My Version of 'One day u will cross the limit' Must read

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Posted: 11 years ago
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"Ye lo haad, Ek din isi haad ko tod kar tum is taraff aaoge"

The most romantic and an intimate way of Taara to make her sexy, hot & Irresistible hubby run away from herself. well Tara bachu not so fast, how abt u get a tit for tat, in my version of "Ye lo haad, Ek din isi haad ko tod kar tum is taraff aaoge"

The scene of Taara coming in their room and then planning of getting MJ out of room was nice.

They entry of her coming in the pretending to be very sleepy and all climbing up to the bed and went so very close to MJ and sat beside him removing her duppata, was cute...I felt she was like trying to get his attention toward her (maybe wanting to have some lovey dovey moments with him, but kya kare she has to do what the Director says na).

Anyway coming back to Taara and her all antics of getting MJ out of room...

mere Pichhe Pichhe Mat Aana---imagination stretched https://www.indiaforums.com/forum/ek-boond-ishq/3846780/mere-pichhe-pichhe-mat-aana-imagination-stretched

( Read it here if u haven't, she had describe it very well, so I am not gonna bother writing all that from Taara point of view, but will continue my version of this)

So my story starts from here:

After wat seemed like almost 120 sec passes Taara slowly without making a moves opens one eyes to make sure if MJ has already left or not, scanning the room, keep in mind with just one eye open she takes a sigh relief and snaps open her both eyes saying "Chal tara bachu, tera plan kaam agaya and MJ went away from the roo"

"Ahhh" Taara screamed with her eyes squeezed shut feeling someone weight on her, once she was done with her screaming she snapped open her eyes only to come face to face with MJ smirking face. "TUM" Taara screamed pushing him off of her but to her luck she felt her self being pushed against the mattress. "U were going to Darkroom na" Taara asked MJ.

"haan but I changed my plan, just like u changed ur plan of not going to sleep" MJ replied.

Taara- par kyun...

"I can ask u the same question" MJ said smirking.

"haan wo tu main, I was just going to sleep, aab tum jao I am going to sleep" Taara says once again pretending to be sleepy

"I changed my mind" Mj said as he moved close to her face fanning her lips with his breath. "Mrityunjay ye kya kar rahe ho" Taara asked turning her face side way.

"Tumne hi kaha tha na Ek din main isi haad ko tod kar tumhari taraff aaunga" MJ left his sentence in mid and turned her face to face him.

Taara- Haan kaha tha tu

MJ- Tu main soch raha tha ek din pe kyun chodo, kyun na aaj hi is haad ko tod doon"

Taara- par tumne tu kaha tha umeed achi hai par puri nahi hogi

MJ- aur tumne bhi tu kaha tha umeed karna bhi kaun chatha hai

Taara- matlab

"so that means u were expecting me to cross the limit between us and come to u hai na" MJ said as he traced her face with the back of his hand making Taara to close her eyes. "Na-h-i" Taara replied in shaky voice as he she felt drown in his touch.

"Sach bol rahi" Mj asked tracing his finger along her jaw line to her neck, to her collarbone.

"ha-a-an" Taara replied clutching the side sheet in her fist, but then she reminded herself of her plan and the next minute she pushed him off of her and took the duppata that laid next to her and clutched it to herself and said "u were going to dark room na then go coz I am sleepy"

"why shd I go to dark room, this is my room, waise bhi I am sleepy now too so why don't we sleep together" saying that MJ pulled her back to laying and then hovered over her placing his head on her chest. "Mrityunjay ye kya kar rahe ho aap, aap mere upar kyun so rahe ho" Taara asked seeing him sleeping peacefully on her.

"Tum ne bola tha na to sleep in 3 feet ke jagha main" Mj said once again leaving his sentence unfinished knowing there will be a question raised from her side and he was right the next minute he heard her say "Haan tu"

MJ- haan tu I am sleeping na, u only told me to sleep in 3 feet ke jagha main, aab main khud tina lamba chura hoon tu 3 feet is so lil for me to sleep in, tu I was just using ur space too"

"Whattt" Taara snapped pushing him off of her.

MJ- taara stop pushing me, I am trying to sleep here, if ur not sleepy then plz go somewhere else.

Taara- tu when did i stopped u, if u want to sleep then sleep in this 3 feet ki jagha main why are u sleeping on me, main koi bed nahi isnaan hoon.

MJ- haan main kab kahan ke tum insaan nahi ho, but meri biwi tu hona" saying that he once again laid on her adjusting his body on her, making Taara to close her eyes and she thought to herself saying "Taara agar tu aaj is room main rahi na tu ye baalon ki factory aaj apni had zaror par kar dega, is se pahle ye kuch kar tu hi bhag jaa yeha se" saying that she pushes him off of her, grabbing her duppatta she ran out of the room leaving behind MJ to laugh like hell seeing a petrified Taara running away from him.



