Virika OS Part 6- page 7 - Page 5

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Posted: 12 years ago
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Part 7
Meera- "No i dont know and i wanna know!"
Jeevika- "Ok well...(she wipes away her tears) so it was 10th grade...
(FLASHBACK)
Viren-"Hey Jeevika i was wondering if u wanna go with me to the football game this saturday"
Jeevika- "Of course i wanna go Viren i am ur girlfriend obviously"
Viren- "Yeah but i wanted to make sure u didnt have any plans"
Jeevika- "Of course i dont cuz when its comes to hanging out with u i could put everything aside"
Viren- "Really? thats really great"
Jeevika kisses Viren on the cheek and then leaves.
~Football game~
Jeevika was wearing some nice black skinny jeans wid a cute top and jacket over it. She was waiting for Viren at the snack bar, but she didnt see him. She then calls them on her iphone and he didnt pick up. she then was about to walk away but some one came behind and held a red rose in front of her from behind, whispers "For u my beautiful luv"
Jeevika knew exactly who it was.
Jeevika- "Awh thats so sweet of u"
Then they hold hands and walk to the bleachers. Viren's friend was on the football and he hurt his leg so then Viren went down there and went to see him. The nurse and everyone came and took his friend inside the school to the locker room. Viren was waiting outside and then one of the cheerleader comes and then starts flirting wid Viren, she kisses Viren on the lips and Jeevika comes...
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Posted: 12 years ago
#42
short update update ??
bt ws amazing
loved it
omg kiss
cant wait
Cont.soon
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Posted: 12 years ago
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LAST CHAPTER
Jeevika- "Viren I can't believe this"
Viren- "Jeevika YOU DON'T UNDERSTAND! She was the one who started flirting with me"
Jeevika- "I don't wanna hear your lies just get away from me"
She then runs out of the room. He runs behind her.
~Flashback ends~
Jeevika- "Your brother broke my heart"
Meera- "You should have trusted him cuz then you wouldn't think that he broke your heart"
Jeevika- "But i saw it happen in front of my eyes"
Meera- "Trust is the most important thing in a relationship"
Jeevika- "I know but he probably left by now"
Meera- "You have time to get to the airport"
Jeevika then quickly got out of the room and got in a cab, they quickly went to the airport cuz Jeevika told the driver to driver fast. She made it and ran inside there was a huge crowd. She saw the back of Viren's head. She screams his name and he quickly turns around.
Viren- "Jeevika!"
Jeevika- "Viren" she says as she walked towards him.
Viren- "What are you doing here?"
Jeevika- "I am sorry for everything"
Viren- "Its ok"
Then they hug and kiss.
HAPPY ENDING
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Posted: 12 years ago
#44
yeah 1st to comment super happy 😃 🥳
super sad as u hv end d story😭
didnt expected yaar seriously🥱
loved dis story allot
if possible den plz continue dis story
amazing
superb
loved it
fab
great work

Edited by surbhi1994 - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
#45
absolutely brilliant ending thank you
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Posted: 11 years ago
#46
aww
wat a gud suspense to the story
loved it
it was awesome

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