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Well, I have written this long time back, even posted it but discontinued it later, but now i have renovated the story a little bit but after these few shots which I have already posted on fan fiction... And I'm posting it again here, if you want to read further do comment.

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Zoya's heart was breaking every second since Asad had said "Zoya and I share no relationship". In the midst of tears she was packing her already half packed bag by Asad.

Najma and Dilshad were trying to console her that they believe her and she had no fault in the happenings at Ayaan's house but the man she needed to trust on her was standing against her. She could have fight back to any situation if her Mr. khan trusted her. But today she had no courage to fight back because her mr. khan was not with her. Every other person trusted her here but not the man she needed. In all her life till now she had fighted alone but today she was not able to that without her mr. khan. Today she needed him and she knew this is what love had done to her.

She knew she love him a lot but never confessed because she was confused from his side. Pal me haan, pal me naa. She didn't knew whether he is confused or he is pretending or in actual he feel something for her but his confusion had caused her mind to make this decision not to confess her feelings.

With her packing done she made her way out of the room where she was staying for last six months, giving it a last glance remembering the lovely moments she had spent here.. She walked out of the room to the main hall where mr. dhurander were waiting for her.

Mr. dhurander: miss zoya bis ur last bye we are leaving this moment.
Zoya hugged najma and dilshad with teary eyes.

Najma: u don't know how much I'm gonna miss u.

Zoya: I'll too miss u tamatar.

Dilshad: never ever think of what happened here and never blame urself for all what happened. Just live ur life to the fullest in which u always believed.

Najma: and do call us daily.

Zoya finally hugged tanveer also.

During all this zoya's eyes were searching asad only, but he was no where to be seen. She wanted to see him for the last time beore stepping out of his life she wanted to see him.

Her chain of thoughts were broken by mr. dhurander again.

Mr. dhurander: I think we should leave now miss zoya.

As she reached the main door she looked back to the house were she had spend the most memorable moments, the house which was her home for these 6 months. The house where she got a sister like najma and a motherly figure like dilshad. But now its all over and she would be never returning back to this place ever in life.

Remebering all those happy moments where she celebrated lilfe here she finally stepped out of the house and out of their lives.
Here asad was in his room fighting his urge to go to zoya , hug her tightly and say "mat jaao zoya tum meri zindgi ho, ishq karta hun tumse, haan qubool ho tum mujhe, qubool hai mujhe humara ye unkaha sa, unjaana sa rishta".

But his ego was stopping him. After what had happened at ayaan's house he was not able to bring himself to stop zoya.

Edited by --SHERY-- - 11 years ago

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INDEX

PART 1 : PAGE 1

PART 2 : PAGE 1

PART 3 : PAGE 1

PART 4 : PAGE 1

PART 5 : PAGE 1

PART 6 : PAGE 5

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Asad didn't know why his ego has to come in btwn when his life is at stake. If Zoya left him he would be nothing. The human qualities which Zoya had unknowingly injected in him with her innocence, mischief and simpled smile will not come to surface anytime. He knew only Zoya can break the walls he had build around his heart.

Asad slumped down on the floor as heard the voice of Mr. Dhuradher's car leaving his house's premises. As he realized Zoya had actually left he felt a void in his heart. Zoya had now stepped out of his life also maybe forever. He would never meet Zoya now the thought terrified him but he was not able to do anything.

Asad came out of his room after many hours to find his house empty. Though there was his aami and Najma but the house still seemed empty. It looked like someone had sucked life out of this house even the members of the house look no different.

Asad came to his aami and asked "Miss Faruqui chali gai'.." he said it in a defeated voice which sounded like a sad statement than a question.

"haan Asad she is has gone now. Like you wanted from the start, her to leave and today she left. I thought you are not that stone hearted Asad as you look but you proved me wrong you are the same as you look a stone hearted, an emotionless man''." Dilshad said this calmly but in all complaining tone and left from there followed by Najma.

Tanveer came near Asad, kept her hand on his shoulder and said "Asad you don't take Khala's word at heart. She is sad right now coz of Zoya and whatever happened at Ayaan's house and whatever those people said about our family. She will be fine by sometime. And above all Zoya was a guest she had to leave someday or the other. "

"she had to leave but I didn't waned her to leave I wanted her to stay. I '.. I ' didn't wanted this to happen whatever happened today." with that Asad turned around and locked himself in his room.

Zoya was sitting in the back passenger seat of Mr. Dhurandher's car. Her eyes closed and non stoppable tears were continuously flowing down from her eyes.

'why Mr. Khan didn't trust me? Why? He also know I cant do that I wont do anything that will cuse him pain still why he don't believe me. Why he want me to stay away from him?? I can't. ' Zoya's emotions were asking her was her love not true that she had to face this.

'Zoya Faruqui don't you remember his words 'jab se aap yahan aai hain koio na koi musibat le kar aai hain...' think Zoya, he is right you have actually just brought problems and nothing good. Before you came that time also the two families never shared a good relation but were happy in their own world and didn't accused each other for anything but because of you they are facing such a big accusation from the other. Why would Mr. Khan stop you to bring more problems to his life. Answer me Zoya answer me...' Zoya tried to calm down with whatever her rational mind said. Still her emotional mind had thought he could have asked one time and listened to her side also.

