A Teen Age kriyaansh ss ch-9 updated.. Pg 22 - Page 14

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Lovelylavender thumbnail
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Posted: 11 years ago
Chalo!! Thank god sab logo ne comment to thheekk se kiya!!
Ch-7 k baad to dhamkiyan hi mil rahi thi..!
Lol!!
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Posted: 11 years ago
sorry for late comment
so yippie KR me badi wali misunderstanding nhi hui
i loved this chappy
full on happy happy
end was the best
i really like this friendly wale KR
he is going to prove her that its more than attraction...wow
waiting to see i mean read ki rey kya karega...
pls. update sooon
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Posted: 11 years ago
nice update!!!
read the last two updates in a go and I felt my expressions also change.,...
kria ko dar laga and told ki dey r just frends...
par nxt pal rey NE jo Kia shocked me even more,...
and I thought it is going to b a sad update,,,,...
par real ya,lie changed everything!!!
loved it...,,
and the hug!!! Itna bada hug !!!! Hayyeee
loved the feelings and the way kria conveyed it!!!!
awesome,loved that part jahan kria clears her feelings!!!
and den rey ki dimaag mein khicdi pakking!!!!
heheheheheee nice!!!
I m waiting for it bahut zyada!!! Update soon!!!
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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: arsha_simran


nice update!!!

read the last two updates in a go and I felt my expressions also change.,...
kria ko dar laga and told ki dey r just frends...
par nxt pal rey NE jo Kia shocked me even more,...
and I thought it is going to b a sad update,,,,...
par real ya,lie changed everything!!!
loved it...,,
and the hug!!! Itna bada hug !!!! Hayyeee
loved the feelings and the way kria conveyed it!!!!
awesome,loved that part jahan kria clears her feelings!!!
and den rey ki dimaag mein khicdi pakking!!!!
heheheheheee nice!!!
I m waiting for it bahut zyada!!! Update soon!!!



Awww thanku soo much simran :) :)
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Posted: 11 years ago
rey is smirk in the end... means he will some how convenience kriya that they are
more than friends...😆😆😆😆... the chapter was superb and fabulous...
do continue soon and pm me
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Posted: 11 years ago
just read last 4 chapters together.. awesome was al i can say n a bit filmy too..

rey shared wat ever he wanted n she listened it properly n slowly he said his bro want to know how rey's gf that s kria ll react n she kept blushing making rey's day spl..

but kria's cousin's story made her confused n said there s nothing to him making it worst day too.. poor rey didn't wanna lose her friendship n said it was a lie but kria was hurt by it n demanding a answer whether it was lie r truth..

loved that part followed by hug wen rey said truth seeing her tears..

now rey s gonna make kria realize it s love n not attraction n they r more than friends..

