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hello friends...🤗

i know i am very late with the update...was so busy...shollly...😉

but I do have a surprise for you...that is a very long update...3061 words..😃

hope you all enjoy it...
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criticism is also welcomed...
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Part 6 - Mere Sang tu Chal Jara

Humeira's Room:

"Humeira... Mai nahi jaanta humare muqaddar me kya likha hai. Par mai itna jaroor jaanta hu ki mai aapse beintehaan mohabbat karta hu. Mai aap hi se Nikah karunga. Par mai..."

Humeira cut him in between, "Par mai... Par mai kya Ayaan..??" Her voice was broken & so was she.

"Par mai aapko aapke parivaar se alag nahi kar sakta. Mai nahi chahta mere is faisle ki wajah se aap apne ammi aur abbu se, is parivaar se alag ho jaye. Mai ab yaha nahi reh sakta par mera koi haq nahi banta ki mai aapko bhi apne ammi, abbu se alag kar du. Mai..."

"Ayaan aap ye kya keh rahe hai...?? Mai aapse mohabbat karti hu aur mera sab kuch aap hi ke ssath hai. Mera parivaar, mera pyaar. Sab kuch. Rahi baat ammi, abbu ki to waise bhi Nikah ke baad ek ladki apne ammi-abbu ka ghar chodkar apne shauhar ke saath hi to rehti hai. To isme kuch galat nahi hai. Mai apne parivaar se dur nahi houngi. Mai bus apne shauhar ke saath rahungi. Aap jaisa rakhenge, jaha rakhenge. Mujhe Qubool hai.", and slowly tears started forming in her eyes.

Humeira knew Ayaan was so broken. She got up & went near him. She hugged him tightly, never to let go. She patted his back and he hugged her tightly, promising silently never to leave her. Both had tears of happiness in their eyes. They felt a contented feeling in their hearts.

"I Love You Humeira Begum. Mai aapko chodkar nahi jaunga. Ye vaada hai mera aapse. Hum saath me is ghar se dur chale jayenge. Apni nayi duniya sajayenge. Aap rahegi na humesha mere saath..??"

"Humesha & Forever... I Love You Ayaan.", with this she hugged him tightly.

Song in Background:

Humeira smiled in her tears.

Apni aankhein khaali kar de

Kaash tu meri aankhein bhar de

Kaash tu meri aankhein bhar de

Humeira broke the Hug & wiped Ayaan's tears.

Mere yaara tere gham agar payenge

Humein teri hai kasam, hum sanwar jayenge (x2)

She nodded not to cry and smiled.

Do yeh saugaat tum, to zamaane ki hum

Do yeh saugaat tum, to zamaane ki hum

Har khushi se mukar jayenge

Hum mar jayenge

Hum mar jayenge

She took his hands and they sat near the window.

Mere yaara tere gham agar paayenge

Humein teri hai kasam, hum sanwar jayenge

Humeira kept her head on Ayaan's shoulder & he kept his hand around her shoulder.

Tere kaandhe se hi lag ke

Yaara beete umar saari

Socho kaisi hogi kismat

Hua yun to phir humaari

Humeira closed her eyes feeling blessed.

Saare aansoon toh ho tere

Aur aankhein ho humaari

They both remembered the times when they were separated.

Tere dard humein, jo mile pyaar mein

Tere dard humein jo mile pyaar mein

Humeira remembered their engagement.

Hum khushi se yun bhar jaayenge

Hum mar jaayenge ho o..

Hum mar jaayenge

Ayaan caressed Humeira's hand drawing circles on her knuckles.

Mere yaara tere gham agar paayenge

Humein teri hai kasam, hum sanwar jaayenge

Ayaan remembered the 1st time when he said no to Humeira for Marriage & she obliged.

Chaahe dukh ho, chaahe sukh ho

Dil ne tujhko hi pukaara

He remembered the way she brought cake for him.

Tune humko hai banaaya

He remembered the times she stood by him as a friend.

Tune humko hai sanwaara

He closed his eyes remembering the way she blew the candles on the cake.

Jahaan ko to rab ka hai, humein tera hai sahaara

He remembered their Hug.

Bas tera saath ho, chaahe jo baat ho

Bas tera saath ho, chaahe jo baat ho

Tere kehne se kar jaayenge

He opened his eyes & saw Humeira peacefully sleeping on his shoulder.

Hum mar jaayenge ho o..

Hum mar jaayenge

He smiled & picked her up in his arms & she cuddled in him.

Mere yaara tere gham agar paayenge

Humein teri hai kasam, hum sanwar jaayenge

He dropped her on her bed & kissed her forehead. She smiled in her sleep.

