ASYA OS- Teenage love complete note- page 17

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AsYa os- Teenage love

PART- 1A.

All the students were loaded upon notice board to check the results of class X.. A girl cme making way b/w all and reached notice board..
She shouted: yeah i m 3, bt stopd as she noticed all eyes watching her wiredly..
She slowly movd out and hugged her loving sister najma,
najma: wat r results? Is cheating provd gud... She teasd her..
She cntinued: i knw i cheat bt i m 3 yr, it gud..
Najma: wow zoya baji, today ami vl be on clound 7..
Zoya: yeah hope so.. Lets go, ami vl be waiting..
Najma: k,k, lets go..

ZOYA'S HOUSE
( dilshad is her mother, her father is no more, najma her younger sis in 8 )
dilshad: hw much cheating worked.
Zoya: ami, this time it superbly wrkd, i m 3..
Dilshad kised her forehead.. They were intrupted by humaira's ( zoya's bestfrnd ) call..
Zoya: yeah, wats ur results.. U knw i cme 3.
Humaira: congo, babes, i m 8, bt vthout cheating, nd 1 mre thing my bhaijaan toped 12 xams and he'l join our school's extended colege.. Nd we hv arangd party tomorow.. Nd u r suposd to cme alng vth najma..
Zoya: u knw i m party addict.. Sure, i'l cme.. Nd did u invitd ur jan ayan..
Humaira: u stupid ? Mind it yr i dnt hv crush on hm..
Zoya: realy do i say crush? She gigled.
Humaira: all r cmng, including, nikhat, tanvir..
Zoya: why did u invitd tanvir? U knw na i hate her? Section c( she mean X-c ) idiot.
Humaira: oh cmon zoya, she is our neighbour, anyhw i m forced to invite her..
Zoya: watever, we frnds r together, i dint want anything bye.. Ami is caling for diner..
She disconectd call...

HUMAIRA'S HOUSE..
(asad her bro, shirin her ami and rashid abbu )
humaira cme out frm her room,,
Shirin: humaira, r u dne vth tomorow's preparations.
Humaira: yeah ami..
Asad cme along vth rashid vth bundle of sweets..
They were gr8ly happy at asad's achievement..
Shirin: i m proud of my son.. She flater him
asad: ami its all cz i m ur son..

Humaira invited ayan ( humaira's secret crush, nikhat's bro, razia and gaffur's son, tanvir's close and their hangout frnd ) nikhat to was invited..
Asad and tanvir r childhood frnds, as they were neighbours..
It was 1st time their group was alowed to party...

APOLOGY NOTE..
I m so sory for discontinuing my ff- tu ashiqui he, bt i bring for u my nuisance story., with hopes of likes.. I knw it dint make any sense bt then to if u want me to cntinue plz pm me and send buddy requests...
Next part- page 1 itself
Part-2 page 1
part 3- page 2
part 4- page 3
part 5 - page 6
part 6- page 8
part 7- page 10
part 8- page 14
part 9- page 14
NOTE- page 17.. OS COMPLETED.
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i love you story...continue soon,,n thnx for pm
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PART- 1B.


