MG(SS) A COLD BLOODED KILLER THREAD 2 PART 9/PG 1 Jan 19th 2014

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A Cold Blooded Killer


Alright, Here is next thread to ACBK.. Thinking on the reqs I got in the previous thread to not to end it soon... Have extended from 3-5 parts till 10 or so parts... for this story.. Hope none will get disappointed from my this extension to the SS... Thank you so much for supporting this work of mine ...

Much love Rose😉

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PART 6


wazud mera nahi
par phir bhi ,zinda hu main !
kyu bhatak raha tha ,
sadiyyon se !
yeh tujhe dekh kar ,
ab jaana hu main !


seene main pyaas thi ,
tere lahu ki !
jise liye kab se ,
tadap raha tha main !
milli tu .
to lagaa
ki suraj ki tapti
hui garmi ,
jo jal rahi hai mere ander
bujha luga usse !
pee kar tera lahu ,in hootho se !

par ye kambakht ahsaas,
jo nahi the kabhi mere paas !
kyu jagne hai laage
paa kar ,
tere saanso ke garm ahsaas !
poem by Nishu-thank you sweets.. I loved it ..😊

Maan:- I never told you to trust me .. Its your own wish.. coz, one day you are going to be killed either by me or by my mates .. (he looked behind her and she followed his gaze)

She clutched his shirt tightly and pushed herself onto him... as she saw the three vampires of that day, in front of them..


Maan:- I told you all.. she is with me ... stay away from her..

Vampire 1:- I wonder, what's in this girl that we find you with her often ???

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MUCH LOVE ROSE😉

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congrats for the new thread
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Final Note
Hey all.. So , this story came to an end ..How was it .. ??? were you expecting a wed night in the Epi.. umm sorry but am not writing any Epi for this story... Didn't feel like going on to there and start another story from there.. so left it on a happy note.. yeah I did make changes .. and molded the story as per suggestions and reqs.. One thing , I know, lots of you would be disappointed that I didn't take up your reqs and move on with ACBK's new thread-extending the parts. ... I did give that a thought But honestly Am not having time to make few more parts of this one ...(one, my time is eaten up by training and 2, the un-scheduled power cuts like eat my time of typing...) As this story was already written and its end was decided before I posted .. If you wish, I can try for Epi after January is overAnd also the responses to this part...If not willing then consider this an end.. Can I expect few more words of comments and few silent readers views as well?? Thanks to all those who were there with me in this Maaneet Journey...
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