Mere yaara tere gham agar paayenge

Humein teri hai qasam hum sanwar jaayenge

He covered her with her blanket & left from there determined at his decision & feeling proud to have Humeira in his life.

***

In the lawn at Panchmarhi:

"Nikhat... Mai jaanti hu tumhe bahot takleef ho rahi hai. Shayad mai us takleef ka andaja bhi nahi laga sakti. Par mai yeh bhi jaanti hu ki tum bahot strong ho. Waqt sab kuch thik kar deta hai. Aur dekhna jald hi tumhari zindagi me bhi sab thik ho jayega. Aaj bhale hi Farhan tumse pyaar na karte ho par ek din unhe ehsaas hoga ki unhe tumhare roop me kitni achchi biwi mili hai. Bus waqt ko thoda waqt do.", Najma said caressing Nikhat's hair.

"Baaji... Wo mujhse kabhi pyaar nahi kar payenge... Unhone humesha..." Nikhat's voice was breaking with each word & she could not speak further.

Najma hugged her tightly & patted her back soothing her.

After some time Nikhat calmed down and she broke the hug. She looked towards Najma with a determined look and wiped her tears.

Najma was about to ask her when she said, "Mai jaanti hu mujhe kya karna hai ab. Maine faisla kar liya hai."

"Nikhat, jald baaji me koi aisa faisla mat lena jiske liye tumhe zindagi bhar pachtana pade."

"Nahi baaji. Mai aisa kuch nahi karungi jis se chije aur bigad jaye. Mai humare rishte ko ek mauka jarur doongi. Agar mere muqaddar me Farhan ka pyaar hai to wo mujhe jarur milenge. Aage Allah ki marji."

Najma kept her hand on her shoulders assuring her that she will always be there by her side. Nikhat smiled looking at her & they both hugged smiling.

The pair of eyes watching them from balcony was soothing in anger.

"In sauteli behno ke beech ka pyaar kuch jyada hi badhte ja raha hai. Mujhe koi aur rasta apna na hoga ab."

***

In FarNik room:

Farhan was standing near the window thinking about his confession about Sameera to Nikhat. He knew he was so wrong at hiding this & destroying Nikhat's life. He was really feeling bad for what he did with her. He was trying calling her but her cell was switched off. He was now getting so tensed & was scared as he remembered her cutting her wrist last time. He thought of searching for her & turned to go when he heard the door knob open. He was relived seeing her. He went near her and grabbed her arm asking, "Kaha thi aap? Mai kabse aapka phone try kar raha hu. Switched off kyun aa raha hai? Aapko koi andaja hai ki mai kitna pareshan ho gaya tha. Kaha thi aap, hunh..??"

Nikhat was feeling content on seeing the care in Farhan's eyes. Although she was hurt she knew she has to be strong & she can't break in front of her. She looked at her cell and said, "Shayad battery discharge ho gayi. Mai wo Baaji ke saath lawn me thi."

She looked at Farhan's hand on her arm & he immediately removed it. She turned around when Farhan spoke, "Mai jaanta hu Nikhat maine aapko bahot hurt kiya hai. I am really sorry. Aap ka har faisla mujhe manjoor hai. Aapne kya..."

But before he could complete she spoke, "Maine aapko maaf kiya Farhan. Mai jaanti hu aap mujhse kabhi pyaar nahi karenge. Mai yeh bhi jaanti hu ki mai aapki zindagi me Sameera ki jagah nahi le sakti. Aur mai aisa kabhi karungi bhi nahi. Kyunki mai jaanti hu pyaar cheen na nai hota. Maine faisla kiya hai ki mai aapko chodkar nahi jaungi. Aur ab hum dono milkar Sameera ko dhoondenge. Jab tak mai aap dono ko mila nahi deti mujhe sukoon nahi milega ab."

Although she was broken from inside; she suppressed a smile on her face & turned around. She extended her hand and said, "Friends.??"

He saw her smiling and felt relived. He handshake with her and said, "Friends..."

Both smiled at each other unknown to the fact that pair of eyes was seeing them. Najma who witnessed the scene was happy. She knew her sweet sister will get all the happiness. She sent a prayer above & left from there.

***

Everyone in their rooms:

Farhan was sleeping on couch with Sameera's passport photo thinking that he will find her soon. He looked at Nikhat whose back was facing him and thanked her in his heart.

Nikhat was looking at her & Farhan's Nikah photo in her cell & her eyes were moist. She smiled thinking that we are at least friends now.

Shireen was looking at her & Rashid's photo frame kept at the table and was crying silently. She knew it was over finally.

Rashid had his, Dilshad & Asad's family photo in his hand. He smiled looking at the photo determined to bring back his family.

