To New CVs- The faults in your storytelling(read note on page 6)

Now let me start by saying MODs can you ignore the fact that I was a TR fan once and read my post through since I am posting from a neutral point of view

And also that I am Angel not Shreya so MODs if you want to raise anyone's WL it should be mine...that is if my account is not banned yet( haven't checked...BADASS)

Now guys when you read this post forget that you are KR,TR or SS Fan, read it like you are a new fan who just found out about this show and did some research on it or a neutral fan.

So my title is not that confusing is it?

A good storyteller leaves an impression on a viewer...the time it lasts proves your worth as the storyteller and how you much talent you have...they make an impression from each and every episode you watch and Palki Malhotra had this talent.

KR fans forget your blind hatred for her for a minute and consider the reality.

A good storyteller weaves situations into plots and not the other way round.

Meaning you incorporate situations in your plot not twist and turn the plot to make the situation fit.

This has been done by PM too I will admit but not to such a ridiculous ass-extent.

Exhibit numero uno:

Swayam is in touch with Kria which should be fine and all except that Swayam has not remembered or mentioned her in years...you can say that he might have done that in private or whatever but honestly ask yourself wouldn't this have come up, some other time...anytime, it was in his friggin contacts...how does that happen? I also realize that Kria not coming up during PM's time was Palki's fault but honestly I felt like she had a burning hatred for Kria or something, which is kinda creepy if you ask me BUT, she was talented enough to make it less obvious throughout the entire show and to make it non...what's the word...stupid!

I am not just saying this and complaining... I actually have a better case scenario in mind...

What the CVs should have done was let Swayam meet Kria prior to her meeting everyone else... an episode where Swayam and Kria catch up especially since Swayam knew Kria's situation and I also realize that the big reveal of Taani in Rey's life would be dramatic and all that crap but quality over quantity people...I mean if you guys wanted an easy way out I can really say that you don't deserve to replace an ace storyteller like PM... A story takes time to flourish and it needs to make sense...no offence but they are giving me the saas bahu feel.

Exhibit numero two (I am not that learned in Spanish)

Now Rey's letter is weird as eff...It's not because I am a TR fan but come on...it's weird.

That letter was given 2 years ago...the events which occurred what that he fell in love again. Not to be rude to anyone or anything but that's emotional cheating on Taani. Now please no one say that Taani was an infatuation because we all know that that's about as true as a tooth fairy (sorry to all kids reading this, but tooth fairies are fake like the above statement) and even if you are a KR fan cheating on someone is wrong on any level so CVs what the hell are you trying to promote here?

Exhibit number thres

Sharon is angry with him for keeping Kria a secret but she forgot that she kept her asthma away from Swayam too and it doesn't cross her mind even once that Swayam may have a good reason to have hid this piece of information from her and everyone else. ...

Yes I am speechless at Sharon because she went from being on full on patao mode to friendship to ignoring diva to I hate him for not telling me this secret which will not affect my life whatsoever.

Oh my dear lord...I can't even say anything. Please bring SRP back and on a side note vrushi is doing great at being a diva...you rock girl.

Now this is a criticism because for the fans who still watch this deserve better.

I am a TR fan, I love SS with all my heart and I feel absolutely nothing for KR, not hate or the slightest appeal to them.

I have an emotional connection to this show which exists in the absolute smallest protion but its there.

It's like watching pavitra rishta where every time my continuity is taken for a toss.

You wonder what the hell happened to this show and it shouldn't make anyone feel this way.

I will agree logic is nearly extinct in soaps and you guys tend to overlook it like twilight phangurls ignore the fact that Edward is a paedophile for dating Bella, but should you make compromises for something you guys love so much?

Current CVs have gigantic shoes to fill so please do it right in the final days of D3 and let it be known as a good show rather than something that fell flat on its face.

p.s this really irked me...new CVs, be original. The basketball scene was a clear cut copy of TR basketball scene ...now guys I don't give an eff about what happens to them but don't annoy the fanbots...I aint even a fangirl and I am pissed...you guys got some serious bashing ahead of you if you continue this.

p.p.s KR fans and TR fans I really don't think I said anything wrong but I want peaceful discussion about quality here not same fanbot showdown please.

Originally posted by: _Chocolate_

I am loving the track n they r dealing it sensibly.

We KR fans surely doesnt want Kria's entry in a way that Swayam/Rey feels Stomach mein ghadbad hoing n the next day something related to d girl happening n den she comes.

I wonder how stomach knows dat d girl is coming back in Life.

Does that make any sense?

I didnt find any fault n Im open for discussion regarding them :)

It is more logical than before.

We r loving it😃

- Snigdha.

Originally posted by: _Chocolate_

We would really appreciate if u discuss about the faults before n now n then speak :)

Pointing out at times when u r not liking them is Obscure.

:)

Originally posted by: Angel-luvs-s

i guess you havent seen my previous posts...i have always made fun of this showand pointed out its faluts even when my fav was here... what makes you think i should change any thing now that my fav is gone?

Angel. You know na , a post from TR'ians about the current track & everyone gets offended.

I am loving the new cvs and their work, its obviously my fav is back and the storyline seems great to me. Just asking one thing when you dont bother about KR a bit ( should I say u hate them?),then I dont see this post is a neutral post. A post is neutral when you mention both positive and negative things. This post looks like you are taking your frustration out. I have no problem, its an open forum. Coming to your second point the scene you mentioned it could be a copy from TR scene. But I dont bother, because we have seen Taani wearing Kriya's dress. Nothing can be more awful than that. When you are presenting yourself as a fanbot who dislikes everything about this show now, I can't also control myself to be a representative of KR fanbot.

