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Posted: 11 years ago
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Hi all, I know No-one knows me here but I'm a huge ViSa pankhi. and I know everyones upset.

Here's something to cheer you up and bring a smile thinking of ViSa. I heartily apologize for using my work from other forum here but I really didn't have time to write something original on ViSa. Maybe I'll write an original soon. But till then I hope you like it...
OS : Safe in his arms?

She walked into her bedroom, slowly picking all the cushions that lied on the floor. Tidying her messy bed as she grunted in between her self talks. 'Ohh this man, God help me' she muttered.

To her surprise and shock, her darling husband heard her taunt.

'What's wrong' he questioned innocently smirking.

'Ohh nothing I'm mad - you see, I like to keep our no I should say my surroundings clean' she said sarcastically.

'Ohh ya those people are called a maniac' he replied jokingly.

'Ya you're right I'm a cleanliness freak' she sighed and continued 'Sorry Sir I didn't mean o clean the room' she taunted sarcastically as she messed the room up once from her side.

'Ohh shut up Sarita, I was just joking you know it na' Vikrant questioned in the end.

'No, I know you were serious I know' Sarita replies with streams of river flowing down her sparkly eyes.

'Aarey I am sorry I was just having fun' explained Vikrant as he walked towards her. But Sarita backed off throwing few cushions at him. Soon thumping on the bed with hands covering her face.

She sobbed and Vikrant apologized but she didn't listen to him she muttered in between her sobs 'YOU HAVE BEEN TAUNTING EVER SINCE WE GOT MARRIED'

'I mean can't you see I'm hurt everytime you say something like this' questioned Sarita as she intently stared at Vikrant.

'Look I know you want everything perfect and I have been trying to do that alright' he sighed as he continued 'It was just a joke' Vikrant softly completed as he tired wiping her tears off. Sarita got up and stormed off.

While Vikrant stared at her retreating back.

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An hr later...Vikrant called, but Sarita didn't pick the landline so he left a voice message.

Please record your message after the tone **

'I'm sorry Sarita' Vikrant apologized while Sarita lightly said 'hmmm'

'What hmmm, please talk to me mazak tha' Vikrant almost completed his sentence as he knew what Sarita was replying at the other end.

Vikrant imagined Sarita infront of him in the office,

*Day Dream

Sarita snapped at him pointing the pen at him.

Vikrant walked backwards unconsciously while he imagined Sarita speaking to him 'You, seriously don't care do you?'

Vikrant looked completely clueless, 'I'm sorry dear, isse jyada mai kya karu tumhe mana ne ke liye batao na please'

Sarita turned around ignoring his question and walked off.

'Ufff ye ladki' thought Vikrant as he left from the board room.

All his ride, all day long Vikrant Suryavanshi kept on thinking how he could he manofy his dear wife. He was out off ideas, when something struck his brain. Vikrant called up Divya, and requested her to keep Sarita accompanied all day, and she should be alert to drop her home as late as possible.

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Few hours down the sunset, Sarita reached home firstly she was annoyed by Vikrant's behaviour since morning secondly he didn't drive her home pissed her off more.

Sarita unlocked her main door, it was dark in the room 'Vikrant' she called out but heard no-one. Before she could turn the lights on she noticed candles light all around the room, it was romantic. She relaxed, but her mind said 'Sarita your losing focus dear'

A slight smile crept up her lips but soon she hide it with fake anger, she walked towards her small round table where few candles were lit and two plates of Noodles were kept decorated impressively.

Sarita looked everywhere but found no-one, she soon went into her bedroom where everything was similar except no food. Her heart wasn't disappointed, but it was definitely excited though her face was inexpressive.

Sarita walked into her washroom, got changed and went into the kitchen to find something to eat for dinner. She ignored the food on the table. She was preparing bread and jam, as she wanted to eat something sweet, but as she turned around towards her round table she found a man sitting on one seat grinning at her.