Dilshad was caressing the photos from the album. Her & Rashid's photo when he was back hugging her. Then their family photo (the same which Rashid was caressing). She thought in her mind that she will fulfill Rashid's this wish at any cost. She then caressed Asad & Zoya's photo from the photo shoot & kissed the photo.

***

Humeira woke up as soon as Ayaan left and took the photo frame kept in the drawer next to her bed. It was her & Ayaan's engagement photo. She smiled looking at it and hugged it tightly.

Zoya was in her bed staring at the photo frame which Tanveer gifted her once. Although she hated her but this photo was so dear to her. Her Phoophi, Tamatar & her Mr. Khan. She lovingly caressed the photo & hugged it tightly close to her heart.

Humeira and Zoya got up from their beds. Sleep was far away from them. They both went towards Asad & Ayaan's room respectively. What both the girls saw broke their heart.

Ayaan was sitting leaning on his bed with their family photo (The same way when he was leaning while he had Guitar in his hand during Muqqadar Talk). He was caressing the photo & thinking about the happy times in his home.

Silent tears made their way from his eyes. It broke Humeira's heart seeing him like that. She knew she has to be strong for him. She hugged the photo frame she was carrying more tightly.

Asad was sitting near the settee (the same as he was sitting when Zoya came with biscuits & coffee). The room was dark but the moonlight was directly falling on the collage which was stick on the wall.

Zoya saw Asad staring at the collage and she remembered the day.

Zoya was smiling at herself after seeing the work she did.

She patted herself, "Well done Miss. Faruqui"and she smiled big.

"Mr. Khan... Mr. Khan... Mr. Khannn... Kaha hai aap?", said Zoya barging in his room.

"Mai andar bathroom me hu Miss. Faruqui. Aap itna chilla kyun rahi hai?"

"Jaldi aayiye Mr. Khan...", she was getting desperate to show him what she had brought for him.

"Aap thoda ruk nahi sakti kya?" said Asad from bathroom wiping his face with the towel. And next what he heard made him run out of the bathroom.

"Aaah... Mr. Khann...", shouted Zoya.

He came near her and asked with concern, "Kya hua? Aap thik to hai naa? Kaha lagi aapko? Aap kuch bol kyun nahi rahi?" With this he looked at her & saw her grinning. He understood she was playing a prank on him to get him out as soon as possible.

He moved back & Zoya's eyes widened seeing his Six-Packs. But neither Asad hide himself nor did Zoya moved her eyes from him.

"Miss. Faruqui agar aapka drooling session khatam ho gaya ho to aap batayegi ki aap chilla kyun rahi thi?", he said teasing her.

And his statement made her move her eyes & Asad saw her blushing a little. He was amused.

"Wo... Mai... Actually... Mr. Khan...", she stammered and her cheeks turned red. She couldn't stop staring at his perfect Six-Packs neither she could meet his gaze.

"Miss. Faruqui that's my line.", he said & winked at her as soon as she saw towards him.

Her mouth formed a perfect O and before she could say anything further, he wrapped his hands around her waist & brought her closer. The sudden proximity between them and seeing Asad so close to her made her close her eyes. Their faces were inches apart. He blew air on her face & she smiled. Asad kissed her dimple and smiled seeing her blush. She turned red with embarrassment and he was enjoying it.

"Aap behad khoobsurat lag rahi hai.", he said in his most sexy voice. She opened her eyes and smiled.

She kept her hands around his neck when he asked, "Haan to kya keh rahi thi aap?"

"Mai..??", she looked at him with a questioning look.

"Miss. Faruqui. Kuch der pehle kaun chilla raha tha?", he asked raising his eye-brows.

She came out of the trance and moved back from him, "Ohh... Haan..."

As soon as Zoya moved away, he went near his cupboard to grab a T-Shirt.

"Rehne dijiye na Mr. Khan", she merely whispered drooling at him.

Asad heard her & turned around, "Kuch kaha aapne?"

"No... Nahi...", she looked away biting her lower lip. He was amazed & smiled as he turned again.

He wore his T-Shirt and asked her again, "Miss. Faruqui waise to aap humesha hi chillati rehti hai par aaj koi khaas wajah aapke chillane ki?"

"Allah Miyaan.!!! What's wrong with you Mr. Khan?? Mai chillati hu..??", she kept her hands on her hips and shouted at him.

He grabbed her hand and made her sit on the bed. He was about to sit next to her when she got up immediately. Asad was confused and was about to ask her when she said, "Mai yaha baithne nahi aapko kuch dene aayi hu. Aapne kal ka din mere liye itna khaas bana diya. Wo surprise Birthday Party. Wo Ayaan aur Humeira ka act. Wo mera favorite cake."

