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Posted: 11 years ago
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I love to see mj smiling...

But mj laughing... O god sone pe suhaga...

Kash kaisa show mein bhi ho...
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Originally posted by: kaveriw2008

Wa wa wa...finally kuch to likha tumne something like aham aham...itna bhi nahi tha lekin jo bhi tha kamal ka tha...


Hayeee itna naughty mj ye out of imagination hai yaar...one day he will be the reason of tara as well as forum girls death

Gosh... tara bachhu tu to gayi...somebody plz tell cv to take some inspiration from you

Hayee I can't stop my smile yaar...this romantically naughtily cute story...

I m sure tara will even try to or even think to be alone with mj in room not forsleep only but also for fight...pata nahi patidev ka mood kab swing ho jaye and janab kya kar baithe...



Yeah I finally did write something, ahem ahem, I don't this it was that ahem ahem...
Kya kare Directors are only making him show his tough and rough looks and angry young man tu I thought why not make him what we would only get to imagine on our own, ufff I wonder if the CV's will make him laugh whole hearty
Oh yeah Tara bachu was on a mission to get her hot sexy hubby out the roo end she is the one running for her life😆
and I can't stop smiling after reading ur comment😳
Hehe yeah, SHe will defo think after all this to stay with MJ alone or not kya pata kab MJ will be again on this romantic mood

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Posted: 11 years ago
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Originally posted by: Worldpeace

I love to see mj smiling...

But mj laughing... O god sone pe suhaga...

Kash kaisa show mein bhi ho...



Even I would love to see him smiling, infact all of us would want to see that
That sure would be sone pe suhaga, and of course Taara ka😉
I also hope something like this happens
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Originally posted by: CrazzyBusy



Yeah I finally did write something, ahem ahem, I don't this it was that ahem ahem...
Kya kare Directors are only making him show his tough and rough looks and angry young man tu I thought why not make him what we would only get to imagine on our own, ufff I wonder if the CV's will make him laugh whole hearty
Oh yeah Tara bachu was on a mission to get her hot sexy hubby out the roo end she is the one running for her life😆
and I can't stop smiling after reading ur comment😳
Hehe yeah, SHe will defo think after all this to stay with MJ alone or not kya pata kab MJ will be again on this romantic mood



U really made a beautiful morning for me

This is first what I read after wake up ...Thank god it was not read at night ...agar padh leti to tara ke saath saath meri bhi neende udd jati...lol

But seriously I can imagine tara's scary face and mj's mischievous smiling face...

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Posted: 11 years ago
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Originally posted by: kaveriw2008



U really made a beautiful morning for me

This is first what I read after wake up ...Thank god it was not read at night ...agar padh leti to tara ke saath saath meri bhi neende udd jati...lol

But seriously I can imagine tara's scary face and mj's mischievous smiling face...



Awww pleased to heard that dear
darn it why didn't u read it at night then, would have love to hear ur side of story how ur needn udd ti...
Hehe Count me into but only with MJ, I litterally had imagined his smirking and mischievous face while I wrote this...

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Posted: 11 years ago
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Frankly speaking dear after watching tara's daydream on dining table now it its very much easy for us to imagine mj in naughty sight because earlier in any of the scene we didn't see him smiling till his eyes ...

After watching that scene we can imagine naughty mj playing with tara...hayeee again lost, in mriyara land

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Posted: 11 years ago
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Originally posted by: kaveriw2008

Frankly speaking dear after watching tara's daydream on dining table now it its very much easy for us to imagine mj in naughty sight because earlier in any of the scene we didn't see him smiling till his eyes ...

After watching that scene we can imagine naughty mj playing with tara...hayeee again lost, in mriyara land



Haha that was such a romantic day dream of her... I wish do people in real have such a day dream?????
yaar aise day dream ane lage na tu rab Rakha ho hum ladkyun ka
uff His smiling part, gosh it was breath taking one, I literly rewatched that scene of his smiling whole hearly and the naughtiness that were lingering OMG it was sooo killing looks...
OK dear have to go now...
cya
Bye


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Posted: 11 years ago
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I love ur version. I wish it turned out like that or hopefully one day it will
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Mariam...
Brilliant take ...👏👏...loved reading it... was imagining the scene again while reading...😉

i gave importance on mj's line and u on tara's line ...and after that...nicely written and imagination extra stretched...👏

really weekends are going super fine with MriAra memories😆

Edited by sonalp - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago
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its hillarious.. tit for tat for tara
tfs

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