As the airport arrived Zoya's every hope that Mr. Khan would some how stop her got killed. Mr. Dhurandher asked her to sit in lobby till then he complete some formalities. Within next hour Zoya was now sitting in her plane, Bhopal to Mumbai and from Mumbai to

New York.

In plane also Zoya's tears were not stopping, while she was able to hide it from her co passenger. The plane had reached Mumbai by evening and was now heading towards New York. She was lost in her memories of her and Mr. Khan.

Asad in his room was getting restless. He didn't know why but he felt something big and something wrong is going to happen. He didn't know what but fear was gripping him slowly, Humerah was out of danger long time back but there was something still bad to happen.

It was night now and the whole day had went silent. Zoya had actually been life to this house... He thought. Walking through his house in mid night he remembered his and Zoya's memorable moments whether romantic stares or stupid fights. He smiled at the thoughts of their fights they were actually stupid all the time.

At mid night Asad switched on the TV. He was flipping through news channel suddenly he stopped and the fear came rushing back to him as he heard the breaking news' his heart was saying something bad is going to happen but in his wildest dream he haven't thought of this'.

The reporter was saying "this is the latest pictures we are getting straight from lakshdweep of the plane which got crashed some moments back' it was going from Mumbai to New York which had actuallly taken off from Bhopal this afternoon. After taking a look at these pictures it hard to believe that some one would be alive there."

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It ha s been a week since the plane crashed and there was no news of Zoya. Asad got himself involved in the rescue work but didn't got any hint of Zoya. Along with Zoya two more passengers were missing and rest were found in somewhat alive conditions or dead.

The way Asad had gone mad in search mission to find and bring Zoya back, made one thing clear to Dilshad and everyone that he loves Zoya madly. And Dilshad was more than glad to know this from Asad himself that he actually loves her a lot.

When Mr. Dhurandher got to knew about the plane crash, he was also sad, he also wished Zoya to be safe. Her smile her naughtiness has effected him also he saw her daughter in her. And when he found Asad so madly in love with Zoya that he could do anything for Zoya. He helped Asad in getting in the rescue team, so he could find Zoya, after all he feeling all guilty for separating these two lovers even when he knew they love each other a lot, he had seen it in their eyes.

Later during the second week of search, the other two person who were missing along with Zoya were found dead and all burned. This broke Asad he lost hopes of finding Zoya. He was terrified by the thought that if he didn't found Zoya then what.

He himself had asked her to go and now this. Guilt was eating him up. Even the rescue team thought of giving up but on asad's insistance they thought to give it one more try. The plane had broken into three pieces and passengers were thrown very far of due to crash and it was followed by blast in the fuel tank.

Asad prayed to the all mighty that his Zoya should be alive and all safe. Here Dilshad and Najma were also praying the same, that heir Zoya should be fine and nothing in the world should stop the two lovers from meeting. All these weeks the Khan mansion was all quiet like a graveyard. No one used to speak and they were just staring at TV or their cell phones in hope of getting any news of Zoya.

Asad and the rescue team started to search in the forest of the island. They divided into team of two and started there search. Asad was accompanied with one more man with him. Walking and screaming 'Zoya', searching her in the big forest it turned into evening and still they got no clue of her except her pursue which they had find near the plane. The other person asked Asad to stop for the evening but he didn't heard him kept on walking. The two people got separated.

Asad kept on searching and searching and it was now totally dark. After searching some more he was now tired like hell and thought to stop for sometime. He heard sound of small stream nearby and started walking toward the source of sound. When he reached the stream he found a bonfire there and thought to see what is it.

He started towards it and as soon as he neared it he heard her. He heard his Zoya's voice. Asad came some more near to it and there he saw Zoya sitting over there and weeping. There was a rush of life in his body, his breathe came back to him. He saw Zoya talking to someone . No, she was talking to herself but something was in her hand. It was his and Zoya's picture which she had taken long back to take it as a memory her Akadoo Ahmed Khan'..

He heard her - "Mr. Khan, I know you love your family a lot. Any defame to them hurt you a lot but plz trust me whatever happened at Ayaan's house was not my fault. I cant in my dreams think of doing such a thing."

Guilt gripped Asad more he remembered how he insulted her accused her for everything. He closed his eyes in pain. He felt the pain Zoya must have felt when he insulted her. She still had not seen him. He was standing behind the tree where she was resting her back. She was all bruised and covered with blood. She was baldly injured.

After some sobs he again heard her - "Mr. Khan I know I should not accuse you. You were not at fault, loving your family and keeping every unwanted person away from there way is your duty and you did the same in this case also. I love you Mr. Khan, I love you a lot. I thought you also feel the same but I was wrong. I'm sorry Mr. Khan I'm really sorry I should have not expected over from you, you have given me a home to stay in the tough time given a shoulder to cry that was more than enough ' more than something a host have to offer to his guest... " and then again she broke into sobs.

