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Posted: 11 years ago
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She finally had enough, enough of saying i will make everything alright, enough of trying to justify to radhaji, enough of pabho enough of dipali, she walked out for good there was no going back, she was going to live her life by herself and rk will live his life with his woh, no more let him have his woh his dipali no more.

Madhu called Bittuji and asked if Steve was still interested in her for the movie she was going to take up the role. Three months passed quickly, madhu live at chawl with Roma.
At RK mansion rk did not even know that madhu had left, her clothes hung up in wardrobe, patil opened drapes in the morning and left his cup of tea next to his bed and then disappeared, once or twice rk asked where madhu is, pabho told him she was at madhir or gone out, never did she say that madhu had left him, as she knew if she did rk would go after his madhu.

The new film was another blockbuster, off the charts madhubala did it again, Rk did not even read the papers because there was photos of madhu, he didnt even know that madhu had acted in another film, all he knew he was having fun with his new friend. At night time he thought he was sleeping with madhu but the reality was he was in bed with dipali. she would make him so drunk that he had no idea what was going on in his life.

Madhu refused to talk to radhaji, as soon as she would call either madhu would switch the phone off, or Roma would say to Radhaji that Madhu is busy and when she free that she would call her. Madhu no longer wanted the heart ache ,he pain or hear about how rk was, she was living her life and he was his.

Madhu remembered that night she read the papers like before and trusted rk but this was different photos of him and Ria all over him, Madhu walked downstairs,she heard pabho and dipali talking and heard how rk listened to dipali about the movie about the baby, listened to how pabho and dipali created differences between them but this time she had enough of fighting, fighting for her love her home her everything, her junoon for him had gone, she still loved him nothing was going to change that but for him to tell her Ria means more than her to him and that she no longer had value in his life, madhu knew she had lost the battle she was not going to fight anymore it was over for her..

Radhaji had packed her bags as she was going to leave, she was going to Dehli away from all of this, she decided to see Rk first thing in the morning, she walked into Rks room there she had the biggest shock of her life, dipali sleeping on rk chest, Radha ji screams DIPALI RISHU, Dipali wakes up shocked at seeing Radhaji and Rk wakes up and says "Biwi go and see what ma is screaming about".. Radhaji looks at him " i am happy madhu left at least she did not see this" RK looks at Radhaji "i am sleeping with my biwi not my friend" "you are so drunk you cannot even see you are sleeping with your bhabi Rishu not your biwi she left over 3 months ago" Rk looks over at dipali and gets shocked, he jumps out of bed and starts to scream "OUT OUT". Radhaji looks at Rk and walks out.

Radhaji calls security and asks them to pack sikki and dipalis things, dipali tells radhaji that she is not going anywhere, Rk comes down, " yes you are" Rk shouts. " no more freeloading LEAVE" Sikki pleads "RK turns his back and say "sikki leave now the day madhu and i lost our baby was the day you should have left before i have you arrested for attempted murder" RK felt guilty as he did not want to tell sikki the truth. He asked the driver to take them to their own home.

Rk calls out to bittuji, radhaji looks at him n says" bittuji left a long time ago soon after madhu you threw him out" RK puts his hand on his head "where is madhu?" "Rishu she wants nothing to do with you, nothing to do with me, she refuses to talk to me." Rk tries to call Madhus number it gets disconnected.

let me know if you want me to continue


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Posted: 11 years ago
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nice start
but dear the track already is so depressing
will this story also be depressing ?
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Awesome! Outstanding! Marvelous! work that's what I want in the show.. Madhu leave RK for good and never comes back no matter what. Cut ties with Kundra... live her life and let him live his life with whoever he wants, be it with Ria or Deepali or both, and in the process if he destroy himself then, it will be icing on the cake coz that's what he deserve..

Or I want Madhu to die that way Rk will be guilty for ever and viewers get mukthi from the show.. Sayonara everyone...

PS. write the 2nd part.. love your writing...


Edited by SVK1234 - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago
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nice one...continue soon😊
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Posted: 11 years ago
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plz make it positive os already too much negativity in show
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Continue. PLEASE continue!!

If not on the show, then at least here I can read about a smart and strong Madhu!

well written!
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Do continue
Love the fact that Madhu took a stand and refused to be treated like shit anymore
Hope she makes a new life without the baggage called RK
He doesnt deserve her
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Well written,I want to see this Madhu in show too.Plz Continue..
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Posted: 11 years ago
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continue but do give it a happy ending
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Nice start, pls pls continue soon

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