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Posted: 11 years ago
Awesome story di...
I read all parts together
I am speechless
I am very haapy that I am also in your friend circle
hats off you πŸ‘ πŸ‘ πŸ‘
addu was so cute 😊
cont soon
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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: jia03

such an amazing updateπŸ‘πŸΌ

i just love addu❀️

that massi really needed a lessonπŸ˜†

Thanks a lot...keep loving him.😊

Originally posted by: skrafty

Awesome part

Just loved it
Junior rawte is really very intelligent
roshni ki massi ko acha sabak sikhaya
loved it
continue soon

He is indeed intelligent..and short tempered also. Thanks for your views. Stay with us.😊

Originally posted by: shreya09

ole baba le πŸ€— Addu !!!!!!!!!!!!! ❀️

he is so soo sooo sweet 😳 😳 😳 😳

Thank you dear...for this sweetwala comment. Stay with us.😊

Originally posted by: Payal_156

widout pm hereaww dat was cute..
lol addu like me naughty..
awesome
loved it..
amazing writer u r!
wow addu <3

Haan, kuch asar toh Fuppi ke hona hi chahiye...
Thanks for this long..πŸ˜‰.comment..and that butter also. Stay with us.😊

Originally posted by: kunchu

Revenge lena koi Addu se seekhleAditya...hayee
kuthne gandhe naam de raha tha
dont worry Roshni
Addu did d right thing
loved all the parts very very much

😳

He's the toughest kid...no? (name credit goes to youπŸ˜ƒ)
& naam pe koi punch maare toh tolerat karna mushkil hain...😑
Just wait & watch what this little devil can do.
Stay with us.😊

Originally posted by: rimi_invisible

yep addu you did the right thing...such an irirtating massi...
i loved this update...addu's pov was written so amazingly...take a bow girl...how do you do this??

everytime you leave me speechless..arjun plays with him...awww...i am loving it so much...

pplz continue soon...thanks for pm

Rimi...kyun itna sugar butter de rahi ho??...(but I loved them)
Tum are far better than me...in writing.
Anyways, sathei theko.😊

Originally posted by: sisodia_shefali

hey this junior is totally cool man 😎

he enjoys every body's love and attention thought some times elders do go overboard but still he is happy and most he enjoys with his dad
wow man he is little devil 😈 when some body displeases him
thanks for pm

Thanks for loving my little monster...stay with us.😊

Originally posted by: MonaKhan96

Wowww too good and funny

Thanks. Stay tuned.😊

Originally posted by: Faruheer

Awesome How sweet
Mother son relationship was cute
Hahhaha Masi k saath halat ki :p
Loved
Thanx for pm

Update soon

Thanks a lot for loving my Addu. Stay with us.😊

Originally posted by: laila1994

Aditya. Nice name

Update was awesome
I loved it but some dialogues were extra ordinary
like "Aab weight itna hona agar accha hain, toh insaan ka baccha paalne ke wajay, haathi ka baccha palna chahye.Nehi?"
", a two week old should not talk about severe matter like marriage."
especially "Tere iss laddu ko potty pe bithake dekhungi, yeh potty kaise karta hain."🀣

Name credit goes to Kunchu..I borrowed from her.😊
& Dialogues, thanks for loving them...and specially my work. Stay tuned.😊

Originally posted by: prachi90

Awwe...dis addu is shooo sweetlove dis junior rawte nd his thinkngs... 😊
Agraah dis masi is..roshni ko danta aur addu ko gussa dilaya 😑
well she needed a lesseon in addu style πŸ˜†

Nw plz thore se Arni scenes bhi dal do dear:-)

Arni!!...πŸ˜²πŸ˜†..well, I'll try.
& Addu, usne toh avi tak haath thikse khula hi nahi...πŸ˜†
Stay tuned..

Originally posted by: Snehajain

Awesome updates...

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I really loved Addu...he is so smart & intelligent...ever ready to take revenge whoever angry him...

Baap re..Itne saare??😲 kuch jyada nahi hain??😳
Anyways, thanks for loving it. Stay with us.😊

thanks.😊

Originally posted by: GOLD.A

That was too cute shamshad awesome

Addu is so naughty
Thanks for the PM
Continue soon 😊

Thanks Goldie, stay with us.😊

Originally posted by: Anjali.Mital

Nice update dear...
Lagtha hai future mein Arjun ko ek board rakhna padega apne door pe
"watch out..Addu is here.." What a kid dear...really great..

