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Voyager

Posted: 11 years ago

#191

Read I think last three parts...

Awesome...👏

It was dhuedhaar... and no I didnt find any loopholes in it...😛

Everything investigative was handled very nicely... just like the series...😊

Sameer's entry in the story was too gud... I hope they have shown something like that in the show and not just pulled off his character ainveyi... koi base toh hota...

Anyhow, good job done...👍🏼

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Snehajain

@Snehajain

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Posted: 11 years ago

#192

Sorry for late...

Read last two parts...They were just fab. , awesome...

Rathod back...

I wish show mein bhi kuch aisa ho jaye...

Thanks for PM...

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Moner_Radio

@Moner_Radio

Rocker

Posted: 11 years ago

#193

kunchu :

commenting on the entire SS together .. it's just fantastic👏 ! not just the surprise of bringing back Rathore at the final encounter, but the entire build-up to the suspense with everyone getting threatening and criminals who can even outwit Arjun Raute by staying one step ahead of him every time .. in fact at one point when Arjun found the chit "Well Done ACP " from the curtains of the empty room , i was almost whistling for the suspect, even after knowing that he's a Criminal with a capital C. that was really cool⭐️👏 !

keep writing more such SS. your criminals are really cool 😉!

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Geeta

@Geeta.R

Voyager

Posted: 11 years ago

#194

Wooohooo sam is back!,

If only it can happen in the show too yaar miss his and rawtes face offs hehehe

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sashashyam

@sashashyam

Sparkler

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Posted: 11 years ago

#195

My dear Kunchu,

I do not know how I ended up not commenting on this chapter, but I must tell you that it is a very neat and competent finish. But that is hardly surprising, for you have always been very good at that!

I was delighted at the prospect of getting Rathore back, though it is obviously not going to happen in the serial, and the serial itself is going to be wound up soon, alas! What it needs to get another extension is an infusion of fresh characters, but if Shree too leaves, even that will not be enough.

To revert, I liked this SS a lot, but still, I prefer it when you write more emotional stories.

Shyamala Aunty

Hi all...
Last part of this SS.
I know I am not good in action. so please forgive any loopholes ya illogical points...

PART 6: