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Posted: 11 years ago
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Yaar,
I wrote that there is a moment... it's not great ...so sorry by advance if u don't like it...bt need to share

DO DIL EK JAAN

You knew take in my heart a place i didn't know empty

Forever, my ears will resound with the notes of musique that in the evening a mysterious musician played in search of verses for his chorus

As i was before, now i'm not anymore since the impetious flow of a raging river took everything

Here, i'm now caught in the turmoil of two souls trying to unite in the chaos of this world




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Posted: 11 years ago
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very well written yaar...👏...great👍🏼
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Amazing yaar... It was a very nice post...
Touched my heart...😛
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Posted: 11 years ago
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THANKS U ALL 🤗

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Posted: 11 years ago
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This is nice, I understand what you are trying to say.😊

We all had a place within ourselves that Do Dil Ek Jaan filled...and that harmonica music Raghu plays...
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Posted: 11 years ago
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So true audrey each and every line you said is real truth we all are madly..,deeply...,in love with rantara..its very hearttouching dear...lovely post.
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Originally posted by: Tsuchi

So true audrey each and every line you said is real truth we all are madly..,deeply...,in love with rantara..its very hearttouching dear...lovely post.

Thank you Suchi i wasn't sure you will like it 🤗
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Originally posted by: Capucine


Thank you Suchi i wasn't sure you will like it🤗


why u thought that i will not like ur post? I clearly understood ur feelings behind this post dear. 😊
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Originally posted by: Tsuchi


why u thought that i will not like ur post? I clearly understood ur feelings behind this post dear. 😊

It was because when u write in another language u may be lost in translation and don't exprim what u really wanted😛

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Posted: 11 years ago
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@audrey...okay... hahahaha... thats the reason..ya u r right it happens some time..hehehe 😆

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