indradhanushs thumbnail
12th Anniversary Thumbnail Explorer Thumbnail
Posted: 11 years ago
#1

yuvreen os : love you forever

story is in yuvraj"s pov

As I drew the curtains off, a group of sparrows, flying back to their nest, caught my sight. The breeze of the impending dusk and the harmonious chirping of the little birds rejuvenated my senses. I turned back to the white-painted room; suvreen had kicked off her sandals and was trying to adjust pillows on the couch.

"Oh, what a hectic day it was!" she exclaimed.

"I think you have one more assignments today," I said while opening the windows. The sun appeared as an orange sphere trying to dive into the horizon.

"I don't think I will be able to take it," she yawned. "yuvraj , please massage my feet." Her hands went over her closed eyes.

"Yo mam! yuvraj singh at your service. You want tea or snacks too?" I laughed as few clouds appeared in the sky, all of a sudden. It might rain.

"I am serious, honey," she stretched her body.

I sat on the floor to massage her feet. They were as soft and tender as a bag full of cotton. As my hands went above to massage her legs, I saw her relaxing.

"yuvraj, this is the life I always dreamt to have," she sat and smiled like a flower blooming in the spring.

"What? You always wanted a servant to massage your body?" I asked surprised, staring at suvreen.

"No duffer! I always dreamt of having a life-partner like you." She took my head in her lap and drove her fingers through my hair. "Let us sue these priests. They are bad people," she said suddenly, irritated.

I laughed as my hands went to enwrap her waist, "Why?"

"First, they got us engaged so early and then set the marriage-date so late," her voice turned into a complaining tone. "Honey, do something na," she shook my body.

"Sorry. I have studied biology, not astrology. I am of no help," I grinned as I felt her stomach.

"No no, you are," she said, excited.

"How?"

"You can run away with me," she patted my back.

Surprised, I jumped on the couch, "And what would be the news headline then? supermodel yuvraj eloped away with his fiance, designer suvreen?" I laughed and kissed her forehead.

She hugged me.

"topper, I love you," I whispered in her ear.

"I love you too," she rubbed my back. "Promise me you'll never leave me."

"I promise you, we will always be together." My hands went over her chest; I could hear her heartbeats go loud.

"We will be together even if death drifts us apart. We are ..."

"Soulmates," I kissed beneath her ear. In the next moment, her pink lips had embraced mine. A strong wave of air brought the tiny drops of water in the room. It started to rain. I kissed the raindrop residing on her cheeks and slowly leaned forward on her. We kissed again, this time more passionately. Her eyes glimmered like a pearl and breath smelt minty.

"Stop now!" she put a pillow on my face.

"Why?"

"We aren't married yet."

"But we will be, soon," I snatched her pillow. She slid beneath me, through the smooth couch, and rested on the ground. Even though she did not let me do anything more, my lips curved a smile. I closed my eyes and thanked The Almighty for sending an angel in my life. Then, I caressed her. She held my hands and asked me to dance with her.

"We are responsible . We cannot play music in the office."

"I know that stupid!" she elbowed me. "Listen to the rhythm of your heartbeat and follow my steps." Her head rested on my chest. I put my left hand on her waist and she put her left hand on my waist.

Listen to the rhythm of your heart which beats with your name etched,
Soulful music caressing me with your smile bewitched.
Gently kissing my passionate dreams, your spirit softly speaks,
Words of eternal love in harmony, my heart sneaks.
With fragrance of your soul I dance with you my dear,
To live for aeons in your arms even our breaths vanish in the air!

We danced in the eerie silence of the iris as the sky bestowed on us its loving drops of water. Our love was an ocean of ecstasy filled with these tiny droplets.

As the sky roared to make its presence felt, suvreen clinched my fist. "Ouch, you pinched your nails in!" I exclaimed.

However, she did not seem to care. "Hey! It's beautiful. Come." Her eyes glanced outside the semi-circular balcony.

