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Posted: 11 years ago
#11
stopped watching the show since November...cant see Madhu fighting everyone to save her marriage and her husband just treating her like trash...

u continue dear...
its nice...
RK should learn his lesson very damn hard this time...
even if he grovels Madhu should never forgive him...
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Posted: 11 years ago
#12
Nice start!! Love to see what happen after!
Please don't make Dipali pregnant with RK's baby 🤣
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Chalo acha hua madhu ne rk ko chod diya
cont soon dont frgt to pm me
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Posted: 11 years ago
#14
Thanks everyone

no diapli is not get preggy with rks baby..


will do part two soon
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Posted: 11 years ago
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part 2

Dipali calls out to pabho, she comes out of her room " Dipali why are you shouting have you forgotten i pray at this time" Dipali pleads with Pabho "please pabho tell rk not to throw us out plse." Radhaji speaks "its not just Rishu that wants you out i want you out of here i want you out of Rishus life, my mistake was to let you and sikki stay here after what kukku ji did", Dipali cuts her eye n looks towards pabho, "pabho i have alway helped you", Pabho looks at Dipali " no dipali you and sikki need to make your own life instead of living free of Rishu" Dipali looks at her in disgust.. Rk looks at her "ma and pabho also want you out now GET Out".

Dipali says "ok but before i go let me tell you how your pabho planned to get rid of madhu" Pabho shouts "Dipali dont tell your lies here", Dipali starts from what the priest said then how pabho wanted madhu out first the rats in mandir then the leaving madhu in the lake, even admitting to giving madhu papaya with abortion pill and why madhu lost the baby, RK looked at pabho shocked, including radhaji. Pabho tries to justify telling rk that madhu staying in his life would be his downfall, RK says to pabho madhu not being in his life is his downfall, RK starts to break things bittuji was right bittuji was right that i would lose madhu altogether, Radhaji tries to stop him, pabho comes to her and says let him get her our of his system, he is better off without her, Radhaji looks at her and says "he is better off without you, what type of person are you certainly not one of gods who would do harm to a innocent baby" Radhaji goes over to Rk he looks at her "meri madhu she has left me" he hugs her "ma what am i going to do".
RK starts to think about taking back his life, Rk tells security to take pabho back to any ashram in India he wants nothing to do with her, she pleads with him but he just looks at her and walks away, as for sikki and dipali he tells sikki the truth about what dipali has been doing whilst he was drunk, he tells him that he can stay but has to get rid of the baggage, Sikki was devastated he grabs dipalis arm with her bag throws her out she pleads with him how she helped him when the police was after him, he looks at her "i loved you with all my heart but all you wanted was your ex boyfriend my brother well guess what you get non of us go back to the chawl seeing as that is where you came from."
RK calls Bittuji at first he does not answer but then after the third time Bittuji answers, "chief how can i help you, do you need some daru or a cheap date ?" "Bittuji i am sorry" bittuji replies " Chief so am i as i dont have time to listen to bakwas" he puts the phone down.

Bittuji shakes his head, he looks up n sees madhu doing a photoshoot n smiles, bhabhiji is better off without him, he tells her after the shoot rk called, she looked at him n looks away go and see if everything is ok as ma keeps phoning me as well, i hope all is well, bhabi ji chief must have lost a whiskey bottle, n madhu then says "ma wants me to come n make everything alright" she shakes her head, n remembers her pain losing their baby how everyone blamed her a single tear runs down her cheek. Bittuji leaves.

Back at RK mansion, Rk looks round his bedroom, madhu presence is their he sees her by the door, by the wardrobe he closes his eyes n sees her smiling, he opens his eyes full of tears what has he done, lost his true love his madhu what was he going to do. Just then a knock at the door RK tells them to come in, he hears Bittuji voice " chief how are you?" RK looks at him " i have lost i have lost madhu can you get her back for me"?



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Posted: 11 years ago
#16
superb update
wish madhu comes back
hope they start afresh
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Posted: 11 years ago
#17
Nice update..
liked the way RK n sikky threw dipali..
pabho also deserved it..
hope madhu comes back.. continue soon
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Hey SuksšŸ¤—

Amazing Update! I was eagerly waiting for the second part! I loved the Madhu in your story! This is the Madhu I am dying to see in the serial! The woman with a spine, who picks up her self respect and dignity and walks out on RK! Not the Main sab theek kar doongi chant Madhu!

Lovely display of emotions, of Madhu, RK and Radha! I loved Radha here, she didnt swing like a pendulum and she told Pabho off too!

Please PM me the next part! And you better continue!😈

Love,
Mayu
Edited by -Mayu- - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago
#19
Nyc update but u have not updated ur ff since 7 or 8 mnths
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Posted: 11 years ago
#20
Very very nice waiting next part .

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