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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: rimi_invisible



omg is it you kuchu???😲

i read many of your works and you are an awesome writer...you commented on my work...yipieee

thank you so much dear...glad you liked it...will surely love to pm you...😃

stay tuned and keep commenting...😃


ya its me baba
I dont get it
sab pehle yahi sawal kyu puchthe hai ke "is it you?"
lol
I know I make appearence in ver few stories... isliye na
I am sorry
mann tho hai sab kuch padhne ka
and trust me I used to read every single story once
but aaj kal nai hotha
but will surely look forward for this one
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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: kunchu


ya its me baba
I dont get it
sab pehle yahi sawal kyu puchthe hai ke "is it you?"
lol
I know I make appearence in ver few stories... isliye na
I am sorry
mann tho hai sab kuch padhne ka
and trust me I used to read every single story once
but aaj kal nai hotha
but will surely look forward for this one



ohh dear...its not like that...u r such a great writer here that its difficult to imagine you reading other infant works...tats the reason people confirm once again...😃😳

I am sorry plz dont mind...i do understand its not possible to follow whole lots of stories here...thanks so much u choose my story as one on the list...

will surely pm you the next updates...😊😊😊
Edited by rimi_invisible - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago
it was awesome update dear.
just loved it.
so case is progressing.
continue soon.
and thanx for the pm.
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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: ll_megha_ll

it was awesome update dear.

just loved it.
so case is progressing.
continue soon.
and thanx for the pm.



thanks megha..stay tuned...keep commenting...😃
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Posted: 11 years ago
Thank you everyone for your lovely comments...so here i come with the next part...short one but lots of clues given...





PART 12:

Ayesha went close to him and stood there waiting for him to compose.Rathore felt her presence near him and tried to calm his senses.He opened the door and sat inside.Ayesha walked to the other side and took the seat.They drove back to ETF office.

The journey was completely silent and the curosity to know about sushma and Rathod was killing ayesha.But one look at his strict form and she shut her mouth.After sitting there for some time,when it was getting unbearable to her she asked Rathod,

'Sir,wo sapna...',she stopped abrubtly when Rathore glared at her,'Sir,wo mein bas aisehi..',

'Ayesha mere pas tumhari curosity dur karne ke alawa bhi aur important kam hai,pehele wo kar le?',Rathore replied back angrily,

She accepted her defeat and sat silenltly looking outside.She was lost in thoughts when Rathore's voice started her,

'I am sorry ayesha,mera mood kharab tha,tumpe chilla diya,plz mind mat karna,'

'its ok sir, isme mind karne wali kiya baat hai,i can understand ander jo hua,wo...'

'Sushma ko mein pehele se janta tha,8 saal pehele,apna naam sapna batayi thi,uske bad kabhi nehi mili,mujhe nehi pata tha wo yaha milegi eise,'Rathore told ayesha still driving.

'to sushma hi sapna hai??aur isi liye apko wo tattoo ke bare mein pata tha?'

Rathore took a deep breath and nodded his head.Ayesha didnt probe further and kept to herself for the rest of the journey.They reached ETF office and Rathore parked the car and got down.Rathore walked quickly towards the entrance when ayesha called back,

'Sir,ap sushma se, sorry, sapna se pyar karte the?'

The question startled him and he stopped on his track.He didnt look back at ayesha,he stood there for a few seconds and then walked away.Ayesha kept looking at his retreating figure and kept thinking about him,a smile crept up on her lips.Sakshi came there from behind and finding her lost in thoughts held her in a close side hug and voiced out,

'kiya hua ayesha?bari smile kar rahi ho?sameer ne propose kiya kya??'

'Sakshi bakwas band karo,batao tum logo kuch mila?'

'Aree yaar ab dost se bhi chupaogi?thik hai chalo,andar chalte hai,bohot kuch pata chala hai,'

All three went in and gathered in the conference room.

'Shree wo tattoo ke bare mein kuch pata chala?',Arjun asked while coming inside the room,

'nehi sir,yaha to kuch nehi pata chala.meine wo tattoo ki photo,chotu ke goa wale informers ko bheja hai,agar Goa mein us tattoo banane wale ka pata chal jaye,usse banane wale ke bare mein pata chal sakte hai.Per haan sir,yaha pe jo tatto banane walo se baat ki hai wo log kehe rahe hai jisne bhi banaya hai apne kam me bohot mahir hai,very smooth work.'

'hmm,aur anurag ke bare mein?'

'mein batati hu,'Sakshi stood up,'meine apne informers se pucha aur apne mentor se bhi baat ki,per unhe nehi pata,ye chehera unhone kabhi nehi dekha.We might be on the wrong track arjun'

'Nehi sakshi,meine sushma se pucha anurag ke bare mein,usne bataya nehi,per use dekh ke samajme ata hai wo janti hai use,aur fir dono same tattoo banayenge its too much of a coincedence..,'Rathore replied back,

'matlab firse dead end..Arjun sir,ap log ko kuch pata chala dock se?'Ayesha asked Arjun,

'haan,mere informer ne bataya ki Billa ko do din se dekha ja raha hai docks ke aspas,'Chotu replied ayesha,

'Billa matlab wo bomber??wo to bohot tara ke bombs banane mein mahir hai,uske bombs diffuse karna bohot muskil hota hai,per wo to jail mein tha na,interpol ne hi pakra tha,'sakshi gave this information,

'Shree police files check karo dekho billa ke bare mein kuch milta hai kiya?'Rathore ordered shree,

Shree instantly started typing on his laptop fetching data.After few minutes he got the details.He read the details on his screen and raised his brow.

