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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: dramagirl123

Seriously they should just hire you as the writer for Rabir scenes. I was blushing throughout the whole thing ☺️


i wish they do
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Posted: 11 years ago

so less comments on previos chapter i m dissappointed...people...r u not liking????

Chapter 8

Rachna rushes to her room and closes the door Meanwhile Kabir is still in the hall thinking of what he just did...Rachna sits on the bed besides Nitya who is already in deep sleep and thinks whatever happened between her and Kabir..their first encounter...their first touch in car ...their night in the hotel room and now this...Rachna remembered everything and was blushing red...if anyone wud see her face he wud really confuse it with a big tomato all red...

Rachna(to herself): I don't know what thios feeling is but it is making me happy...but then she remembers her conversation with Gunjan Ehich the two sisters had once had..

Flashback

Rachna: Gunjan...u luv Mayank bhaiya a lot na ...

Gunjan: u have any doubt?

Rachna: I mean how u came to know bhaiya is the r8 person ...come on so many guys wud have tried to woo u..

Gunjan: what do u think ur brother didn't try to woo me?

Rachna: oh!! come on Gunjan ..tell how u differentiated b/w real luv n all that show off...

Gunjan : I don't know ur brother was different that feeling came differently..well I advice u dear if anyone tries to get closer take time understand and then respond...bcz heart is precious so is trust ..if it breaks once its difficult to mend it..

Flashback ends...

Rachna thinks if KT's charms are effecting her ...

Rachna(to herself): its not long since I have known him ...may be just needs a frnd...or..may be...oh! God rac hna stop it and sleep..

Kabir in the hall ..sat down putting his hand on his heart..

Kabir(to himself) : why is my heart beating so fast ..what is it...and what I just did..what wud be she thinking about me...I just wanted to say thanks...wait !!did i really wanted to just say thanks.!!!I don't know what this is ..but Rachna is different ...she is special...oh!man wts this...

Next morning

They all are gettig ready to leave ..Kabir decides to take one car only ...

Kabir and nitya sit in front and Dadi & Rachna at back ...

All through the way Rachna and Kabir tried to look in each othrer's eyes through the mirror...finally they reached home...

Rachna got down at her place n before getting down Dadi gave her a good bye kiss at her forehead and Kabir looked on ...how desperately he wanted to talk to the girl only he knewed ...n the girl...but only their eyes met and spoke a lot...

Kabir's studio..

Nitya : how was the trip and how was the night u and rachna spent together...

Kabir: Nitya, we need to focus on work..

Nitya: is that the reason u sent rachna home bcz u need to focus...

Kabir: nitya stop it or

Nitya: or else u will fire me...come on do that...

Kabir : what do u want..

Nitya: accept the fact Kabir that u r in love with that girl ..I can see it in ur eyes ...

Kabir: Nitya ..u know it tbat I don't believe in love...all this is nothing..

Nitya : just say this thing by looking into my eyes ...

Kabir: I need to be alone..

Nitya: tell her that u love her before its too late Kabir..plz ...just do it

Rachna's place

Rachna is in her room asleep ...

Everyone at her home is talking about Aditya's parents proposal to get the two married...

Shail: there wud be nothing more gud ...more than this ..they both k: Inow each other..and I think they even like each-other..we shud think about this alliance..

Dayal(Rachna's father): I think its nice We have all seen Adi ..he has been here for this long..Rachna & he are gud frnz..we can think abot it..

Adi enters...

Adi:hello everyone...Well so I am soon going to become a part of family..am I?

Shail: who said u r not family ..beta..u r a part of this family u were yesterday and tomorow also u will be...

Adi : cn i meet Rachna ?

Shail: she is sleeping..u can meet her afterwards...

Adi : f9 ...

In the evening

Rachna gets a sms to come on roof..from adi..

Rachna goes on rooftop ...and finds it all decorated...with flowers and lights..

Adi is waiting for her...and asks her for a dance ...Rachna ias hesitant but complies..and they start dancing ..Rachna gets flashbacks of her dance with Kabir...

Adi stops and bends on his knees to propose Rachna...

Rachna : Adi..!!!

Adi: Rachna ..will u marry me..

Rachna: Adi!! if its a joke Im not interested ...n turns to leave.

Adi pulls her to him: u consider it to be a joke??I am serious our parents want us to get married ..but I don't want to get married without knowing wts in ur heart..tell m,e r u ready?

Rachna : I don't know Adi..u r nice ..u r cute..n most n fr me u r really imp but I never saw u as love of my life..I need time Adi I need time...to decide..

Adi: as u wish..i wud never presuurise u rachna but i need a promise that even if its a no...it wont affect our friendship ..I can't bear to loose u I wont get a true friend like u ..

Rachna comes to him and hugs him ...believe me Adi..nothing will change we were frirnds and we will be...

Kabir who is feeling rwstless comes to the balcony n sees Rachna and Adi hugging each other...