Next day..
Humaira was dieingly waiting for her gang, when tanvir nd humaira was forced to hug her..
Tanvir: hi, dear hws u, she askd fakely..
Humaira: f9, tanu.. Go n join bhaijan, he is dieing waiting for u..,, she wantd her to go..
Tanvir left and went to asad,
asad wore a black jacket, with specs..
Tanvir came and huged him, asad to huged her with friendly bond..
He cut the hug when he was caled by humaira..
Humaira: bhaijan, r ur frnds here.
Asad: ya all r here, why r u asking so?
Humaira: look na bhaijan, my no frnd r here..
Asad: k, u go n cal them,
humaira leaves for room, when suddenly cz of short circuit , lights gne...
All were shocked, nothing was clearly seen, asad moved to check wats the fault..
He went out were main switch board was there, on his way he fall with sm1 which made them attach to ground..
Asad: allah, whats dis? That made me fall.
He slowly movd his hands upon the thing and when he realised it was nt thing bt sm1.. It was late till that sm1 hd bit hir index finger..
Asad: aaa..aa..aa.. And he stood up making sm1 placing on switch board wall, 'who r u? U theif hw u dare to enter my house'
when sm1 shouted: allah miah wats wrng vth u?. Which made hm realise that she was a girl..
And took lighter frm hs pockect and lighted it , he was stuned to see those glosy lips, elegant eyes, rosy cheeks that made hm shiver, smthng took hs heart..
Same hpnd vth zoya, she was amazed to see a most handsme man..
They were intruped by humaira's call.. To which zoya made her free frm his grip and went to attend call..
Humaira: where r u? All r here, just my gang s mising..
Zoya: yr as we entered ur lihts went off, even i m lost i think others wil be in..
Humaira: wow, lights r there, nw plz cme, and others r there.
Asad hd crctd the fault..
Zoya found way and went in..
She was welcmd by humaira, shirin, rashid.. She soon got along vth her group..
Ayan: where were u?
Zoya: i was falen on sm idoit man. He dnt even knw how to behave to girls..
Najma: leave it baji, lets enjoy .. To which nikhat agreed..
Shirin and rashid made anouncement that they r proud of their son, ASAD AHMAD KHAN..
Which left zoya in shock. That mr. Idoit was asad..
All claped bt zoya stood still, humaira came to her.
Humaira: r u lost in bhaijaan's smartnes..
Zoya: r u mad, m surprised is he ur bro.
Humaira: yeah yr , wat hpnd..
Zoya dint seem intrestd to narate the incident..
Tanvir was trying to get deadly close to asad when humaira cme along vth her frnds..
Ayan: congrats.. Nd so did all bt zoya was stnding fce turned.
Humaira intro. Her- bhaijan, she is zoya, she was nw forced to turn and gve asad a fake smile- congrats...
Asad burst into laughter seeing her embracement..
Humaira: wats wrng bhaijan,
asad: he thnked zoya, and said, sm people r realy inocent and cute here, which helped zoya smile..
Asad: ya na tanu?
Which idiotic tanvir took for her..
Zoya was hapy that he is a nice guy..

After 7 days they were suposd 2 go school, and so asad was to join their school's colege..
Asad decided to do pol. Science hns.
And humaira, tanvir, ayan, zoya optd arts for 11th...

Day of school,
humaira was hapy that ayan was nw in their class.. Zoya was upset as tanvir joined their stream..

