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Sami, Though I went through the story till the end I was not able to comment earlier. I wondered why? It was because I wanted to reread it and you have written so wonderfully. All the descriptions were so well written that I felt I was there itself. You have a wonderful way of expressing dear and the entire stuff had me glued. I am not saying just for the graphic descriptions of the sexual moments, even a small thing as how the breeze sets in the ripple effect in the pool when Lavanya explained her silence to Khushi was poignant. These small bits do add to the whole. I don't know how others might have felt when they read as updates. But I have read the complete story at a go and the effect is absolutely scintillating and positive attitude of Khushi stands out. Even the way she deals with how Rohan is her brother and open acceptance without even a bit of hesitation and when the knowledge that Arnav's dad was responsible for the tragedy, her thought to protect Arnav from the heartache first and seeing it positively that his father's deed does not reflect on him was absolutely stunning and heartwarming!
Thanks for the blog link. It was lovely to go through it too. With it it is in a different plane and without it too it is worthy of reading.
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