanding! 😲
take a bow yaa!! hats off 👏
the way u wrote it i am just speechless man!
i never thought a story from a simple pencil's POV can be this magical...
simply amazing it was..frm the start till the end it was simply magnificent.. out of world way of writting! 👏
the way you narrated the whole thing with so many emotions wow simply wow! and the most amusing thing is it's frm a pencil's POV... u killed it re! awesome it was 🤗

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Ananya

@ExpectoPatronus

Dazzler

+ 2

Posted: 11 years ago

#23

amazing... want part 2 soon... plzzz

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Deepika

@_Deepika_

Sparkler

+ 4

Posted: 11 years ago

#24

Neets..swthrt...i am at loss of words...seriously...this is a masterpiece...you made me realize why do i love SwaRon so much...those memories of this fairy tale...how he took her as his inspiration...in a way a new Swayam took birth when he met Sharon...he took a re-birth when she broke his heart ...

Coming to the style of writing...girl...this is your best work till date...i have told this to you already ...but i wont mind repeating myself...you are one of favorite writers ...the story..the concept...the idea...the treatment...how u handled the basic essence of SwaRon love by taking her pencil as the narrator...the flow ..the flow ...it just flowed ...your writing was so engrossing..i felt like i am looking at swayam along with her pencil...

You are a natural writer...so glad to see you writing after long time...please update soon...will be waiting😳

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sanjana_D3

@sanjana_D3

Voyager

+ 2

Posted: 11 years ago

#25

WOW This is one of the most unique and interesting OS's i have ever read

Swayams unconditional love for her is portrayed in such a powerful way throughout the OS

The concept is different and i love it :)

Cant wait for part 2 😃

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Mihika

@Legilimens.

Rocker

+ 5

Posted: 11 years ago

#26

Neetali I read this in my class and was grinning like an idiot throughout! I told you yesterday on whatsapp only ki mujhe yeh kaisa laga ! So I will not say it here :) 😛😛

I liked the OS! Concept thoda ajeeb sa tha, but execution, brilliant! The whole thing coming out from a pencils POV is what made it superrr cute <3

Loved it. Part two jaldi update kijiye. 😊😊😊

Pleeejjj... puppy face!

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veronica

@SwaRon_rocks

Rocker

Posted: 11 years ago

#27

Loved the os..

first i thought- a pencil's pov..it will be weird

but this turned out to be brilliant work..the narrative simply added to the charm!

About rest..have no words to describe it..beautiful way of writing:)

Plz plzzz update soon.

-Veronica

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Rajeshwari

@-Raj-

Dazzler

Posted: 11 years ago

#28

Brilliant os!!!

Magical and unique!!

Want a continuation to this one!!

Ty for the pm.

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Suhana

@Summer_Rain

Sparkler

+ 11

Posted: 11 years ago

#29

wat do i say neeti.. narrating an whole story from the pov of an pencil

hats off dude.. its indeed an mastepeice and best work by u u got me so into the whole story word by word i could imagine those happening right infront of my eyes.. its beautiful :)

eagerly waiting for next part continue soon..

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Yogini

@yogini64

Sparkler

+ 3

Posted: 11 years ago

#30

Omg... dude its awesome...😃

Fab work neeti... really loved it... 😊

You've written the unsaid story of swaron... right from the starting...😛

Showing that the inspiration of swayam's dance is sharon itself... wat a thought.. 👏

Awwwiiie.. pink pencil wid a furr... princess style.. object to be preserved...❤️

Well.. I really think.. agar cv's ne ye os padh liya to aisa hi kuch object swaron corner me zaroor pahucha denge... 😉

Swayam's 'dil ka haal' is very well shown... he doesn't love her... he literally worships her...

Awesome... update it soon... 😊

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