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PART- 2..1st day at ''IMPERIAL EDUCATION SCHOOL''std 11..Humaira, ayan, zoya, tanvir entered the class..Zoya and tanvir both looked at each other as they found last seat vacant.. Both were to grap last seat.. They ran like idiot buls to grap the seat.. Tanvir succesed in geting the seat, she gave zoya a poor reaction ( school uniform was red and black check skirt and skin colour shirt and red scarf.. ) zoya corected her open hair, and showed that nothing hpnd. Nd went to second last seat..Tanvir said from back: 'never try to take my place mis. Farookhi i m always , 1st and beter than u', she smirked..Zoya: 'just shut up mis. Malik.. Mind ur own busines' she turned front..Ayan and humaira were shocked to see what hpnd in fractin of minutes..They slowly moved and humaira sat vth zoya, and ayan vth tanvir... Suddenly a specs lady cme in vth short haircut..Lady: 'mrng class i m vinnie rodricks, ur history teacher' she greeted all..Class stood up and wished her, she told them take their seat when zoya burst in laughter,humaira: wats wrng.Zoya: luk at her, she luks ur bhaijan's future..Humaira, friendly slaped her..At college( college building was much attached to their school building ).. Asad and haider searched their classes and went in...On the very 1st day asad was made academic president of school and colege... Haider: wooh, asad miah, its superb. U cn even leak papers.. He teased hmasad: gave hm raised brow look, ' r u in ur mind i m nt gna do it at any cost '..Haider: off course u will nt, u r The asad ahmad khan right.. They gigled and left as it was lunch..SCHOOL CAMPUS..In canteen, all colege and school students gather to hv their lunch, cn be recognised by their dres as colege 1 r in casual..Asad entered canteen, and colided vth zoya which made her coke fall on his funky jackect..Zoya: 'alah miah, whats wrng vth u?' she was luking down and dint noticed hm..Asad: 'wooh' u.. How could i acept smthng ok when u r around miss... Inocent.' he smiled and made her face hm.Zoya: 'u, .. A.. A.. Actualy i was .. I mean i dint knew it was u..' she hesitated.Asad noticed all were staring them so he slowly took her to colege and school's common ground..Humaira, tanvir, and ayan couldnt see that as stil they were in line to take food.. Haider was in campus, in search of girls..IN GROUND..Asad left her hand: miss. Inocent i m nt a devil, at time7 u get scared seeing me..Zoya simply smiled: ya, bt u look rudeasad: do u think i m.Zoya nodded in no.Asad: nw cn i go and wash my shirt.. With ur permission mam..Zoya: ya sure,he left and she stood feeling her deadly attractd 2 hm... After break asad was informed to, arrange pol.science week for next week. And he was suposd 2 choose 4 children frm 11 and 12 as his asistant... He had his mind to his mis. Inocent..Its all..
Part 1a- http://www.india-forums.com/forum_posts.asp?TID=3842919

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Originally posted by: niyti07

PART- 1B.


Next day..
Humaira was dieingly waiting for her gang, when tanvir nd humaira was forced to hug her..
Tanvir: hi, dear hws u, she askd fakely..
Humaira: f9, tanu.. Go n join bhaijan, he is dieing waiting for u..,, she wantd her to go..
Tanvir left and went to asad,
asad wore a black jacket, with specs..
Tanvir came and huged him, asad to huged her with friendly bond..
He cut the hug when he was caled by humaira..
Humaira: bhaijan, r ur frnds here.
Asad: ya all r here, why r u asking so?
Humaira: look na bhaijan, my no frnd r here..
Asad: k, u go n cal them,
humaira leaves for room, when suddenly cz of short circuit , lights gne...
All were shocked, nothing was clearly seen, asad moved to check wats the fault..
He went out were main switch board was there, on his way he fall with sm1 which made them attach to ground..
Asad: allah, whats dis? That made me fall.
He slowly movd his hands upon the thing and when he realised it was nt thing bt sm1.. It was late till that sm1 hd bit hir index finger..
Asad: aaa..aa..aa.. And he stood up making sm1 placing on switch board wall, 'who r u? U theif hw u dare to enter my house'
when sm1 shouted: allah miah wats wrng vth u?. Which made hm realise that she was a girl..
And took lighter frm hs pockect and lighted it , he was stuned to see those glosy lips, elegant eyes, rosy cheeks that made hm shiver, smthng took hs heart..
Same hpnd vth zoya, she was amazed to see a most handsme man..
They were intruped by humaira's call.. To which zoya made her free frm his grip and went to attend call..
Humaira: where r u? All r here, just my gang s mising..
Zoya: yr as we entered ur lihts went off, even i m lost i think others wil be in..
Humaira: wow, lights r there, nw plz cme, and others r there.
Asad hd crctd the fault..
Zoya found way and went in..
She was welcmd by humaira, shirin, rashid.. She soon got along vth her group..
Ayan: where were u?
Zoya: i was falen on sm idoit man. He dnt even knw how to behave to girls..
Najma: leave it baji, lets enjoy .. To which nikhat agreed..
Shirin and rashid made anouncement that they r proud of their son, ASAD AHMAD KHAN..
Which left zoya in shock. That mr. Idoit was asad..
All claped bt zoya stood still, humaira came to her.
Humaira: r u lost in bhaijaan's smartnes..
Zoya: r u mad, m surprised is he ur bro.
Humaira: yeah yr , wat hpnd..
Zoya dint seem intrestd to narate the incident..
Tanvir was trying to get deadly close to asad when humaira cme along vth her frnds..
Ayan: congrats.. Nd so did all bt zoya was stnding fce turned.
Humaira intro. Her- bhaijan, she is zoya, she was nw forced to turn and gve asad a fake smile- congrats...
Asad burst into laughter seeing her embracement..
Humaira: wats wrng bhaijan,
asad: he thnked zoya, and said, sm people r realy inocent and cute here, which helped zoya smile..
Asad: ya na tanu?
Which idiotic tanvir took for her..
Zoya was hapy that he is a nice guy..