"Zoya" Asad finally called her but very lightly coz his own voice was on the verge of choking after hearing her confession.

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There was a sudden thunder in the sky and asad's voice got lost in the thunder. It started raining heavily asad was not able to speak anymore. Zoya's condition choked his voice. The bonfire went off and zoya moved in the small hut she had made with tree branches leaves under a big tree. Asad also went near the hut and he was also safe becoz the big tree. He sat next to the hut whereas zoya sat inside it. Zoya still hadnt seen asad, her injuries had decreased her attentiveness.

"Thank you allah miyyan I had been part of a lots of adventurous program other wise this bonfire and hut would have been impossible and I would have died long time back starving in this forest." and zoya smiled after what one can call long time.

A minute back she was crying and now she is smiling. She had cried enough these 2 weeks thinking about what could have happened if Mr. Khan would have stopped her, if he had accepted his feelings. Now her pain was less as she had let it out of her system to no one else but this forest.

She again started blabbering there to no one but herself.

"crazy" asad chuckled.

"zoya faruqui finally u got this stream and tomorrow you are starting towards its downflow where it will meet the sea means u will be at sea shore. According to me as the burning smell is still cuming means the debris have not been removed and there will be people around there and u'll get rescued anyhow. Next they will take u to the nearest sea port from there to hospital or police station to contact ur relatives. Then I'll call'. Umhhh call' call whom I don't remember contacts damn it.

Yes''.. I remember I remember Mr. Khan's contact''. No I cant call him. This will trouble him more."

Till now asad was listening to her with a smile on his face but this part of her self conversation made him drop his smile.

"IDEA!!!!" zoya shouted and asad looked at her with unbelievable expressions.

"hospital or police station they will be having internet and I remember my facebook password yaar I'll contact jeeju from there and will be going back''.."

Asad got disappointed hearing her say she would go back. The night went on with her blabbering and he didn't realized when they both dozed off.

It was morning, the sun was up, birds were chirruping and crackling sound of the stream was pleasant in the pleasant morning. Zoya woke up with a start and looked around where she was. It took her some time to remember what is happening around her. Nothing was happening around her as she was in a still forest with no living being'.. Slowly she remembered what happened in last few days.

Zoya came out of the hut and lazily stretched her body. She turned some left some right to give some exercise to her backbone after all she had to make a long journey today. And then her eyes fellon the creature lying beside her hut. Ahe was shocked to see a man there would be an understatement. The person's back was facing her and he was in deep sleep she could make out with the soft snoring coming from the man.

Yes, she knew the man but was superbly shocked to what he was doing in the forest. To confirm her small doubt about the man zoya picked up a stick which she was using as a walking stick because of her injuries and also as her tool for protection. She started moving towards the person, his back still faced her. She was scared as if he is some one else and someone harmful then what????

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Zoya moved to the man and poked his legs first lightly then hard with her stick. He still didn't woke up but just stirred in his sleep. Zoya was still confused of him being Mr. Khan as how would he appear here in just one night. Zoya now again poked him very hard this time and he woke up startled. He found zoya in front of him and both of them in forest, it took him few seconds to recollect everything after such a tight sleep after so many sleepless nights.

All this while zoya was standing there with eyes and mouth wide open to find her mr. khan in the forest.

'Is he here to take me back. Of course zoya other wise why would he come here.'

Asad looked at zoya and then said in aloud voice why did you poke so hard, its paining now.

Zoya was still in half daze and managed to ask.. What, how, I mean how come you are here???

A: I came to get you zoya

Z: but why YOU came here??

A: zoya I told you I came here in search of you.

Z: Mr. khan you should have not come here. You left phupi and nalma alone there. How tensed they must be about you.

A: yea, they must be tensed. You are missing from bloody 2 weeks and they would get tensed becoz I'am here. Are you a fool. You have tensed them like hell. You have tensed me more than anyone else in this world. Do you even know what I was going through. Agar tumhe kuch ho jata toh. What if I lost you?

Z: what if I was dead mr. khan why it bothers you? Why it matters you?

A: it matters me because(his voice was very loud but he suddenly stopped)

Asad moved few steps back from zoya and after some minutes of silence he was about to say something but then they were interrupted by the members of rescue team.

Man 1: mr. khan and miss faruqui are you both fine??

They both just nodded.

Man2: miss faruqui you are badly hurt we should be moving for first aid. Its not good to keep the wounds open and also they are not treated for 2 weeks.

Zoya nodded and started walking followed by asad.

They both reached the shore and sat in helicopter and headed towards the mumbai airport.

As soon as they reached mumbai zoya was taken to hospital and while zoya's treatment was going on asad called home and informed them about there safety.

During the whole time he was with zoya no one of them spoke and zoya's confession was only replaying again ad again in his mind.

After zoya was discharged, they both headed towards Bhopal. Zoya didn't want to go back to his house but seeing her own condition she decided against it and followed what he said.

Edited by arshi_ke_dewane - 11 years ago