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Posted: 12 years ago
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A man was standing near the window of his room and remembering the moments he spend with his love, his life. He was thinking that how stupid talk take his life away from him. He was cursing himself that why did he do this? He turned towards her and saw that she was sleeping , he move towards her pecked her in her cheek and said" I love You"

FLASHBACK...

It was late at night, a guy was working in laptop and beside her beautiful wife was sleeping. She was waiting for him to finish his work so that she can talk to him and share the news of her pregnancy.

(Yes she is pregnant). Suddenly she woke up and saw that he is still working when he saw that she is been awake he asked for a coffee so she got up from her bed and move towards the kitchen and made coffee for him and give it to him, till that time he has finished his work so he asked" Sharon what you want to tell" but she become angry and shouted "wow Swayam now u get time to talk to me." by saying this she turned her head and tried to sleep. She become hurt by hurting him but she want to make him realise that what he had done.

Swayam: Sharon plz listen to me. I know you want to share something but I have to complete this presentation as I have important meeting.

Sharon: In this whole world only u work and other people enjoys.

Swayam: Its not like that.

Sharon: Then what plz explain. Now bcoz of your this work you don't have time for me.

Swayam: I m sorry I did not want to hurt u. Plz forgive me.

Sharon: Why always you.

Swayam: Yes Sharon why only me. Now it looks like that I have become a mistake in ur life. ( He turns his head to another side.) (this line is after Swaron fight in Dance Camp)

Sharon: Thank you Swayam for making me realise that what is my position is your life.( In a hurtful voice).

By saying she run away from their room, while going she slipped from stairs and got hurt. She shouted loudly his name

Swayam...

By listening this he run towards her and saw that she is lying in pool of blood. He took her in his arms and run towards the Hospital. Doctors treated her and informed that bcoz of the accident she lost her baby. Swayam get shocked and asked that "she was pregnant" and doctor nodded his head in positive manner. Doctor told that she is out of danger and he can take her home.

FLASHBACK END...

Sharon slowly opened her eyes and called SWAYAM...by listening this he move towards her and asked how is she feeling now and helped her to sit. Now Swayam took her hands in her and started

"look Sharon I know it was my mistake but I was unaware of the baby. I know from a long time u was waiting for this but whatever happen it was accident so plz stop cursing yourself".

Sharon: But Swayam...

Swayam: Shhh... let's drop this topic nd yes doctor has told to take rest, so plz

He helped her to lay down and cover her with blanket, he told that he is going to bring something to eat but she hold his hand and said" don't go" , he laid down beside her, she adjusted herself in his arms he hugged her and both slowly drifted in sleep.

...THE END...

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Posted: 12 years ago
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awesome os..

loved it..

sharon wanted to tel swayam d happy news n due to her mood swings she yelled at him for giving time for her n d fight went to a extent to take d beautiful gift from them.. swayam feeling bad for wat he did n regretting for d stupid fight they had.. he made sure sharon s not feeling guilty n assured her..

well penned os.. nice..
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Lovely OS 😊
Beautifully penned
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Posted: 12 years ago
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beautiful Os...you penned it nicely..:)
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Posted: 12 years ago
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it was too small
but it was painfull
I liked the caring and loving swayam
nicely expressed
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Posted: 12 years ago
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that was simple awesome and superb os... liked it
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Liked the write up good job do write more..😊
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Posted: 12 years ago
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it was nice..written beautifully..😊
do write more..

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