Sparkle's'Sagar Ke Moti' #5 still waiting for you page50/ma - Page 13

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Posted: 11 years ago
beautiful poem
technikal comments mat maangna
poem goes over my head
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Posted: 11 years ago
Chalo gud hai...teri thread to khuli...
I know m late in cmntng...srry...
N read ur first poem...
Its superb...
Jaldi-2 aur poems likh...
Luv reading ur poems...
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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: spvd

nice one dear but painful...


will try for happy wala also 😉
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Posted: 11 years ago

thanks 😊
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Originally posted by: rashmivaish

beautiful poem

technikal comments mat maangna
poem goes over my head


😆 itna tho bantha hai RJ thank u 😊
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Posted: 11 years ago

hey pooja thanks
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Originally posted by: Parimishty

Chalo gud hai...teri thread to khuli...
I know m late in cmntng...srry...
N read ur first poem...
Its superb...
Jaldi-2 aur poems likh...
Luv reading ur poems...


pihu baby thank you so much
yes they are on the way
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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: Jeevana.

well every update should have emotions be it happy or sad...


😊 yes but strangely my poems were painful only 😆
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Posted: 11 years ago



Sparkle's "Sagar Ke Moti"



Banner by my praff aka reachsky_2011

Thank you soo much




Banner by my jadu aka maya rhea

Thank you soo much love you jadu





Thanks for all your likes and comments on last poem

It meant a lot to me


This time also emotional at bounded with love


#2 ADHOORI ZINDAGI prologue

https://www.indiaforums.com/forum/geet-hui-sabse-parayee/3723710/mg-ff-2-adhoori-zindagi-thread-3-added-page-1-feb-17th




you are my love



You are my most beautiful girl that I have ever seen

But an enigma for me to understand



You are my ray of hope in my life

But darkness surrounded around you


You are my innocent angel

But hide that with your demeanor


You are my destiny

But trashed that with your own hands


You are the owner of my heart

But got ditched with your hatred

You are my princess my love


Yes you are my love

I love you


By this you all get to know the whole story of adhoori zingadi

I hope soo

Leave ur likes and comments if you love it

Thanks for reading this

Sparkle


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Posted: 11 years ago




iske alawa kya keh sakti hoon...this is beautiful...

here so many talented girls I didn't knew that...😊

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