After 7 days they were suposd 2 go school, and so asad was to join their school's colege..
Asad decided to do pol. Science hns.
And humaira, tanvir, ayan, zoya optd arts for 11th...

Day of school,
humaira was hapy that ayan was nw in their class.. Zoya was upset as tanvir joined their stream..

CLICK LIKE.. Hope u like it and must cment...



thnks for ur likes buddies
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Originally posted by: niyti07


AsYa os- Teenage love

PART- 1A.

All the students were loaded upon notice board to check the results of class X.. A girl cme making way b/w all and reached notice board..
She shouted: yeah i m 3, bt stopd as she noticed all eyes watching her wiredly..
She slowly movd out and hugged her loving sister najma,
najma: wat r results? Is cheating provd gud... She teasd her..
She cntinued: i knw i cheat bt i m 3 yr, it gud..
Najma: wow zoya baji, today ami vl be on clound 7..
Zoya: yeah hope so.. Lets go, ami vl be waiting..
Najma: k,k, lets go..

ZOYA'S HOUSE
( dilshad is her mother, her father is no more, najma her younger sis in 8 )
dilshad: hw much cheating worked.
Zoya: ami, this time it superbly wrkd, i m 3..
Dilshad kised her forehead.. They were intrupted by humaira's ( zoya's bestfrnd ) call..
Zoya: yeah, wats ur results.. U knw i cme 3.
Humaira: congo, babes, i m 8, bt vthout cheating, nd 1 mre thing my bhaijaan toped 12 xams and he'l join our school's extended colege.. Nd we hv arangd party tomorow.. Nd u r suposd to cme alng vth najma..
Zoya: u knw i m party addict.. Sure, i'l cme.. Nd did u invitd ur jan ayan..
Humaira: u stupid ? Mind it yr i dnt hv crush on hm..
Zoya: realy do i say crush? She gigled.
Humaira: all r cmng, including, nikhat, tanvir..
Zoya: why did u invitd tanvir? U knw na i hate her? Section c( she mean X-c ) idiot.
Humaira: oh cmon zoya, she is our neighbour, anyhw i m forced to invite her..
Zoya: watever, we frnds r together, i dint want anything bye.. Ami is caling for diner..
She disconectd call...

HUMAIRA'S HOUSE..
(asad her bro, shirin her ami and rashid abbu )
humaira cme out frm her room,,
Shirin: humaira, r u dne vth tomorow's preparations.
Humaira: yeah ami..
Asad cme along vth rashid vth bundle of sweets..
They were gr8ly happy at asad's achievement..
Shirin: i m proud of my son.. She flater him
asad: ami its all cz i m ur son..

Humaira invited ayan ( humaira's secret crush, nikhat's bro, razia and gaffur's son, tanvir's close and their hangout frnd ) nikhat to was invited..
Asad and tanvir r childhood frnds, as they were neighbours..
It was 1st time their group was alowed to party...

APOLOGY NOTE..
I m so sory for discontinuing my ff- tu ashiqui he, bt i bring for u my nuisance story., with hopes of likes.. I knw it dint make any sense bt then to if u want me to cntinue plz pm me and send buddy requests...
Next part- page 1 itself
Part-2 page 1


thnks for likes on my os. Love u all buddies
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continue soon with 3rd part we need this time bada wala part pls

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