virman ss bad boy CHAP 19 pg 93 (9 may)

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Swati

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Posted: 12 years ago

#591

Dhasu update. ...

lyk beeji-virat convo..

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Jannat

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Posted: 12 years ago

#592

Dadi is totally mast
awesome update Naina
loved it
waiting for next part
update soon 😃

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kateyes

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Posted: 12 years ago

#593

I m back with my comments
Part 14 : Halirious update naina it was mindblowing 🤣🤣🤣 luved shabbo n virat convo dat was natural like wht dey r talking about princi is directly cuming 4rm dere heart ( buddha bht chant hai , saale ko goli maar doon maan krta hai )🤣🤣🤣 n dis update reminded me salman movie scene maanvi was no less in naughtiness making fool of his father 4 virat but i m wondering y her father hadn't recognise her n she 2 kiss him infront of her father 😳😳 not even giving princi a chance 2 talk poor princi n d end was unexpected 😳😳😳😳😳
Part 15 : Amazing update tell me seriously dey r in college rite but virman r always bzy with eachother don't dey hav classes or dey r happy only in dere classes y a father like madan will not angry whn his daughter is not attending classes n dat 2 4 virat whom he hate d most , poor maanvi was helping her viru boy but her father misunderstood everything now he really thinks virat is a bad brat boy who is just using his daughter just 4 his fun n d way she was behaving infront of him like she can owns everything bcoz of her status every father will get worry 4 his daughter n maanvi got hurted with dose words shabbo consoling part was nice 😊 virat was so much possesive 4 his grl ( kamine ja k pani le aa ) but he was guilty 4 hiding d truth 4 her hope he told her everything before she cum 2 know 4rm sumwhere else n her father doubts turn in reality
Part 16 : Nice update y virman make my poor shabbo slaughter everytym ( shabbo ko b gf de do yaar otherwise virman will eat his mind poor soul ) , oh suddenly bad boy turns into gud boy hope he will not create any mess 4 maanvi bcoz he is using 2 much butter
Part 17 : Fabulous update naina ⭐️⭐️⭐️⭐️⭐️ i swear if any1 hav grandmother like maanvi's den dere is no need 2 use d butter ( yahan wo haal hai charon ugliyan ghee mein or sar kharahi mein ) 🤣 poor maanvi was hell embrassed n virat was enjoying it like he don't hav 2 do anything he got approval in first meeting no no no not approval proposal n insist of making madan like him he wants maanvi's beeji against his son i just luved it 😃😃😃😃😃😃

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nahaananya

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Posted: 12 years ago

#594

Hawww manvi finally feeling a bit insecured and virat's guilt is also overpowering him... madan is somewhat right I think... but I think virat will manaofy manvi even if she comes to knw d truth ... But stil virat didnnt do it fair... but 1 thing is satisfying dat he loves manvi a lot...

Wow virat puttar beeji ke samne ekdm good boy and beeji bhi lagta hai kafi impress ho rhi hai...DUSHMAN KA DUSHMAN DOST line cracked me up hahhahha... and that THIRD ANGLE wala line also was hilarious by god hehhehhe

Ufff really hilarious yaar naina...beeji is so funny ...apni hi poti ki setting kara rhi hai hahhah ....kaisi ladki pasand hai...?? ya ladke pasand hai tujhe...??? kya line hai yaar maza aa gaya ...and den beeji asking KITNE GAADI HAI ...omg she is so funny and jolly...ab to ana jana laga rahega...lets c how the events turn up to be

Amazing yaar naina...jaldi continue...and thnx fr ur regular pms..and am sowiee for not able to coment

