FF: Precocious Rawte. chapter 26, p.67

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Payal Goel

@Payal_156

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Posted: 12 years ago

#121

widout pm here
aww dat was cute..
lol addu like me naughty..
awesome
loved it..
amazing writer u r!
wow addu <3

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kunchu

@kunchu

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Posted: 12 years ago

#122

Revenge lena koi Addu se seekhle
Aditya...hayee
kuthne gandhe naam de raha tha
dont worry Roshni
Addu did d right thing
loved all the parts very very much
😳

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rimi

@rimi_invisible

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Posted: 12 years ago

#123

yep addu you did the right thing...such an irirtating massi...

i loved this update...addu's pov was written so amazingly...take a bow girl...how do you do this??

everytime you leave me speechless..arjun plays with him...awww...i am loving it so much...

pplz continue soon...thanks for pm

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sisodia_shefali

@sisodia_shefali

Voyager

Posted: 12 years ago

#124

hey this junior is totally cool man 😎

he enjoys every body's love and attention thought some times elders do go overboard but still he is happy and most he enjoys with his dad

wow man he is little devil 😈 when some body displeases him

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Faruheer

@Faruheer

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Posted: 12 years ago

#125

Awesome
How sweet
Mother son relationship was cute
Hahhaha Masi k saath halat ki :p
Loved
Thanx for pm
Update soon

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laila

@laila1994

Dazzler

Posted: 12 years ago

#126

Aditya. Nice name

Update was awesome

I loved it but some dialogues were extra ordinary

like "Aab weight itna hona agar accha hain, toh insaan ka baccha paalne ke wajay, haathi ka baccha palna chahye.Nehi?"

", a two week old should not talk about severe matter like marriage."

especially "Tere iss laddu ko potty pe bithake dekhungi, yeh potty kaise karta hain."🤣

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prachi

@prachi90

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Posted: 12 years ago

#127

Awwe...dis addu is shooo sweet
love dis junior rawte nd his thinkngs... 😊
Agraah dis masi is..roshni ko danta aur addu ko gussa dilaya 😡
well she needed a lesseon in addu style 😆
Nw plz thore se Arni scenes bhi dal do dear:-)

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Snehajain

@Snehajain

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Posted: 12 years ago

#128

Awesome updates...

LOVED IT VERY MUCH...👏👏👏 👏👏👏 👏👏👏 👏👏👏 👏👏👏 👏👏👏 👏👏👏 👏👏👏 👏👏👏 👏👏👏 👏👏👏 👏👏👏 👏👏👏 👏👏👏 👏👏👏 👏👏👏 👏👏👏 👏👏👏 👏👏👏 👏👏👏 👏👏👏 👏👏👏 👏👏👏 👏👏👏 👏👏👏 👏👏👏 👏👏👏 👏👏👏 👏👏👏 👏👏👏 👏👏👏 👏👏👏 👏👏👏 👏👏👏 👏👏👏 👏👏👏 👏👏👏 👏👏👏 👏👏👏 👏👏👏 👏👏👏 👏👏👏 👏👏👏 👏👏👏 👏👏👏 👏👏👏 👏👏👏 👏👏👏 👏👏👏 👏👏👏 👏👏👏 👏👏👏 👏👏👏 👏👏👏 👏👏👏 👏👏👏 👏👏👏 👏👏👏 👏👏👏 👏👏👏 👏👏👏 👏👏👏 👏👏👏 👏👏👏 👏👏👏 👏👏👏 👏👏👏 👏👏👏 👏👏👏 👏👏👏 👏👏👏 👏👏👏 👏👏👏 👏👏👏

I really loved Addu...he is so smart & intelligent...ever ready to take revenge whoever angry him...

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GOLDIEE ABROL

@Gold.Abrol

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Posted: 12 years ago

#129

That was too cute shamshad awesome

Addu is so naughty

Thanks for the PM

Continue soon 😊

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Anjali.Mital

@Anjali.Mital

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Posted: 12 years ago

#130

Nice update dear...

Lagtha hai future mein Arjun ko ek board rakhna padega apne door pe
"watch out..Addu is here.." What a kid dear...really great..

Cont. soon...
Thanks for pm...