RaBir FF Chapter 10 UPDATED. - Page 8

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Posted: 11 years ago
#71
aah awesome update ...
wow so he does not like aditya ... am sure he wants to hit him.. ha ha and already dreaming of kissing her ... romantic ...

update soon
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Posted: 11 years ago
#72
Jealous kabir🤪I love it.. Getting all possessive 😃
He is already in the danger zone of love😆 When will she be?

I want him to do stupid things & make a fool of himself pining for her attention😉

I hope Rachna will make him go down on his knees😈

I want this whole FF to be droolingly romantic 😈

I love your updates dear😆 next one coming tommorow??????😉

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Posted: 11 years ago
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Originally posted by: -Eris-

aah awesome update ...

wow so he does not like aditya ... am sure he wants to hit him.. ha ha and already dreaming of kissing her ... romantic ...

update soon


no violence...😆😆😆😆
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Posted: 11 years ago
#74

Originally posted by: brat2008

Jealous kabir🤪I love it.. Getting all possessive 😃

He is already in the danger zone of love😆 When will she be?

I want him to do stupid things & make a fool of himself pining for her attention😉

I hope Rachna will make him go down on his knees😈

I want this whole FF to be droolingly romantic 😈

I love your updates dear😆 next one coming tommorow??????😉


next one coming monday...
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Posted: 11 years ago
#75
whoaaa I smell something burning ☺️ someone's getting really jealous!! I'm loving the way he's falling for her and of course the first one!!Good job! Keep it up
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Posted: 11 years ago
#76
Hi I really like this FF and I was hoping that you could add me to your PM list so I get an update everytime you post a new chapter :) Thanks!
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Posted: 11 years ago
#77

Chapter 5

Kabir is in his room thinking about Aditya when his Dadi comes in ..

Kabir: Dadi .

Dadi: haan ..beta

Kabir: who was that boy ...sitting with Rachna ..I have never seen him with Gargs before ..

Dadui: He is their Family-fRIEND..HE CAME HERE FOR BUSINESS HE WILL LEAVE SOON

Kabir: sure Dadi?

Dadi: why do u want to be sure about him leaving..He is such a nice caring guy ..Didn't u see hw he cared fr Rachna ..they looked so sweeet together..I think they LIKE each other .

Kabir: Dadi!!

Dadi: Wt happened ..u don't like that guy..

Kabir : dadi I have some imp work ..I will leave..

Kabir gets out of his house..

Garg's place.

Rachna is in her room setting her clothes ..she sees the clothes she wore when goons teased her..She is reminded of all those scenes Kabir...pulling her but then saving her too..and their f8..

Rachna(to herself ): that guy is a mystery..sometymes hard sometyms soft ..only God can understand him..

She shuts the door of almirah to see Aditya standing behind it.

Rachna: adi.. I didn't notice u..

Adi: bcz u have strtd noticing someone else..

Rachna: wt rubbish?

Aditya : Its not rubbish ..were u not thinking about Kabir??

Rachna: Adi stop this joke..here..

Aditya : accept it girl...U were thinking about him..n there;s no harm in thinking about such a hot and happening guy..

Rachna: adi!! stop it..

Aditya: hmm.. see ur cheeks turned red...

Rachna takes the flower wase in her hand and runs behind him...

they run in the whole room ..suddenly Rachna trips and adi in trying to get hold of her also trips and they both fall on the bed...

Rachna and adi start laughing while Adi turns to her...and is looking at her and Rachna is laughing..

Kabir sees them that way.. and turns away but is stopped by Dolu..

Dolu and Kabir enter the room..

Rachna and Adi in the meanwhile have got up and are still laughing..

Dolu: Rachna didi ..ur boss has come fr some wrk...so I brought him here..

Rachna : ok dolu...

Adi(moves towards kabir): nice to meet u again .. Here I leave..

Adi leaves with Dolu..

rachna: yes sir!! u this tym??

Kabir : Miss garg I hope u don't mind but We r leaving for an outdoor presentation day after tomorrow..

Rachna: wt outdoor??

Kabir : any probz..

Rachna : sir ..but my family..

Kabir: I Dont know that u have to come or leave the job..

Rachna : but!!

Kabir turns to leave to see Rachna's mother there with glass of water..

Shail(rachna's mother): no prob beta rachna will go..

Rachna: but ma..

Shail: dont worry beta.. I know Kabir will take care of u there ..and its imp for u to learn work...

Kabir: thanks aunty..

ShAIL : NO Thanks...

Kabir leaves...

Next Day at office..

Kabir is in his office thinking of adi and rachna's closeness...he is quite angry..and calls his secretary..

Secretary(nitya): yes sir..

Kabir: I need every detail about Aditya ..Aditya Agarwal...from australia..

Nitya : sure sir...

Kabir: one more thing ..the outdoor presentation which we had to do next week we will do day after tomorrow..we will leave tomorrow..

Nitya : but sir, suddenly..

Kabir: u start doing preparations ..no more questions..

Nitya : ok sir...

Gagrg's place

Rachna is getting ready for college..

Gunjan (sis-in-law)comes there : hmm getting ready for office..

Rachna: no.Gunjan ..cOLLEGE bcz then I have an outdoor presentation ..so I have to inform mah teachers..

Gunjan: oh!! so Miss garg is out with a hot and happening guy for how many days ...

Rachna: Stop it ..Gunjan!!I dont know why all are teasing me with his name..

Gunjan: hmm ..he is ur boss..he is hot!!and and...

Rachna: and!!!

Gunjan: see ur excitement ...He has a place in ur heart..

Rachna: wt nonsense!!

Gunjan: ok leave it ..breakfast is ready..All have eaten and Adi has even left for his meeting..in lucknow.

Rachna : ok I am coming..

Gunjan: vaise were is ur presentation!!

Rachna: I dont know...Kabir will tell it today..

Gunjan : come down..

Office

Kabir and Nitya are working for presentation

Kabir: Rachna...this is important ..

Nitya: Sir..its me not Rachna..

Kabir: so sorry..Actually ..

Nitya: Its all r8 Kabir...After all I m ur only frnd ..even if u try to hide or avid I m understanding wt is Happening to u..haha

Kabir: Nitya !! do ur work..

Nitya : ya ..I m doing it..

Kabir: hmm

Nitya : Kabir..Rachna..

Kabir: where??'

Nitya : haa haaa ...

Kabir: stop it and yes take an appointment from the doctor..dadi will also come and I want to get her treatment from Lucknow..

Nitya: ya ..ok!!

Kabir:also call Rachna and tell her About the presentation and Leaving for Lucknow..

Nitya: f9..

Next chapter

Rachna and kabir are trapped in heavy rainfall while Nitya and Dadi have reached destination..

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Posted: 11 years ago
#78
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lovey update

khadoos kabir has preponed the outdoor presentation 😲 🤣
mazaa aa gaya jealous ...

green monster has striked

wow a lovely rain scene in the next update .. cant wait 😳
Edited by -Eris- - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago
#79

Originally posted by: dramagirl123

whoaaa I smell something burning ☺️ someone's getting really jealous!! I'm loving the way he's falling for her and of course the first one!!Good job! Keep it up

😳😳😳😳
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Posted: 11 years ago
#80
thank you so much for pm😛


wow loved the anger of kabir and rachna was so irritated when gunjan told she is with hot and happening guy . 😃

they are going for out door presentation 😲

kabir again jealous seeing them on bed 🥳

pl update soon ☢️


Edited by ZenerDiode - 11 years ago

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