~Eternal Flame SS~ Rajeev/ViSu/MuRat Part 2 pg 14

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Anuja

@anu93

Sparkler

+ 3

Posted: 11 years ago

#111

Khushi di I was waiting for this supernatural SS upd for soo longg😛

Hmm...toh Saaba a witch enters in Aman's life now! Interesting😉

Curious to know what will happen next...

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Surya.Ravi

@Surya.Ravi

Trailblazer

+ 10

Posted: 11 years ago

#112

very nice Bharti..thank you for the PM..continue soon...😊

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muqaddas

@rajeevkiijann

Rocker

Posted: 11 years ago

#113

nice update bharti 👏👏👏

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crazygul

@crazygul

Rocker

Posted: 11 years ago

#114

background sound awesome di ! and di aap ek baat btao mujhe aap se bhi koi galti ho sakti hai jo aap keh rahe hai pardon for any mistake ! loved it !

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ria

@ronojoy_ria

Sparkler

+ 4

Posted: 11 years ago

#115

the up is really good

plz cont soon and pm me

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Priya Sharma

@Priyart12

Dazzler

Posted: 11 years ago

#116

m back yo yo yo 😛

dekho maine res ni kiya

sidhe cmnt kiya 😛

vaise aapko yaad aa gyi is ff ki ??? 😲

chalo story pe aati hu

bhut powerfull h saaba to

sense ti kr liya but apne hone wale un ko ni phchan pai ladaki ...

nazro se nazre mili to jannat si mehki fizaye ❤️

ye azaan to abhi thik thak lag raha h ...

amaan ki powers sote time khud use hoti h 😲

bhut chota ud h ye to...

w8ing for next n jaldi dena

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Rose

@--Rose--

Dazzler

+ 3

Posted: 11 years ago

#117

When will you update yaar?????????
Please update na...

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rashmi gautam

@sweetsanyo

Dazzler

+ 2

Posted: 11 years ago

#118

- dreaming dreaming aaannnddd... dreaming...

sleep don't let my dream break!!...

supernatural things just makes my thrist for all imaginations and fantasy quenched...

aapki iss story se muje sab milta h... poora nutrition mil jata h!!...

first and fore msot- u know naa!!.. murat!!... yoy!.

dan supernatural theme- yoyo!!..

thrill!, suspense...!! adventure, mystery!!...hurphan maula story h ekdum!!...

☺️sabaa and amaan ka first meeting- finally jiss eternal flame ki aap baat kerr rhe they!!- uski ignition ho gyi h!!!...- inn dono ki mulakaatt k saath!. pyaar ki aag shoro ho gyi h!!!...

oops!!-1st meeting mei hi pyaar ka dard h meetha meetha ho gyaa

dard hoa sabaa ko- n meetha pyaar dono ko- feeling attarcted to each oder... ; )

sabaa darling, i knw paatni ko bhot sukh h aapne paatiyo , gf ko aapne bf's ko control kerna bhot shauk hota h, but darling itni jaldi bhi kyaa h- thoda wait!!... and supernatural powers se nhi- madam!!...aapne pyaar control keroo tabhi baaz ayega ye ladka- verna no one can tame him...

the way amaan sothingly touched her head to heal...bhot romantic h!!... <3

aamir- its just so correct to imagine him as amaan 's brother- rt n rajveev- both r rockingg... aamir's dialogue- we r not here to hurt- mastt tha- dialogue of the update...

he stays wid amaan to control his exaggerated powers...this is scnws really logical!!!n innovative..

and azaan is sone per suhaga- haaye inn teeno k tigdi is teen maar khan.. 3 se 30!!..

two mysteries- sabaa ki family ko kisne mara!!...??? kyu mara?? n kab maaraa??/

and wat is that azaan aamir talking of???

- okies di- aaj meine happy sanyogita day k paavaan parv per finally aapke ff- sorry humare ff per cmnt ker diya h!>..