Sarita freaked out for a second as she had forgotten to turn the lights on, she thought she was alone but however that wasn't the case she was accompanied by her dear husband.

Who's smile turned into a grin seeing her freak out badly. Sarita ignored and walked pass him with her delicious bread on a plate. She was almost past him, but she couldn't move any further. Sarita pulled, and pulled but she couldn't walk further that's when he felt a hard grip on her wrist.

Vikrant quickly pulled Sarita closer to him, but she lost balance with the plate it fell on the ground with Sarita unbalancing herself crashing onto Vikrant's chest. Her hand held Vikrant's shirt tight, with her eyes were closed. Her eye lids were stretched, and pressed on her eyeballs so tight that Vikrant could sense she was scared.

'Shssshhh...he hushed politely...Its okay I'm here.. Safe in my arms'

Sarita slowly released her eye lids, and slowly opened it. She soon was lost into his eyes.


The thunderbolt struck so loud that Sarita's eye contact was interrupted Sarita clenched his shirt tighter hugging him. But soon reality hit her, that she was angry with Vikrant. Sarita got up and started walking again, but then Vikrant stopped her 'Itni bhi kya narazgi ki tum mere saath ek candle light dinner nahi karogi'

Sarita's cheeks immediately turned crimson Sarita, she turned around looking at him lovingly. 'Subhe se bechare ko kitna tang kiya hai, aur jyada karungi toh kahi sach mai baat bigaad na jaye' thought Sarita.

She turned around, expressionless to being with, Vikrant pulled out the chair letting Sarita sit comfortably on the chair. He pulled his chair closer to her and started feeding her with a fork. Sarita continued eating from her plate instead. 'Itni bhi kya narazgi dear' Vikrant complained with emotional eyes.

Sarita could hear it in his voice, soon she turned her head towards Vikrant grabbing his wrist she took it to her mouth and munched on a little of the Manchurian while she twisted Vikrant's hand for himself to eat from the same spoon.

Shortly they were done feeding each other silently.

They stayed with their elbows on the table and their palms under their chins resting them to both of them were drowned in each other's eyes... Both soon Vikrant lost it with his elbows slipping due to wetness while Sarita's palms were sweaty...

As Vikrant had lost the game, Sarita let out a sweet smile, as she blinked her eye lids. Vikrant smiled back at her as he picked her up, Sarita was still lost in his drowning eyes.

"Safe in his arms" she thought as she buried her head onto his chest.

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I apologize for any mistakes

-Shru

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Meriam25 thumbnail
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Posted: 11 years ago
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candle night dinner mein noodles or manchurian wow
awesome lovely

plz plz continue
ty for considerin our state of mind n heart
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Its sucha cute os. i mean the way they behaved and stuff, shows the complete nok jhok between them. it was really veryy good. you should write more.
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Aww...This is such a cute OS! 😃 Lovely job, dear...👏
Thank you so much for hearing our silent plea ...to be treated to ViSa FFs !😳

So sweet of you for trying to raise our broken spirits!😊

❤️ Muah!
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Posted: 11 years ago
#5
This is just lovely Thanks for Sharing dear😊
Please do continue...!!
Durresyed thumbnail
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Posted: 11 years ago
#6
We dnt mind u using other forums work...
Good work dear!!!!
Happy as long as we get VISA.
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Posted: 11 years ago
#7
The show has ended but still there are amazing stories coming out everyday!

Shru loved this cute nok-jok between ViSa, I could picturise it and imagine this happening in the show. This was really fantastic😃👏

Please do write more whenever time permits.
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Posted: 11 years ago
#8

amazing os loved it in bits
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Posted: 11 years ago
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So sweet...thank you all for making visa so memorable.
😊
Edited by Elita - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Originally posted by: Meriam25

candle night dinner mein noodles or manchurian wow

awesome lovely

plz plz continue
ty for considerin our state of mind n heart

Thank you so much for liking it😳

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