kriyansh os love me thoda aur....

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Posted: 12 years ago
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in rehersal hall
kriya:kaal raat joh hua pata nahi rey aaj kaise behaive karega..
tab tak main kuch practice karti hoon n kriya startd practice n suddenly she fell down..
ochhh keh kya ho gaya ab..
she feels something in her hand..powder aur yaha yeh kisne?
Kriya:zarur gang hogi...jane de kroya woh log tujhe pasand nahi karte...
She try to stand but she can't
lagta hain pair main moch aa gayi ab main kya karu..
Woh dhere dhere jake mirror ke pass baith jati hain...
Ab reversal ka kya hoga pls universe ji meri madat karna sirf do din bache hain annual day ke liye...
Scene shifted
rey:pata nahi kaise kriya ko face karunga ek baar yeh annual day khatam ho jaye bas fir woh apne raste aur main apne...
Rey entered in reversal hall
kriya:hiii
rey:practice suru kare mere pass faltu batain karneke liye time nahi hain...
Kriya: Toh main bhi yaha faltu batain karne ke liye nahi aayi hoon...
Rey'dikh raha hain mujhe...
Kriya:hey universji ab main kya karu??
Rey:kuch kaha tumne?
Kriya:nahi toh...i mean woh mere kuch nahi lets dance now kriya slowly stands up n try to dance with rey after one step kriya fall on the flore
rey:r u fine kriya...
Kriya:haan wait i try...
Rey:just shut up...
N rey helps her to seat...
Kriya:thanks..
Rey:maine tuhmara thank u manga hain kya..
Tum yaha aayi kyu baar baar girti ho bimar badti ho??
Kriya:excuse me apka matlab kya hain haan main jaan bujhkar bimar padti hoon kya...
Rey:lagta toh aisa hi hain...tum
kriya:aap aise kaise..
Rey stop it baatcutter tum abhi bhi waise ki waiso ho...
The bg played oohohooo
kriya try to stand but again fall
rey:main oil maint lagata hoon ruko..
N rey kriya ke pair ko oil maint lagata hain...
Kriya :aap bilkul nahi badle rey...
Rey:tuhme kuch kaha kya?
Kriya :nahi och..
Rey:sorry dard hua kya?
Kriya :nahi...
Rey mujhe aap se kuch kehna hain..
Rey:bolo kya baat hain..
Kriya :rey main janti hoon maine apko hurt kiya but woh meri majbori thi mom ki wajah se mujhe dance aur aap main se ek ko chunna pada aur maine apko chuna rey...
Rey:what??
Kriya :rey maine zindagi se bohot kuch sikha hain n u know mujhe aisa lagta hain zindagi main pyaar sirf ek baar milta hain n i dont want to loose it ...
Reyy i really love u i knw tum mujhse naraz ho but main tuhmare answer ka wait karungi...
Rey:confused kya tum sach main kriya ghai ho jisse maine pyaar kiya tha usne yeh 3words kehne ke liye pata nahi kitne din nikale the...
Kriya :its not funny rey..
Rey:tuhme mujhse ek promise karna padega
kriya :konsa promise..
Rey'ke tum mujhe chodkar nahi jaungii
kriya :haan i promise u...
Rey:i love u too kriya maine kitna try kiya par main apne emotions control nahi kar saka..
N they hug each other...
Suddenly kriya kriya
kaha kho gayi tum hey baat cutter
kriya:haan kya hua rey?
Rey:kya hua newyork pohoch gayi kya?
Kriya :nahi toh...
Rey:ab main chalta hoon tuhmara pair thick ho gaya toh mujhe bula dena n rey goes...
Kriya :hey universji yeh kya tha sapna it was a dream...

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Posted: 12 years ago
#2
Beautiful...
Isa laga jaise aaj ka episode dekh rahahu...
Loved it...
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Posted: 12 years ago
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m glad u like it..
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Posted: 12 years ago
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y do i feel like come and beat u...;LAST ME DREAM BANANA JARURU THA KYA...😡...kitna acha lag rha tha padte waqt, nd tumne sab kharab kar dia...hate u...huh
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Originally posted by: akankshaArsha

y do i feel like come and beat u...;LAST ME DREAM BANANA JARURU THA KYA...😡...kitna acha lag rha tha padte waqt, nd tumne sab kharab kar dia...hate u...huh


sorrryyy u can ...
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Posted: 12 years ago
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okay...ab no complaints nd let me say wat i liked...i loved how they retort back each other, specially kriya...rey's caring side was adorable...finally kria told him the truth nd they confessed...bt last me mera popat ho gaya jab pata chala dat was a dream only...otherwise it was brilliant
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Posted: 12 years ago
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that was wonderful and superb os... loved it
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Awesome OS...
Felt like m watching today's epi...
I mean future track...😉

Loved it...

Bt sad it was jzz a dream...😔
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Originally posted by: princessSonia

Awesome OS...
Felt like m watching today's epi...
I mean future track...😉

Loved it...

Bt sad it was jzz a dream...😔


thanku ji thanku..
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Originally posted by: khusbooluvarsha

too good...loved it😳


thanx...

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