Without Justification of Characters, SwaRon Scene's make No Sense!!

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Posted: 12 years ago
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Well Swayam Wishing Sharon was around, made me feel happy...Seeing Swayam miss Sharon felt good...Sharon coming and saying 'tum mujhe ignore kyun kar rahe ho' was a sweet touch...Swayam Missing and hallucinating Sharon made me say 'Yes Swayam's Lover side is there, it exists'...but then I'm LOT more disappointed than Happy
Swayam missed Sharon why? so she could handle rey and convince him 😳 Thats how Loverboy Swayam is?? he doesn't miss her for not being with him? he doesn't miss her coz she makes him feel better when she is around? He doesn't miss her coz he loves her??
the SwaRon canteen scene din't make any sense to me like yesterday's messaging scene, today Canteen scene was full of Casualness and abruptness 😳 these days SwaRon scene's are anything but truly SwaRon scene's, written for SwaRon Storyline 😕 and to top it, the scene was SO badly written, Shot and edited 👎🏼 dialogues toh mashaallah _/\_ 🥱
I say Badly written because, Swayam is missing sharon for he wasn't able to handle things out or handle Rey/Kria situation and then he hallucinating makes no sense first of all!! It would make sense if it was shown that he missed having her around or he was missing Sharon, So he hallucinates...Next thing is When Sharon comes and he questions 'tum sach mein ho' She pinches him, so obviously he knows she is there for real and Still after talking, he makes her wait and touches her hand to Confirm??? 😳 He was talking to his own-self till then???😕 Ullu-gadha hai kya Swayam? That he'll talk to her about some serious matter at hand in a trance???😳 I understand they wanted to give a nice SwaRon moment but then this way with no proper base? Even If I say Swayam just wanted to just hold her hand coz somewhere he is turning majnu again, but What makes him change??😕 there hasn't been anything that justifies it😕
there has been NOTHING where it is shown Why Swayam doesn't want to hold himself back anymore...there hasn't been anything that says Why they are behaving so casual with each other😕 How am I suppose to digest the fact that Sharon got a chance to speak to Swayam alone and She dint make ANY attempt to tie back the loosened knot of their relationship??? How am I suppose to understand Why Swayam is behaving as if they both don't have any problem with each other that has to be solved???
They are in a phase after break-up and Still they don't feel anything towards each other when they are sitting with each other???😲 and talk casually about how their friends are doing??😲😡
Holy Lord!!!! WHY are they Crushing all the feelings that SwaRon ever had???😒 and If they don't mean to do anything like that, Why are they not justifying Swayam-Sharon's characters?? So that we understand WHY SwaRon are behaving this way??? 😒
Without Justification, SwaRon scene's are NOT making any sense to me😒 Please For God Sake Justify their Characters before they turn nonsensical 😒

PS: I dint even understand why they had to show Sharon actually vanishing? are we some kids watching some cartoon???😳 It should have been like Swayam closing his eyes and when he opens Sharon wasn't there..It wasn't necessary to show us how Sharon vanished 😳 It looked weird🥱

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Posted: 12 years ago
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dude however u r take my bow ..awesome post I so agree wid u..I was thinking f making the post like dis...
though I like the scene..in past 3 weeks best SwaRon scene in respect f screenspace...
bt seriously the conversation seems baseless to me..I m totally confused about Swayam's mood swings...wat he is doing he himself dont knw...he got carried away wen Sharon is near him sometimes toh kabhi he just want her to b away frm her...wat he is about seriously Der is a NEED OF SWAYAM'S MONOLOGUE NOW To get the better picture about where story is heading...
n Sharon after "kitni baatien sequence" she is all casual..she said she has some plan to win back swayam...when she is executing her plan?was her plan is to again lie n pretend in front f swayam dat she has become a better person nw so dat she cn win back his trust back..den let me tell u..ISSE BAKWAS aur kuch ho nai skta tha dat she is still lying to swayam...so again NOW ITS HIGH TO KNOW WATS IN SHARON'S MIND

today's scene though swayam missed Sharon fr rey/kriya bt Der is a positive sign dat he missed her...he believe dat he n she make better team den individual swayam n Sharon...I just hope soon will get proper justification about everything n today is the start f SwaRon's journey again..I dont want today's scene to b included in list f fillers -_-
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Awesome post dear..i agree to the points u have specified

I liked the scene as it gave SwaRon their much deserved screen space but it had its loopholes ...Swayam didnt miss Sharon out of love...he missed her as he was not able to handle his friends and their issues...Swayam imagining Sharon was good but the reason of missing her was not at all acceptable...the casualness and abruptness was something annoying ...the sudden casualness between SwaRon didnt make any sense ...though they are trying to show Swayam softening towards Sharon because of her friendly approach towards Kriya...we are yet to get a proper monologue from Swayam which will be about him and Sharon...no-one else...we really hope CVs will concentrate SwaRon story from their POV..the main issue between Swayam-Sharon is TRUST ...which can not be repaired on any 3rd person being the base of it..it has to be Swayam-Sharon and their issues...