Cont. soon...

Thanks for pm...

Board...not a bad idea!😊..thanks for feedback.Stay with us.😊

Originally posted by: Harsha111

Awesome story di...I read all parts together
I am speechless
I am very haapy that I am also in your friend circle
hats off you πŸ‘ πŸ‘ πŸ‘
addu was so cute 😊

cont soon

Thank you dear...but don't you think yeh butter kuch jyada hain.😳
In fact I'm lucky to have some good readers around me. & I owe you guys a lot.
Thanks for your feedback. Just stay with us.😊

Thanks,my dear telegram girl. Stay tuned.😊


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Posted: 11 years ago

Chapter 9 :

It's about Two months Addu spent his life on earth. He as quite used to all meaningless blabbering around him. And also learning something every day. He came to know about his dad's habit of having tea, moms coffee with extra-cream. Their routine nok-jhok, fighting's and love. He also came to know about his mom and dad's moods indications on their face. And most important, he learnt to make different sounds to call his parents. An "aa-aa" for Mom and a "Boo" for dad.

One morning, Roshni fed Addu his breakfast and left him near Arjun to help Kamla kaki for their breakfast. Addu felt like excrete, so he started calling his father.

Addu : Boo..

Arjun : Haan baba, bolo. Kya bolna hain?

Addu made a weird face.

Arjun : Dekh beta, avi mazaak nahi. Tu sach bol raha hain na...

Addu made his face weirder.

Arjun : Really? Dekh, kal ki tarha daant mat khilana.

Addu was about to cry this time. Arjun checked him.

Arjun : Ok..ok .don't cry? Roshniii... come fast. Addu ka nappy change karna hain.

Roshni : (from kitchen) My hands are occupied Arjun, Making dough for roti. Would you change it, plz.

Arjun : Ok.

Arjun changed Addu's nappy. Washed him and brought a new one to encase him, but his phone ranged. It was from Rathod.

Arjun : Ek minute rokh, beta. Let me take this call.

Addu looked his dad was busy in phone, talking with his Uncle Sam. He waited patiently. He saw Arjun standing up, walked to the window, and continued talking. He tried to seek his attention by calling him, but Arjun seemed too busy with the call. Addu felt weird, lying down half-naked on his cradle, so he tried again, this time louder. It grabbed Arjun's attention, and he came to Addu, put a hand on his chest to keep him calm and continued talking with Sameer.

Addu felt his dad as getting busy with his work, completely forgot about his one month old helpless half-naked son. He couldn't take it anymore. So he again used his horrible weapon.

Arjun felt some worm wetness on his back and he immediately tuned to his son. He was about to shout on that poor thing, but Addu's red face made him realized that he must did something terrible. He cut the call and bent on his son.

Arjun : Yeh kya kia?

Addu made a black face...at the same time, roshni entered.

Roshni : kya chal raha hain dono Rawtes main?

Arjun : Dekho iss Addu ne mujhe gila karr dia...

Roshni : kyun, tumne bina diaper ke isko godh main uthaya. Avi avi khana khaya hain na isne...

Arjun : Isne mere peeth pe kia hain, dekho!!

Roshni looked at the wet back of Arjun's shirt and then to Addu. That little man was red in anger...and disappointed.

Roshni : Arre ? Isko aise kyun chora? Arjun!! Pants do uska !! (snatched Addu's pants from Arjun's hand and made Addu wear those)

Arjun : Just look what he did !!

Roshni : (hiding her smile) Kya kare, bachcha hainna..nishana chook gaya, thora aur bara hone do, next time sarr gila karega.

Arjun : Mazzak nahi, Rosh. I've to bath again, & I'm getting late.

Roshni : Pehle yeh batao tumne kiya kya hain?

Arjun : Kuch nahi...

Roshni : (scowled) Are you sure?

Arjun : Haan, I washed him properly, then took out this new diaper and was about to encase him..but Sam called for some information...and I got busy with him...ek minute... I left him without his pants on and...

Roshni : That's why he punished you! Arjun, khud ki bacche ko aise naked chorte huye tumko sharam nahi aaya? Addu chota hain..iska matlab yh nahi ki usko sharam nahi aata hain. Tumne usko aise chora kaise? Agar usko thand lag jaati toh!!...bimar parr jata mera beta!! Ek vi kaam thik se nehi hota hain tumse!!