Love take care anne

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nidhiagarwal

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Posted: 12 years ago

#595

nice update and the beeji was awesome

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naina

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Posted: 11 years ago

#596

PART 18

~~~ this is one is for you MEERA... you asked me if i could updt bad boy n when i opened that text document, i saw that i have written the next chap already but i think i never posted it... 😳

that night
virat : so jaan... enjoying huh...??
manvi took the mobile away from her ear and looked angrily it...
virat : mannuuu...
manvi : dont irritate me virat...
virat : i had fun today... thanks to you darling...
virat was enjoying it... he was full on in teasing manvi mode.
manvi : it was my mistake... i should have never taken you... beeji will now talk about you in front of dad and the hell will broke loose.
virat : i dont care sweetheart... and this time also your oldie will lose...
manvi : stop calling him names... he is my dad...
virat : but remember i am your boyfriend... i love you more than that oldie can...
manvi : viratt...
virat : what virat...?? i love you more than that khadus...
manvi : what do you mean...?? dad really loves me and no one... no one can ever love me more than him...
virat : but i do... i will prove it to you if you want...
manvi : ohh god please... prove karne ke chakar mein tum phir phasaoge mujhe...
virat : but i love you more manna...
manvi : i believe you... okk i trust you mr. virat vadera...
virat : good baby... now go grab your food and once you return, do call me...
manvi : ok... bye...
virat : bye...

manvi sighed and went out of her room. she saw beeji saying something madan and he seemed to agree to her on that. manvi gulped down the lump she formed at the back of her throat and made her way downstairs.
manvi : good evening dad...
madan : good evening...
beeji : yahan aa mannu puttar...
manvi : ji..
manvi sat near beeji and madan asked her something...
madan : i hope you reached on time ms. chaudhary...
manvi : yes dad...
beeji noticed that madan didnt look at manvi and manvi also looked sad.
beeji : ki ho rahi hai...??? (what is happening here...??)
manvi : kuch nahi beeji...
beeji : bol madan...
madan : beeji kuch theek nahi hai... aap hi samjhaie manvi ko...
manvi looked down... it was really unexpected... it is not what she thought would happen. she thought it would be fun but to her surprise, it would turn out to be something major.
beeji : kya...??? bol na kya hua...??? (tell me clearly what is wrong...)
madan : meri beti... meri beti hi kisi awaara ladke ke pyaar mein pagal ho gayi hai aur main... main beeji kuch nahi kar paa raha...
manvi : wo awaara nahi hai...
manvi couldnt take it... she will take any shit about herself but not a word against virat... not a word against the guy she loves to death.

beeji was really not liking this. she came here to spend time with her family and see them doing well in their lives... she wanted to see their happy smiling faces but...
beeji : madan ye tu... manvi tu bol...
manvi : beeji... beeji virat aisa nahi hai... aap mili na usse aaj... wo waisa nahi hai jaisa dad sochte hain... wo.. wo virat ke baare mein opinion bna chuke hain...
madan : im not being judgemental ms. chaudhary... that boy isnt good for you... infact he isnt good for himself... forget about any other thing...
manvi : dad trust me... virat has changed...
madan : changed...??? i dont see even a single change...
manvi : you will... give me a chance... you will see it...
madan : manviii...
beeji : madan...
madan : nahi beeji... today its about my daughter and i wont stay quiet... i cant let her spoil her life... i cant beeji... she is all i have...
beeji : madan all we have is manvi... i know that... par humko manvi pe trust karna hoga... aur sach maan ladka bura nahi hai...

manvi suddenly had a hope that beeji would be on her side and may be she will be able to make madan understand the things he doesnt want to accept.
madan : beeji i know him... aur sache dil se keh raha hoon... uski maa se mil kar ehsaas ho gya ke hum kitne chote hain... unka aur humara koi mel nahi nahi... wo bahut ameer khandan se hai beeji... (beeji trust me... honestly... trust me... the day i met his mother, i realised that we are nothing in front of them... we dont match.. not in status for example)
manvi with tears looked at madan.
madan : i cant give away my daughter in such a house... the society to which your loving boyfriend belongs ms manvi... there is nothing called as love there... they believe in money and for them, money can but anything and everything... manvi my jaan, that place is not for you... not for us... you wll not be able to live in their society...
manvi : dad but...
manvi already being emotional unstable, believed on every word madan said about virat. her father cant be wrong all the times... he can be correct at times... yes there is a huge difference in her and virat's family's status and reputation in society...
beeji : go inside manvi...
manvi went back to her room thinking of only one thing... she cant keep running away from the truth... differences do matter at the end of the day... love isnt enough...

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floral

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Posted: 11 years ago

#597

wow it was an awesome update

poor maanu is in a dilema

loved virman convo

plzzz do continue soon dear

i loved it very much 😊😊

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naina

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Posted: 11 years ago

#598

Originally posted by: kusharberry
wow it was an awesome update
poor maanu is in a dilema
loved virman convo
plzzz do continue soon dear
i loved it very much😊😊

Thank u soo much dear... 😊
Will try to cont soon...