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Posted: 12 years ago
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Great post!! 👍🏼 I def liked today's scene, I wouldn't lie...after 3 weeks of drought and nonsensical scenes - this was like a breath of fresh air with some positivity and hopes that this is a start of a new phase that will lead to patch up, good SWARON scenes etc...
BUT, the things that felt so artificial to me was Swayam repeating "I miss you Sharon" again and again...he did not even utter a single dialogue of missing you yesterday - but today its everywhere 😆 this made me think - if the CVs came up with this scene at the last min to make SWARON fans happy after reading all our bashing posts 😕

Badly, need Swayam's and Sharon's monologue or both should have a conversation abt them - so that we can really understand where SWARON is heading!!


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Posted: 12 years ago
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I agree with u!

i liked first part of scene where swayam was missing Sharon but disappointed with their convo!

Its like swayam is liking Sharon and behaving normally/good with Sharon becoz she is able to solve his friends problems and if Sharon will fail to solve then she is not changed, back to square one.. Swayam will judge Sharon this way..wow!

No doubt swaron scene gave me smile but scene make sense if I choose to forget whatever happened between them in past!

I m disappointed with this storyline or I should say no proper storyline for swaron...

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Posted: 12 years ago
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I so agree with you.. Koz if u really watch the scene taking into consideration everything that has been happening between them, it wont make any sense.. But u know wat.. I have learnt to take wat I get n be happy with it.. compared with wat we've been getting from past 3 weeks, that is NOTHING AT ALL, this scene was enjoyable.. So I'm trying not to overthink it n go with it.. Oh I'm disappointed alright with how SwaRon is being handled.. but I'm trying to be happy with what I'm getting.. 😒
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Posted: 12 years ago
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I wasn't disappointed, but I wasn't happy also. My reaction was kind of neutral to the happenings.
Few things I liked: 1] Swayam THINKING about Sharon, and I'm not paying heed to the actual purpose of him missing her.

2] Swayam ACCEPTING that she can resolve things and he actually thought about the old times when he had snapped at her for being impulsive

Things which I didn't like:

1] Swayam missing her because he needs help to solve issues related to HIS friends

2] Swayam being in a perpetual denial and confused mood, that's so not LIKE HIM!!

All I need to see henceforth is a CONTINUITY in their SwaRon, coz I just can't wait any longer

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Posted: 12 years ago
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Frankly i was not disappointed
but i couldn't connect myself with it today as well because that kriya thing is always revolving around SwaRon
he could not see any kind of change when that girl was not in the show & suddenly because of that girl only Swayam is talking to Sharon properly
& realizing she's changed .
Which means at the end Kriya will get all the credits once again ..
common viewers will think like that only na !
what's behind all this strategy I'm not getting it..what will they get by doing such craps
though i loved the scene after 3 freaking weeks

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Posted: 12 years ago
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Originally posted by: purvi_91

dude however u r take my bow ..awesome post I so agree wid u..I was thinking f making the post like dis...
though I like the scene..in past 3 weeks best SwaRon scene in respect f screenspace...
bt seriously the conversation seems baseless to me..I m totally confused about Swayam's mood swings...wat he is doing he himself dont knw...he got carried away wen Sharon is near him sometimes toh kabhi he just want her to b away frm her...wat he is about seriously Der is a NEED OF SWAYAM'S MONOLOGUE NOW To get the better picture about where story is heading...
n Sharon after "kitni baatien sequence" she is all casual..she said she has some plan to win back swayam...when she is executing her plan?was her plan is to again lie n pretend in front f swayam dat she has become a better person nw so dat she cn win back his trust back..den let me tell u..ISSE BAKWAS aur kuch ho nai skta tha dat she is still lying to swayam...so again NOW ITS HIGH TO KNOW WATS IN SHARON'S MIND

today's scene though swayam missed Sharon fr rey/kriya bt Der is a positive sign dat he missed her...he believe dat he n she make better team den individual swayam n Sharon...I just hope soon will get proper justification about everything n today is the start f SwaRon's journey again..I dont want today's scene to b included in list f fillers -_-

bold: he getting carried away is considerable but then he not even alerting himself from again softening up looks absurd...and if he really wanna soften up and give it a chance, then question arises, WHY and HOW he has come to that point?😕 so in short justification is needed, that too a proper full fledged FOR SwRon stoyline..
and this scene surely goes into list of fillers😳
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Originally posted by: _Deepika_

Awesome post dear..i agree to the points u have specified

I liked the scene as it gave SwaRon their much deserved screen space but it had its loopholes ...Swayam didnt miss Sharon out of love...he missed her as he was not able to handle his friends and their issues...Swayam imagining Sharon was good but the reason of missing her was not at all acceptable...the casualness and abruptness was something annoying ...the sudden casualness between SwaRon didnt make any sense ...though they are trying to show Swayam softening towards Sharon because of her friendly approach towards Kriya...we are yet to get a proper monologue from Swayam which will be about him and Sharon...no-one else...we really hope CVs will concentrate SwaRon story from their POV..the main issue between Swayam-Sharon is TRUST ...which can not be repaired on any 3rd person being the base of it..it has to be Swayam-Sharon and their issues...


red: If they are trying to show that, I don't know How we are suppose to relate to it?😕 because the Swayam we know Loves Sharon unconditionally and he NEVER let his love get affected of how Sharon behaves with his friends or anyone for that matter...Swayam who wasn't ready to soften up to her even after her direct attempts to him, he'll soften up because how she behaves with Kria?😳 thats illogical :/
like you said it cannot be repaired with 3rd person being the base of it...It HAS to be Swayam-Sharon and thier Issues..

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