'kuch garbar hai sir,'Shree said still looking at the screen,

'saaf saaf batao,garbar kiya hai?'Arjun asked him iritated,

'Sir,interpole ne Billa ko 5 saal pehele pakra tha,Goa se,kisi bomb blast ke case mein bomb supply dene ke liye,aur wo bas 2 months pehele hi chuta hai,per use to 9 saal ki saza hui thi,fir wo 5 saal mein kaise choot gaya?aur,'shree stopped at looked at Rathore,

'aur kiya shree?'

'aur use bhi security custody mein rakha gaya tha,jaha abhi sushma...',he said looking at Rathore,

'Isse kiya hota hai?waha us jaise bohot koi hai,to ?'Rathore said angrily at Shree who gulped down and looked away,scared to face his anger.

Arjun walked upto the fact board,

'kahi kuch choot raha hai rathore,ye billa 2 months pehele waha se choota hai aur 2 months ke andar sushma pakri gayi,strange?aur abhi billa docks pe kiya raha hai?wo consignment jisme Cromium tha wo bhi kaha hai kuch nehi pata.Case bas ulajta hi ja raha hai,'

'Shree check karo kiya billa kabhi sushma ke sathe kam karte
hua pakra gaya tha kiya?'

'nehi sir,iesi koi information to yaha nehi hai,'

'hmm'

'aur chotu tumlog jise pakad ke laye ho wo kaun hai?'Rathore asked chotu

'Sir,hum yaha jab mere informer se bath kar rahe the to ye chup chup ke sun raha tha,Arjun sie ne use wahi pakra tha,per wo kuch bataya nehi,isi liye use yaha le aye,interogation mein shayad kuch bole,uska naam raja hai'

'okk,interogate karke dekhte hai,'

Everyone was thinking silently.Yes many things were happening and everything was happening simultaneously.There was surely a link between them but they didnt know what.Their silent thoughts were broken by the ring of Rathore's phone,it was from the commisioner,

'jai hind sir,'

Rathore stood up completely surprised and angry.

'kiya?kaise hua ye?'

'thik hai sir,mein jake dekhta hu,jai hind sir,'

Rathore finished the call and threw the phone on the table,visibly frustrated.Everyone including Arjun kept looking at him confused..Rathore took a moment and the blurt out,

'commisioner sir ka phone tha,sushma custody se bhag gayi hai,'

'kiya?,'Everyone asked him completely shocked,

'ek blast hua hai waha,4 kaidi 2 guards mare gaye hai,aur sushma farar,Rawte hume waha jake investigate karna hoga,lets go'

Rathore informed and left the conference room in a hurry.Next moment all of them zoomed out towards the secured custody.

Aj ke liye itna hi...hope its not getting too boring if yes do tell me...ill try to change the story telling...please read and give your reviews...

thanks
rimi


PRECAP: destination GOA? 😉😃



Edited by rimi_invisible - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago
Hats off dear amazing very nice
Maza aa gaya Sushma bhag gayi 😲
Kya twist diya hai amazing
Its getting more n more interesting 😊
Thanks for the PM
Cant wait to read more
Continue soon 😊
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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: GOLD.A

Hats off dear amazing very nice

Maza aa gaya Sushma bhag gayi 😲
Kya twist diya hai amazing
Its getting more n more interesting 😊
Thanks for the PM
Cant wait to read more
Continue soon 😊



Goldie first comment...woww...😃

thanks dear...yeah musibat bhag gayi...😆

ab dekho age kiya hota hai...stay tuned..thanks for commenting
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Posted: 11 years ago
me bi bhag jaau sushma ke sath lol...
awesome update didz..
very interesting ..
lovely...
no worries
aapka rasta chodu na hehe..
tym milega me here...
waiting pls update soon hun..
love ya...
thanks for d pm..

me second here
not bad..
Edited by Payal_156 - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: Payal_156

me bi bhag jaau sushma ke sath lol...
awesome update didz..
very interesting ..
lovely...
no worries
aapka rasta chodu na hehe..
tym milega me here...
waiting pls update soon hun..
love ya...
thanks for d pm..

me second here
not bad..



kaha bhagi darling???tum kiya sushma bhi pakri hi jaigi...😆

thanks payal you took the time to read...😃
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Posted: 11 years ago
ohkay...
damn interesting!!
kya?? bhaag gayi??😕
OMG!!! smart player!!!
conversation between sameer n aisha.. great...
oh..bechari ko daant dia..😭
err... 1 qstn.. y was she smiling after rathod walked away without answering if he loved her!!😕😕
didi.. thoda sa Raesha...please..please...

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