Hope it was worth reading to make u all laugh, agar laugh nahi tu hope it was worth bringing a smile on ur face guys...
DO leave ur comment and reviews...
-Mariam

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Posted: 11 years ago
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🤗Mariam 😲 yeh kya hai
u left me surprised ree when u said u r going
to make post on yesterday scene i was ha banle i would love to read
but this u wrote next story and woh bhi kya leekha hai 👏, have to say
you are very naughty ☺️, you said to me read but yeh bhool gai ke am 16 yaar 😆
comming to the scene funny🤣, romantic and MJ laughed kasam se
am dying to see his laugh 🤗 thank u for making him laugh in ur version ..
I loved the last part MJ is trying to sleep on 3 feet bed and tara bachu runs
this has to me my fav line😛
"Taara agar tu aaj is room main rahi na tu ye baalon ki factory aaj apni had zaror par kar dega, is se pahle ye kuch kar tu hi bhag jaa yeha se"
weekend mein maza dene keliye Big hug to u 🤗
Edited by S696_sehreen - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Originally posted by: S696_sehreen

🤗Mariam 😲 yeh kya hai

u left me surprised ree when u said u r going
to make post on yesterday scene i was ha banle i would love to read
but this u wrote next story and woh bhi kya leekha hai 👏, have to say
you are very naughty ☺️, you said to me read but yeh bhool gai ke am 16 yaar 😆
comming to the scene funny🤣, romantic and MJ laughed kasam se
am dying to see his laugh 🤗 thank u for making him laugh in ur version ..
I loved the last part MJ is trying to sleep on 3 feet bed and tara bachu runs
this has to me my fav line😛
"Taara agar tu aaj is room main rahi na tu ye baalon ki factory aaj apni had zaror par kar dega, is se pahle ye kuch kar tu hi bhag jaa yeha se"
weekend mein maza dene keliye Big hug to u 🤗



Tit for Tat to Taara
Hehe I did, Well I am glad I left u surprised...
hehe bana tu yesterday ke epi main...nah I know next story is Taara leaving ye story abhi nahi aani, uske liye abhi bauth time hai...naughty nd me, kya kah rahi hai yaar...
yaar der wasn't anything of Warning of 18+
Hehe glad u liked it
speaking of MJ laughing I am goiing to put a pic of his, laughing one
Hehe I loved that part too, last min main wo idea and thought it would be perfect to use in for that line...
Awww Big hugz to u too🤗
I am glad I make ur weeked mazedar😆
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Originally posted by: CrazzyBusy



Tit for Tat to Taara
Hehe I did, Well I am glad I left u surprised...
hehe bana tu yesterday ke epi main...nah I know next story is Taara leaving ye story abhi nahi aani, uske liye abhi bauth time hai...naughty nd me, kya kah rahi hai yaar...
yaar der wasn't anything of Warning of 18+
Hehe glad u liked it
speaking of MJ laughing I am goiing to put a pic of his, laughing one
Hehe I loved that part too, last min main wo idea and thought it would be perfect to use in for that line...
Awww Big hugz to u too🤗
I am glad I make ur weeked mazedar😆

Yes reading made me laughed so weekend mazedar hogay hai😃
hehehe nai i know koi warning nai hai but i dunno why aj kal
everyone keep calling me bacha😆
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Originally posted by: S696_sehreen

Yes reading made me laughed so weekend mazedar hogay hai😃
hehehe nai i know koi warning nai hai but i dunno why aj kal
everyone keep calling me bacha😆



Coz ur the only youngest one on EBI Forums yaar
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Originally posted by: CrazzyBusy



Coz ur the only youngest one on EBI Forums yaar

I know thats why i will hide my age from now 😆
and by the way i would love to see such a scene in future 😉
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Originally posted by: S696_sehreen

I know thats why i will hide my age from now 😆
and by the way i would love to see such a scene in future 😉



really but why...its fun to be the center of the attention
Like u said u wanted me to do Scene summary in my FF so I thought i will start with this, but it will be only on weekend on one scene that will be fun and romantic

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Posted: 11 years ago
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Originally posted by: CrazzyBusy



really but why...its fun to be the center of the attention
Like u said u wanted me to do Scene summary in my FF so I thought i will start with this, but it will be only on weekend on one scene that will be fun and romantic

na its not always fun
awww really thats why u came up with such a awsome idea of both romance and funny😳
yes i would love to read such a version from u 🤗
and no worry one is also enough atleast will get to see u :))
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Posted: 11 years ago
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na its not always fun
awww really thats why u came up with such a awsome idea of both romance and funny😳
yes i would love to read such a version from u 🤗
and no worry one is also enough atleast will get to see u :))




Ur right but it still fun to be
yup u got it
Yeah I will only get time to do one, even thought the college will be closed but my routine will be same...

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Posted: 11 years ago
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Wa wa wa...finally kuch to likha tumne something like aham aham...itna bhi nahi tha lekin jo bhi tha kamal ka tha...


Hayeee itna naughty mj ye out of imagination hai yaar...one day he will be the reason of tara as well as forum girls death

Gosh... tara bachhu tu to gayi...somebody plz tell cv to take some inspiration from you

Hayee I can't stop my smile yaar...this romantically naughtily cute story...

I m sure tara will even try to or even think to be alone with mj in room not forsleep only but also for fight...pata nahi patidev ka mood kab swing ho jaye and janab kya kar baithe...

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