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--Ta_Sha--

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Stunner

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Posted: 11 years ago

#551

Originally posted by: damonTVDrocks
Hey Tasha, plzz don't discontinue this one. It's an awesome story and I really like it. I'm sorry for not being able to comment large for the last few chapters, but I can't help it. I'm in 12th and am opting for medicine, so you can very well imagine my hectic schedule as the exams are nearing.😭 But I can assure you that I certainly read every one of the chapters and I would hate not being able to read it to the very last. So, plzz don't get demoralized and continue your writing cuz you are amazing!😛

dear i dont wanna discontinue but i cant help it

lets see what happens

thank u dear for ur love and support

its ok dear

keep trying to support this ff as much as possible

good luck for ur studies

thanks once again dear

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--Ta_Sha--

@--Ta_Sha--

Stunner

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Posted: 11 years ago

#552

Originally posted by: -Chaitra-
Hey Tasha😃...
first of all talking about ur note...or should i say warning😲
am really really sorry for not commenting for so long...i was actually very busy with my college...but i did read all ur updates and have liked them just to let u know i have not stopped reading...but anyway sorry for not commenting...😵
coming to the point i am really liking the way ur going ahead with the story...and really glad dat swaron are bonding well😉
they slept on the same couch just like their childhood...aww dat was cute😳
and what i loved the most was how sharon imagined the intimacy between her and swayam and then blushed realising it was a dream🤪 dat was amazingly penned down by u🤗
and the way swayam ordered her to make breakfast for him just to irritate her...it was just too good
am really lookinh forward to the story ahead... plzz do update soon...😊

PS: I really hope the comment is long enough to make u update super fast😛😆

hey chaitra

long time no see 😆

i guess my warning brought u out 😛

its ok

hope to see ur comments more from now on

i m glad u r liking the track

n the dream sequence

thanks once again

will b updating in couple of hours

yup it was long n hope i see it in future updates as well 😊

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Marium

@pehlanasha.

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Posted: 11 years ago

#553

Oyw, i swaer agar FF discontinue kya na tu bus dekh lena phir kher nahi tumhari! Got it...

I am hell busy is liye time nahi mil raha.. warna main bhi read karti yeh.. kuch 30 PMz story ke pending pe read karne hain.. promise will soon read it too! I luv this FF!

Don't u dare stop it! 😆

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--Ta_Sha--PMs

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Posted: 11 years ago

#554

Originally posted by: blush.
Oyw, i swaer agar FF discontinue kya na tu bus dekh lena phir kher nahi tumhari! Got it...

I am hell busy is liye time nahi mil raha.. warna main bhi read karti yeh.. kuch 30 PMz story ke pending pe read karne hain.. promise will soon read it too! I luv this FF!

Don't u dare stop it! 😆

if while being sick u r that dangerous

i wonder what u gonna do when u r completely healthy

i will try my best not to discontinue

as long as i keep getting good responses

will b waiting for urs too

but first get well soon 😊

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Posted: 11 years ago

#555

thank you all for your support through your BIG comments and likes. I appreciate them all.

thanks to all the following people who hit liked on my previous update

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Edited by --Ta_Sha--PMs - 11 years ago

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Posted: 11 years ago

#556

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Sanskriti

@SanskritiS

Rocker

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Posted: 11 years ago

#557

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Swayam's excitement very well shown for getting his best friend back

Loved th Sharon's reaction on teddy😆

The dance was beautifully penned

Waiting for Swayam's answer to his mom

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rosy kohli

@rosyrkohli

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Posted: 11 years ago

#558

res

unres

finally i m happy to see ur pm in my dabba 😆😆

as a writer yu definitely are handling ur subject very nicely

it was ecstatic to read ur update

coming to ur ff

it was a perfect blend of everything dil , dosti n dance

luved the way yu potrayed sharon n sameer's bff bond

a lil bit teasing n cute fights is how it is suppose to b

but the best was swayam's possessive reaction

when he saw sharon n sameer so close

it was nice to see swayam finally taking a step towards sharon

the friendly date was really beautifully penned

but the shock came to me in the end

when swayam's mom ney bomb phor diya

i m dying to read his reaction as to wat he is gonna say

it was cruel on ur part to end here

if yu dont update soon then 😈

looking forwards to ur updates

Edited by rosyrkohli - 11 years ago

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Autumn_Hue

@Autumn_Hue

Sparkler

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Posted: 11 years ago

#559

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Yipeee dipeee you update this FF hayyee kitna wait kiya hai maine iss FF ke update ka.. 🥳. I'm glad your exams are over and most importantly tu stats main clear ho gayi which is pain in our backsides..😆.
Coming to the update I loved the little kiddish moment between Sam and Sharon their bestie bonding was reflected in it..😃. Even better was Swayam's reaction to it his possessiveness and anger on seeing Sharon so close to Sam was a treat to my eyes to read..😃.
I loved Winnie the pooh too kitna cute soft toy gift kiya Swayam ne Sharon ko I loved it..❤️. I'm very glad that Swayam has taken a step towards Sharon wanting to get her back in his life as his bestie and he wants the same bond with her like before..😊. I had an inkling Sharon would agree to be his friend because for her Swayam's happiness is important..
I liked both Sharon's and Swayam's outfits both were classy and elegant specially Sharon's I loved it..❤️. The entire evening spent by Swayam and Sharon was beautifully described by you I loved it..👍🏼.
You gave us a shock at the end Swayam's mom asked Swayam to marry Sharon..😲. Tu koi cliffhanger note pe update end na kare ur hume tadpaye nahi tab tak tere updates khatam nahi hote na angel??😔. Why did you have to end it here I wanna read Swayam's reaction to it.. Jaldi update karna yaar pleashhh request hai meri..
Tab tak adieus babes..:*
Love,
Kashi..🤗.
P.S- The hug and the kiss on the cheek was a wow moment for me I loved it too too too much love you for giving this..🤗.

Edited by sweet16cash - 11 years ago