"You will catch a cold," I said, concerned. The floor had become slippery.

"Stop it yuvraj! I am not a kid."

"OK. Then let me bring the chairs."

"Don't behave like an uncle. Just come and have a look," she held my hand and pulled me to the balcony.

The sky had turned red and the rain was waning away.

"Isn't it beautiful, ?"

"Yes it is. And the most beautiful of all is you," I smiled. Her white apron over her blue dress made a beautiful contrast with the dusky scenario. Rain had stopped now. It seemed like playing hide-and-seek. The earthy smell and the cold breeze made me feel like there were endless tickles creeping inside me. I turned to topper. The breeze was constantly playing with her, causing strands of hair to move on and away from her face. It seemed as if they were playing piano on her cheeks. She passed her hands over her wet hair and smiled to me.

"suvreen, thank you for accepting my proposal," my emotions were willing to get out of my cool body to reach for her heart.

"You know what, I am so excited to get married." She took a deep breath as she wiped the water off her dress.

"So that you can ask me to massage your feet all the time, right?" I playfully made an angry face.

"No. Not just feet, whole body massage, mere cheeteh," she winked.

"Huh!" I turned away.

She laughed as she sprinkled some water on my face. "yuvraj, I have some other plans."

"What plans?"

"To wake you up daily with a kiss." She rested on the parapet.

"Just that?"

"Then, to hum the headlines of the newspaper like a song."

"And coffee?"

"Yes, yes. I'll make that too," she laughed.

"And then?" I closed my eyes.

"And when you will leave for the hospital, I'll be so lost inside your love that I'll whiff your presence on the bed, the pillows and the sheet."

I could see everything she was saying.

"I'll learn to make the best dishes for you, and even if I fail, I will hear your sweet curses. I'll listen to your heartbeats and your breaths." Her words were like honey pouring into my ears.

My body shivered in the cold ambience. With my eyes closed, I stretched my arms to embrace the whole world. "topper, I love you."

I turned and opened my eyes to her eyes. They were moist, I observed.

"yuvraj, we must marry . Now!"

"Yes!" I stepped forward with a smile on my face.

she hugged me quickly,

"i love you" she said.

i said" love you forever".

this is not my story , i just edited it with names, this forum lacks yuvreen writings so i did it.

please leave ur comments and likes if you like it.

and ,

i love YUVREEN
Edited by indradhanushs - 11 years ago

Created

Last reply

Replies

5

Views

1.4k

Users

6

Likes

10

Frequent Posters

JustMySelf thumbnail
12th Anniversary Thumbnail Rocker Thumbnail
Posted: 11 years ago
#2
very gud 👏..am so glad that more n more writers spl yuvreeians r typing hard n presenting us with pleasurable readings wen on d other hand d cvs hv decided to kill us with boredom 🤢..do write more 👍🏼
s1a5m1m2i thumbnail
12th Anniversary Thumbnail Explorer Thumbnail
Posted: 11 years ago
#3
Its rey a gud one!!! 👏⭐️
shanaya_shanu thumbnail
12th Anniversary Thumbnail Navigator Thumbnail Networker 1 Thumbnail
Posted: 11 years ago
#4
awesome and beautiful os dear
loved it👏👏
AnkitGuptaKiAC thumbnail
12th Anniversary Thumbnail Stunner Thumbnail + 4
Posted: 11 years ago
#5
gud OS dear...
write more for yuvreen...

loved it...
..chotu.. thumbnail
13th Anniversary Thumbnail Rocker Thumbnail + 3
Posted: 11 years ago
#6
I was guessing tht its not ur story coz at some places it did not match yuvreen...but still u were trying to increase writings in this forum n u took effort in editing...so gud work!

Related Topics

Top

Stay Connected with IndiaForums!

Be the first to know about the latest news, updates, and exclusive content.

Add to Home Screen!

Install this web app on your iPhone for the best experience. It's easy, just tap and then "Add to Home Screen".