Arjun : (whispered) OOPS !I'm sorry!!

...

After two days of that incident, Arjun came back home late. He found his baby is crying bitterly, Roshni was patting him and crying with the same intensity.

Arjun : ( worried tone) What happened?

Rosni : (between the sob) Seram sickness, he has fever.

Arjun checked Addu's temperature by the opposite side of his palm. It was wormer than usual.

Arjun : Fever is almost nil...

Roshni : But He's in pain...look how much he's suffering.

Arjun : Ok then...calm down Roshni...it's normal & happens with every child on the earth. Uska himmat barhane ke wajay tum uski saath ro rahi ho!!..you have to be strong!!

Roshni : I'm not crying...

Arjun : (wiped her tears and showing her his wet fingers)Then what is it?

Roshni : (startled a little) oh...kaafi waqt se Addu ko rone main company de rahi thi na...thak gayee...toh aankho main paseena aa gaye..

Arjun : HAAAWW!!

Listening to Roshni's answer, Addu stopped crying and gaped surprisingly to his mother. Then he moved his eyes to see his father's raction. Arjun was shocked to the core.

I was trying to figure out what my mom just said, I turned to my dad for help, but looking at his shocked form, it was confirmed that he's of no use now. GoD!! The whole right side of my body was paining, & I couldn't tolerate that pain, besides, after coming from the hospital at morning, I've started feeling strange. My head was feeling heavy, milk tested bitter and that intolerable pain... Mom tried a lot to keep me calm, but I could not control my cry it's coming out automatically. I thought mom was also crying seeing me in pain, but she was accompanying me?!? How can anybody cry just like that?

Roshni : (sighed) Finally, he stopped!! Arjun, Fresh ho jao. Main kamla kaki ko dinner serve karne ko boti hoon.

She put Addu down into his cradle, but that sudden change of side shooted out his pain, and he started crying again.

This time Arjun took him into his arms.

Arjun : Rosh, I know you didn't had lunch. Do one thing help kaki to set the table, have your meal and feed this barawala Rawte from your hand.Main Addu ko dekh leta hoon, baad main fresh ho jaunga.

Now, Arjun started moving to and fro in the room with Addu in his arms, walked to other rooms and balcony,kept patting his son's back, gently rubbing his hurting sides and telling him today's case update in low voice. After about two hours, he felt Addu fell asleep on his shoulders.

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I know it's a small update & belated one also. but I had reasons.

Now it's your turn to...you know what.😊

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Posted: 11 years ago
unres...
me stalker here 😲

awesome update ...
addu OMG.. Har Yug me aayega ek πŸ˜‰

har kisiko punish krta h ye
lol rosh bhabi company de ri thi..!!!!!
Bro u r Amazing!!!!!!
Well no worries dear...
i m not butter up u..
fact u r amazing writer..!
Edited by Payal_156 - 11 years ago
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nice updateπŸ‘πŸΌ
addu just cant take anyone ignoring him... what a way to gain attention from his dadπŸ˜†

poor addu is sick... and even is amazed at his mom... how can anyone cry just to give company?

continue soon😊


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Posted: 11 years ago
Awesome update
Loved it
Addu was amazing
Waiting for the next part
Continue soon
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Posted: 11 years ago
omg baby ne dad se badla liya...acha kiya...lena hi chahiye what a mess he created after that..πŸ‘

roshni was crying with addu...god inhe parents kisne bana diya yaar...πŸ˜†

i loved the update so much...but short one...

next update jaldi karna and lamba one...lots of addu moment...

waise 2 months old addu having breakfast??😲
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Posted: 11 years ago
Very nice
Jaisa baap waisa beta
Do continue soon
Edited by Rehana25 - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago
junior did'nt even speared his dad and punished him πŸ˜†
poor kid has to go through injection
so sweet listening to arjun's voice finally he slept 😊
thanks for pm
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Posted: 11 years ago
Addu and his punishing methods... πŸ˜†

Vaise ye kuch aur bade hoga.. tab kaise sambalega ise... 😲
Un dono kona a war risk insurance lena chahiye...

Cont. soon...
Thanks for pm...

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