A Teen Age kriyaansh ss ch-9 updated.. Pg 22

Hey guys this is shanaya
Or aka lovelylavender
This is my first attempt to write a story n i dnt know how it is but plz let me know..
Its a kriyaansh story not at all connected to d3
It is totally different
I hope you all leave ur comment sarcasm or appreciation
Jus make me more aware abt my writing skills.
SO HERE IT GOES.


PROLOGUE..
A girl sweet simple cheerful bubbly lively and everything u can say abt a 17 year old school going 12th std teenager...

KRIYA GHAI
Daughter of Dr. Rajeev ghai and Dr. Smriti ghai..
Brother karan ghai studying in medical college who is engaged to kritika mehta also a medical student.

Ghai family lives in ahmedabad not so big town..
Kriya studies in st. Mary's girls school n talks anything N everything abt her to her best friend sharon..
Kriya is a great daughter any parent would have.. She wants to fulfill her parents dream that is to see kriya also becoming a doctor and scoring best marks to get admission in best college..
Her mom n kriya are Also gr8 friends
Bhai n dad r a bit orthodox. no sleeveless no kapris no short tops but kriya doesnt mind as she loves her family the most and wat matters to her is their happiness
But,...

Knock knock!!

will sum1 ask kriya wat she wants?? Well lets hav a little chat with her..


Hey guys!! I m Kriya.. U can call me kri..
Hmmm my life..
Okay its a bit complicated but which teenager has an uncomplicated one??
Coming to my teenage life i ofcourse have a crush on my cute stupid irritating friend rey..
Ya rey reyaansh singhania.. Or the so called 'ahmedabadi EINSTEIN' he calls himself?!?!
Ya that irritating creature!!! How can she believe tht her heart feels for this idiot dumbo who is nothing more but a chatter box flirt!!!
He is not that good lukin i can give him a 8 on 10 with his specks and not so good dressing sense..
But one thing jus one thing which does not have comparision is his honey dipped perfect shaded yellowish hazel shining eyes.. I so felt edward cullen had best yellow eyes but no!! No comparision to these eyes i can stare at those eyes foe eternity And not even blink!! Just my eyes locked with his magical ones... He is coming to me near me near me his breath touches my face. I close my eyes and...
Tring!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
My stupid idiot alarm rings again!!!! Cant it just ring 5 mins later everyday???? Watever !!!
So this is me and my life but there are some twists and turns in my story.. Wanna know?? Stay tuned .. ;-)



So howz it???
Should i continue??
Plz leave comments and tell me howz it..
I dont know how to add pictures to my post so i havent added.. Want a character sketch?? Do tell me..
Waiting for ur response...
Shanaya :-) 😉

INDEX:

Prologue : pg 1
Character sketch : pg 3
Chapter 1: pg 4
Chapter 2 : pg 5
Chapter 3: pg 7
Chapter 4: pg 9
Chapter 5: pg 11

Chapter 6: pg 13

Chapter 7: pg 16
Chapter 8: pg 19

concept is interesting...pm me...bt swty a'bad is not a small town

nice concept..

though I would want some insoghts like Kria's way of liking..

the way she would want to lead her life and not following someone else's rules and guodelines..

and something of Rey as well...

Originally posted by: akankshaArsha

concept is interesting...pm me...bt swty a'bad is not a small town

Hey didnt mean to hurt any 1
I jus took abad compared to mumbai
As i wanted to show kriya s family a bit orthodox
In any case abad is a big city n i do know it n i love abad really!!
Thnx for commenting n showing appreciation
Ill definately pm u
Sorry again 😊

Originally posted by: anjali22

awesome start

continue soon

Thnx ill continue asap 😊

Originally posted by: -shenz-

nice concept..




though I would want some insoghts like Kria's way of liking..




the way she would want to lead her life and not following someone else's rules and guodelines..




and something of Rey as well...

Hey first of all thnx 😊
N ill take ur review in consideration n think abt it but actually i want 2 project tht kriya has the dream of completing her familys dreams.. Shes not following any1 but its her inspiration tht she can lead a doctor life like her parents do.. Its her dream too..
Still thanks really 😊

And abt rey.. I guess my next update will be cs of characters for sum intro.. So ull get to know rey

Thnx again

Originally posted by: Pinkpearly

awesome concept
continue soon

Thnx i will continue asap 😊

Supab concept
want to read it more
continu soon
n pm me plzzz

awesome written shanaya,btw cn i call u tat???