Originally posted by: ShReya_TaaRey

Now let me start by saying MODs can you ignore the fact that I was a TR fan once and read my post through since I am posting from a neutral point of view

And also that I am Angel not Shreya so MODs if you want to raise anyone's WL it should be mine...that is if my account is not banned yet( haven't checked...BADASS)

Now guys when you read this post forget that you are KR,TR or SS Fan, read it like you are a new fan who just found out about this show and did some research on it or a neutral fan.

So my title is not that confusing is it?

A good storyteller leaves an impression on a viewer...the time it lasts proves your worth as the storyteller and how you much talent you have...they make an impression from each and every episode you watch and Palki Malhotra had this talent.

KR fans forget your blind hatred for her for a minute and consider the reality.

A good storyteller weaves situations into plots and not the other way round.

Meaning you incorporate situations in your plot not twist and turn the plot to make the situation fit.

This has been done by PM too I will admit but not to such a ridiculous ass-extent.

I agree here. Even if Palki Malhotra left numerous loopholes in the way of her storytelling, she trivialized them to the extent that they seemed irrelevant.

Exhibit numero uno:

Swayam is in touch with Kria which should be fine and all except that Swayam has not remembered or mentioned her in years...you can say that he might have done that in private or whatever but honestly ask yourself wouldn't this have come up, some other time...anytime, it was in his friggin contacts...how does that happen? I also realize that Kria not coming up during PM's time was Palki's fault but honestly I felt like she had a burning hatred for Kria or something, which is kinda creepy if you ask me BUT, she was talented enough to make it less obvious throughout the entire show and to make it non...what's the word...stupid!

This was the shocker to me. I mean come on, if the two besties are in touch, there was not even a single sign of contact in two years?? What was the need to keep it under wraps in the first place? Even if they kept it under wraps (yeah yeah Palki Malhotra ensured it), they could have made it a little BELIEVABLE!! Plus Swayam did not care to tell Rey about Kria's reason for leaving the college even when he was so upset about it?

I am not just saying this and complaining... I actually have a better case scenario in mind...

What the CVs should have done was let Swayam meet Kria prior to her meeting everyone else... an episode where Swayam and Kria catch up especially since Swayam knew Kria's situation and I also realize that the big reveal of Taani in Rey's life would be dramatic and all that crap but quality over quantity people...I mean if you guys wanted an easy way out I can really say that you don't deserve to replace an ace storyteller like PM... A story takes time to flourish and it needs to make sense...no offence but they are giving me the saas bahu feel.

Believe me, they did not think that deep. It had not occurred to them that fans know how to connect the dots and see the obvious.

Exhibit numero two (I am not that learned in Spanish)

Now Rey's letter is weird as eff...It's not because I am a TR fan but come on...it's weird.

That letter was given 2 years ago...the events which occurred what that he fell in love again. Not to be rude to anyone or anything but that's emotional cheating on Taani. Now please no one say that Taani was an infatuation because we all know that that's about as true as a tooth fairy (sorry to all kids reading this, but tooth fairies are fake like the above statement) and even if you are a KR fan cheating on someone is wrong on any level so CVs what the hell are you trying to promote here?

Now this part really really pissed me big time. I mean SERIOUSLY? Rey keeping the letter equals NOT being entirely honest with Taani. Now I won't say he cheated on her because that is a strong word but yeah! It can be a kind of dishonesty. While Taani was entirely honest with him during her entire relationship, (revealing her insecurities about him, Shivam's fake relationship) did she not deserve an honest confession from his side too? Moreover its not something she was totally unaware of. For God's sake, she knew about Kria and would have understood it damn well.

Exhibit number thres

Sharon is angry with him for keeping Kria a secret but she forgot that she kept her asthma away from Swayam too and it doesn't cross her mind even once that Swayam may have a good reason to have hid this piece of information from her and everyone else. ...

Yes I am speechless at Sharon because she went from being on full on patao mode to friendship to ignoring diva to I hate him for not telling me this secret which will not affect my life whatsoever.

I am not really into Swaron, so cannot comment much except that I hope REALLY hope the new CV's don't ruin them. They have already done that with one love story.

Oh my dear lord...I can't even say anything. Please bring SRP back and on a side note vrushi is doing great at being a diva...you rock girl.

Now this is a criticism because for the fans who still watch this deserve better.

I am a TR fan, I love SS with all my heart and I feel absolutely nothing for KR, not hate or the slightest appeal to them.

I have an emotional connection to this show which exists in the absolute smallest protion but its there.

It's like watching pavitra rishta where every time my continuity is taken for a toss.

You wonder what the hell happened to this show and it shouldn't make anyone feel this way.

I will agree logic is nearly extinct in soaps and you guys tend to overlook it like twilight phangurls ignore the fact that Edward is a paedophile for dating Bella, but should you make compromises for something you guys love so much?

Current CVs have gigantic shoes to fill so please do it right in the final days of D3 and let it be known as a good show rather than something that fell flat on its face.

p.s this really irked me...new CVs, be original. The basketball scene was a clear cut copy of TR basketball scene ...now guys I don't give an eff about what happens to them but don't annoy the fanbots...I aint even a fangirl and I am pissed...you guys got some serious bashing ahead of you if you continue this.

Was there any such scene? If there was, God bless you new CV's. You have difficult times ahead of you! 😆

p.p.s KR fans and TR fans I really don't think I said anything wrong but I want peaceful discussion about quality here not same fanbot showdown please.

I think fanbases will not stick to this advice.

Originally posted by: _Chocolate_

I didnt know it was ur post.

N I didnt find posts across d faults done in Taani's re-entry :)

I can still say there r no faults in d present story.