Kabir clutches his fist..n just moves away from there ..he feels like just running away from everything ...just leaving everything aside...

Rachna & Adi come downstairs and Rachna went to her room sitting on her bed..she remembered how Adi saved her from goons but she remembers Kabir then ...everytime she thougt of time spent with Adi she thougt of Kabir...she remembered that hw excited her family is for her marriage..but then she remembered Adi's words that the last decision wud be hers...

Kabir is walking on the road with a bottle of wine in his hand and drinking ..he sat down on the rfoad all drunk ...remebering what he saw ...he remembered all his romantic encounters with Rachna but then all the times when he saw Rachna with Adi flashed in his mind...he remebered something and got up and went to house ansd rang the door bell ..

Nitya opened the door and got terribly shocked seeing Kabir in that condition...Kabir entered the house

Kabir(in fully drunken state):u were right nitya u were r8 ..n he trembles..but nitya comes and supports him..

Meanwhile at Garg's place Rachna decides to speak with some one on this whole matter as she is totally confused and she walks oot of the house...

Nitya's place

Kabir: u know what history repeated itself...mah mom left mah Dad..n now Rachna left me...!1

Nitya: kabir ..relax... u r drunk u r trembling oh!man n wt nonsense u r talking stop uit..

Kabir: nonsense ...u think I m nonsense...even u r like everyone else ..u will also leave me one day...

Nitya: Kabir ..plz just stop n who said I will leave u ..I will be there by ur side Kabir come wtever may ..bcz I m ur frnd she cups his face..N Kabir just holds her tight in his arms and Says u won't ever leave me na Nitya..

Nitya: Kabir ..I won't ...I won't ...

Rachna sees Kabir & Nitya in THAT way n rushes out from there...

Flashback

Rachna had decided to see Nitya bcz she felt Nitya was the r8 person to talk to...she knew that she wud guide her..

Flashback ends ..

Rachna enters her home n heads towards Adi's room and enters

Adi: rachna u.. at this hour?

Rachna rushes to him and hugs him tightly n cries...

Adi: Rachna is everything O.K. ?

Rachna : I want to get married Adi ...as soon as possible...we have to start our life newly ..

Adi: u sure Rachna !!!

Rachna breaks the hug ..

Rachna: bfore i wasn't but now i am ...

Next chapter

Rachna & Adi are getting engaged and Nitya looks towards Kabir whpo pretends to be happy

Nitya is walking on the road all lost a car comes near and is about to hit her but someone pulls her


Dont forget to comment...

AnjaliPunia thumbnail
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Posted: 11 years ago
i know u people r gonna bash me for this chapter but seriously...t was needed twists n turns.r the main element..keep tuned how our love birds realise they cant be without each other
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Posted: 11 years ago
OMG both love each other but r separated due to misunderstanding
i feel sad for them😭
Please unite them & some romantic scenes
Nice update
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Posted: 11 years ago
misunderstanding 😭 😭 😭
awww poor Rachna and Kabir both saw each other with their BF and drew he wrong conclusion.. hopefully it gets s sorted out/... hopefully we have a full filmy confession
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Posted: 11 years ago
What yaar, i thought i will read a nice and romantic chapter and i end up reading misunderstanding, i m sad now please do something to clear misunderstandings quieckly dont take too long like in the show. Anyway nice update and well written, update soon.
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Posted: 11 years ago
You are truly amazing in telling stories, but please unite them soon .. Waiting for a romantic confession..
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Posted: 11 years ago
I am back 😎 Just read chapter 7 and 8 was busy with sister in law's wedding 😡

Chapter 7

This chapter is fabulous. Every scene is well written and i loved everything about it. Especially when he helped with her feet, the awkward moment in Nitya's room and of course the last scene where he dance with her and gift her the locket. It was expectable act from kadoos KT very soon 😆 Too good.

And i must say Nitya is very sweet. I hope she don't end up fall for kabir 😃


Chapter 8

I hate you for this chapter 😆 Just kidding 😉

I want such misunderstandings between them. Tabhi toh maza ayega 😆 there are chances to get more intense scenes along with this misunderstandings.

Kabir walking on the road with wine bottle 😲 😆 I like how Nitya taking care of him but i want her to stay away from Kabir, She is too close to him and i am not liking it. Kabir is only Rachna's, dont anyone dare to touch him 😆

Thanks for PMing. Please don't stop writing this FF. We are enjoying it to the core. We are living our dream Rabhir scenes through your FF only 😛 😆
Edited by MahimaSingh - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago
u seperated them for misunderstanding..no...its bad..pls unite them soon...waiting for the next one...hope it is full of gud news...
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Posted: 11 years ago
Superb... Awesome... Fabulous... The story is getting better and better each chapter. This twist and turns is good but please it should be rabir end of the day
Thanks for PM. Keep up your good work and update soon.

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