She was lost in her b'day party again. She caressed the watch she was wearing, "Aur ye watch. Sabse jyada ajjej."

She turned and said, "Mai aapko kuch dena chahti hu. Aankhein band kijiye."

He looked at her and was about to ask her when she brought her hands on his eyes and closed them. She took his hand and guided him towards her room. She asked him to open his eyes once they were standing near the bed. He was shocked & surprised to see the beautiful collage in front of him. It was a round collage with his, ammi & Tamatar's photo in the center. The photo was surrounded by numerous other photos. His and Ayaan, his & Nikhat, his & Nuzhat, NajRan's & FarNik's wedding photo with him. Zoya's B'day photo which she clicked - Asad, Ayaan, Humeira, Nuzhat & Dilshad. And then was the third round were his & Zoya's photos were placed. It was so beautiful. Asad was overwhelmed seeing the photo. Zoya saw the happiness reaching his eyes. She hold his hand and said, "Yeh mera Shukriya hai aapke liye."

He pulled her and hugged her tightly. He was so happy seeing the collage & his emotions were overflowing. He muttered in her ears, "Yeh Shukriya bhi aap hi ki tarah behad khoobsurat hai."

They both smiled hugging each other.

Silent tears were flowing from Asad's eyes seeing the collage on the wall. Seeing him like that Zoya clutched the photo frame near her heart more tightly.

Song in Background:

Zoya entered the room and sat near Asad.

Hum aaa hey yaa...

Hum aaa hey yaa...

Humeira too entered the room and sat near Ayaan.

Hum aaa hey yaa...

Hum aaa hey yaa...

Zoya wiped Asad's tears.

Ohhu ohhhooohh...

How can I love you more...

Humeira wiped Ayaan's tears.

Ohhuu ohhhooohhh...

How can I love you more...

Ayaan slept in Humeira's lap.

Mere sang tu chal jara, kyun dikhe dara dara

Asad hugged Zoya and kept his head in her crook of neck.

Mere sang tu chal jara, kyun dikhe dara dara

Zoya hold him tightly.

Chal tujhko aa chupalu apani main baahon mein

Humeira closed Ayaan's eyes with her hands.

Chal khaab kuchh saja du teri inn nigaahon mein

She caressed Ayaan's hairs.

Main jo sang hoon tere rang hoon, raahon se teri chun lu main khaab

Har lamaha yuun gujare ke gehraata jaaye pyaar...

Zoya caressed Asad's back.

Main jo sang hoon tere rang hoon, raahon se teri chun lu main khaab

Har lamaha yun gujare ke gehraata jaaye pyaar...

Zoya broke the Hug and made Asad stand up.

Hum aaa hey yaa...

Hum aaa hey yaa...

She made him sit on his bed and gestured him to sleep.

Hum aaa hey yaa...

Hum aaa hey yaa...

He refused and just hugged her from her abdomen. She could feel him crying & his hold made her realize that he was so scared.

Ohhu ohhhooohh...

How can i love you more

Ayaan removed Humeira's hand and looked at her tear-stricken face. He looked at her with gratitude.

Ohhuu ohhhooohhh...

How can i love you more

How can i love you more

Humeira smiled at him through tears.

Hasde jaraasa tu teri hansi se mere kal ho hasi,

Bas itna chahu mai iss Zindagi se jyada kuchh nahi...

Zoya remembered Asad smiling at her & his dimples.

Hasde jaraasa tu teri hansi se mere kal ho hasi,

Bas itna chahu mai iss Zindagi se jyada kuchh nahi...

She assured him that she is with him by caressing his hairs.

Main jo sang hoon tere rang hoon, raahon se teri chun lu main khaab,

Har lamha yun gujare ke gehraata jaaye pyaar...

Humeira assured Ayaan through her eyes that she will always be their with him and Ayaan hugged her through her abdomen in her lap.

Main jo sang hoon tere rang hoon, raahon se teri chun lu main khaab,

Har lamha yun gujare ke gehraata jaaye pyaar...

Screen splits on AsYa & AyRa.

Hum huma hey yaa...

Hum huma hey yaa...

Hum huma hey yaa...

Hum huma hey yaa...

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Love,

Angel 🤗

Edited by angel2930 - 11 years ago
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Good job dear very well written
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Originally posted by: loveuarmaanu

Good job dear very well written



thnks a lot dear...😊
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awww u brought out despair love longing so well
continue soon
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Originally posted by: AnjuRish

awww u brought out despair love longing so well

continue soon



thnks a lot dearie...🤗

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