waiting for next part..
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Posted: 11 years ago
awesome update!!!
loved it to d core.. Espcially whn kria exprsed hr feeling..
u write so well!!
waiting fr nxt chaptr...
update soon plsss!! :)
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Posted: 11 years ago
Read ur SS..
Speelbound is all i can say.. 👏
The way u describe everythng..
Amazing.. A nice concept.. 😳
And dfrnt frm al those i hv already read...
Waitng for d next prt eagrly..
Plz plz plz plz do post it soon.. 😭
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Posted: 11 years ago
Hey guys!!
first of all sorry fr the late update.. was jus thinkin abt wat path this story should be taking..
and thanks to all who read liked and commented..
dearies ur reviews matter a lot!!
so moving on..
THIS CHAPTER GOES TO MY CUTE LITTLE BUDDIES WHO KEEP ASKIN ME N SUPPORTIN ME ABT MY WORKS.. NONE OTHER THAN NIKKI N ABHILASHA.. I LUV U GUYS!!😊😊❤️
AND ALSO MY CUTE LITTLE SWEETYPIE.. NONE OTHER THAN TISHA.. LUV U LOADZZ SWEETIE!!😊😊❤️
RECAP
REY WILL MAKE KRIA REALIZE HER FEELINGS..
CHAPTER 9
A New morning emerges and brings out new emotions rising in the heart..
today morning two pure and innocent souls after a long time.. had a blissful and determined start..
one.. was ready with all powers humanly possible to make sumone realize what her own heart wants her to do.. wants to make her aware that there is someone around her who is deeply madly crazy for her..
and the other..
well lets see..
KRIA POV
tday i m happy.. not just because i am relieved of the guilt that i would be lying to my mother or the guilt that because of my thoughts i wld be breaking someones heart..
but..
today i m happy coz there is someone special behind this smile..
someomne so generous and understanding..
rey.. 😊
i knew he likes me.. by the stupidities he did or even by the way he stares at me dreamily..
but as he called me his girlfriend.. i was just on top of the world because finally i was hearing something i wanted to hear from him from so long..
and he said it..😃😃😃😃😃😃😃😃😃
but how can anyhing be perfect now can it??
yesterday when i met him..( as u all know)
he claimed his feelings to be a lie.. just for the sake of making me comfortable around him.. well i didnt mention but he also passed me a chocolate yesterday as soon as we entered saying that it was for me if i am hurt because of what he said to me..
hurt??
can i be hurt??
of course not!! it was the most blissful moment of my short but livable life..
then i understood that i had not replied to him..
and decided to talk to him after class..
but what he did..
what he said..
how can someone be so caring and loving that for me he claimed that he was just lying.. he didnot possess any feelings??
i was about to curse myself for believing that this idiot could ever have any intrest in me.. but wait..
he was not meeting my eyes..
he was... he was.. how do i frame it?
hurt? disappointed? guilty? appologetic?
maybe just confused that will the words being spoken by him would be regretted by himself later on!!
AND THAT..! that Mr. reyaansh singhania was the moment of my life when i fell for you..
yes.. i loved you..
not the typical true love ofcourse!!
but the sweet innocent and lovely.. TEENAGE LOVE..
i dont know what love is.. but today maybe i saw that in you..
you love me.. and no one.. clearly NO ONE.. can disagree to that.. because the expressions and your loud eyes.. convey a lot..
so i decided to finally pour my heart out to the boy out there.. who for me.. for my happiness. and just so that i wont go away from him claimed his feelings to be false..
i understand how much hard can it turn out for a guy to confess his hesrt out.. but dear.. u did it,, for me.. and ill not let you regret it..
as i poured my heart out.. u didnt question me.. not even a single question..
u supported me.. with that consoling smile on your face.. you understood me..
that we both like each other.. but its not our time.. not our time to be together because of the rituals of the world and our families..
but..
u didnt question me??
y are u so good? so understanding?
am i that lucky??
well..
yes i am..
today here as i caress the chocolate wrapper you gave me.. i thank god for bringing you in my life.. someone who understands me and loves me for who i am..
but the happiest part..
YYIIIPPPEEE!!!!!!!!
U LIKE ME!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
😆😆😆😆😆😆😆😆😆😆😆😆😆😆😆😆😆😆😆😆😆😆😆😆
COME ON YAAR!! i am a teenager!! now i cant even get excited on knowing that my crush also has a crush on me...!
how crushingly superb is that!!! lol!!
KRIA POV END
these two souls were happy beyond bounds.. and today was the day of happiness..
they both reached class beaming and jumping around like they had finally climed the stars..
as both met at the lift..
kria blushed.. but hey!! whom are u kidding??
they are not in a relationship.. so..
k; what the hell!! i came here first!!
(well the lift was full and only one was able to fit in..)
r;o please baatcutter!! we both know it was me!! go.. use the stairs.. in any case u r getting fat day by day..!
k;😡😡😡😡
how dare you!! u kaddu!! how dare you call me fat!!
r; (smirk) alle baby ko bura laga?? hahahahaha🤣
k; (mindtalk)fine mr. kaddu!! as you wish.. the war is on!!
reyyaaannnsshhh...
r;(confused)kria?
(she gave her most sexy smile and moved towards the lift.. their eyes locked.. rey was staring at her and suddenly his mouth fell open coz she.. winked!!! and smirked??? and the lift doors shut!!!)😲😲😲😲😲😲😲😲😲😲
no!! nO!! NOT AGAIN!!
how can i get fooled so easily????????????
but he heard a loud laughter coming from the lift!!!
kria wasnt able to control her laughter.. she won!! and that too so easily!!👏👏👏👏👏👏👏
she patted her back as she reached the lift doors opened..
she walked towards the academy doorwhen she bumoed into someone and was about to fall when that someone..grabbed her waist and her hands on his shoulders clutching the shirt tight..
of course oit was rey.. but his face was something different.. his intense gaxe piercing through her chocolate eyes... he leaned towars her and beacause of their physical proximity he could feel her heartbeats reaching its peak and eyes as wide as saucers..!
he leaned.. his breath hit her face.. when she was about to close her eyes.. she felt him smirk?! she looked at him questioningly and he.. he.. WINKED??!!
*THUD!!*
SHE WAS ON THE GROUND AND THAT MONSTER..! THAT MONSTER WITH INVISIBLE HORNS AND SEXIEST SMILE LAUGHED OUT LOUD AS HE LEFT HER AND PROCEEDED TOWARDS THE CLASS!!
yes!! her trick.. her own trick backfired on her!!
hola!! i hope you liked it.. almost completed the next part.. but sweets as u know.. i m a devil!!
the next part will be up by tomorrow if u get me post it on pg 25..
or else sweets.. i am a devil.. so youll have to wait..!
do leave ur feedback.. it matters a lot!!😊
Edited by Lovelylavender - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago
Me res karo..?? :s
ahh chodo tujhe nhi poching me..
RES..:P
lo meri shaan maate humne bhi unres karliya..
unress..

haye haye 1st of all aapko yaad tha ki aapka FF hai..??

by god mujhe toh laga tu bhool hi gyi..

haye ab update ke baareme..

awsum update shaan..

aww..rey is determined nd kriya well she made reys work easy..

buahahah shaan crushingly superb 🤣🤣🤣 ye koansa word hota hai..??

haye loved kriyas trick..haye rey ko bewakoof banana kitna assan hai..

aww poor kriya khudki hi trick backfire..🤣🤣

haye aww..rey bad manner ladkion ko esa girate nhi hai..🤣🤣

ab jaldi update de warna me tujhe maarungi..🤣🤣

PS : ye mera iss FF pe aaj tak ka sabse bada comment hai i think so..😆😳
Edited by Abhilashaarsha - 11 years ago

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