~Eternal Flame SS~ Rajeev/ViSu/MuRat Part 2 pg 14

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Sonali.S

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Posted: 12 years ago

#101

ok if u write about them anytime then msg be the link too as i won't come to JA forum

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Khushi Grover

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Posted: 11 years ago

#102

Kyu Ho Gaya Na

Believe In Love

Love Has No Reason

Unlimited Love

Saiyyan

Beauty & The Beast

Vo Mile The

Humari Adhuri Kahaani

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~Parchaiyan: Shadow of past~

Edited by Amor. - 11 years ago

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Khushi Grover

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Posted: 11 years ago

#103

Part 2

Amaan finishes his song, leave the guitar, grabs his phone, n ran outside in rush, he has to reach home asap.

As he step outside he collides with a girl, the girl is a powerful witch, she can sense supernatural by just thr presence near her n even control them in just few seconds by looking at them, she's sabaa.

She sense the supernatural in amaan, amaan turns to say sorry with a smile on his face, he's not yet aware of his powers, sabaa on other side try to control him, although he has done nothing but sabaa hates supernaturals, as one of them killed her family long back.

Her eyes turn red with anger n power which she want to use for controlling amaan, she look into his eyes n he was still smiling, waiting for a reply for his apology.

As she used her powers on amaan all of a suden she starts feeling weak, amaan dnt do anything but his super supernaturalty is taking sabaa's powers n she fell down, amaan came to her.

She was scared as till now she understood that he's powerful.

S: (shouted) go away.

Amaan was confused, he wanna help.

A: shhh (he ask her to quite),
he hold her hand n make her stand, he thought that may be bcoz of noise she's feeling like that.

He take her outside, she was still not comfortable, amaan slowly put his hand on her head n moves it slowly, she started feeling better.

Aamir reached thr as amaan got really late, as he saw him with a witch he got really worried, he goes to them.

Aamir: Amaan wat r u dng here?

Amaan: Bhai u here?

Amaan told him abt thr encounter.

Aamir understands the matter he orders amaan to go n sit in the car. Amaan move ahead n then turn n look at sabaa, she was looking at him out of curiosity, thr had thr first eye lock, sabaa feels really attracted towards him, he smiles n turn back. As he moves away she start feeling btr n powerful again.

Aamir came to her :He's not gonna harm any1.

She look at him strangely.

S: But, who's he?

Aamir: My younger brother Amaan.

Aamir turn back n move towards car, sabaa felt his supernaturalty n try to use his power on aamir.

Aamir guessed that he turn : Its not gonna work on us, dnt waste that, just remember we r not here to hurt.

He sit in the car n leaves. Sabaa is really pissed off, y she's not able to use her powers, who are they.

Scene changed, midnight, amaan was sleeping but he was restless, aamir was sitting beside him, everynite he sat thr to control amaan's powers which his uncouncious mind try to use, he dnt want him to use it, he want him to be a normal human. He was sweating, aamir chant sum mantra n put his hand on his forehead, he get calm down. Aamir slept thr only with his hand on his head.

Early morning, amaan wake up n saw aamir was sleeping sitting beside him, he sits n slowly make him lie on the bed, n leaves slowly without making noise. As he came out side, the ph starts ringing, he receives.

Amaan:Hello.

Otherside: Chote!

Amaan: Azaan bhai (a big smile came on his face).

Az: Aaj badi jaldi uth gaya.

Am: Bas aise hi. Az: Hws ur party.

Am: Are it was fantastic, njoyd a lot n sumthng interesting happen thr.

Az: Gr8 kya hua mjhe bhi bata.

Amaan told him wat happen, he understand the matter.

Am: Bhai can u tell me wat happen to that girl, she was luking at me as if i hv done sumthng to her.

Az: Are pagal tjhe dkh k behosh ho gyi hogi, mera bhai hai hi itna killer.

Amaan smiles.

Az: Bhaijaan kahan h.

Am: Vo...

Aamir came from behind.

Aa: Amaan!

Am: Gudmorning bhaijaan.

Aa: Gudmorning :-) .

He gave ph to him.

Aa: Hello!

Az: Salam wallekum bhaijaan!

Aa: Wallekum salam! Kaise ho azaan.

Az: Main khairiyat se hu bhaijaan, par lagta hai wahan sab thek nai hai, kab tak chalta rahega ye sab bhai (he ask in an angry/irritated voice).

Aa: Azaan (he says in a much louder voice, like a big brother, to make him quite).

Az: I am sorry bhaijaan.

Aa: Sab thik ho jayega, azaan.

Az: mujhe nahi lagta..

Aa: Tum bas apna khayal rakho..

Az: Ji ..rakhta hu

Aa: hmmm.

The phone disconnects.

Precap: Sabaa & Amaan meet again.

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Nandini

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Posted: 11 years ago

#104

Thanks for the PM Khrushi

I will read it and comment . I read the plot and a bit of the first part. It's very nice and fresh. I like your writing style

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Rose

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Posted: 11 years ago

#105

Omg Wowww:-D:-D
Yaar Its Very Interesting and Amazing:-):-):-)
I m a biggg fan of Rajeev Vivian and Rajat<3<3<3
Amir is so nice:-) and Amaan is sooo cutee<3<3<3 I m loving this story<3<3<3
Please please update the next part soon plzzz...
:-):-):-)

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A for Arpita

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Posted: 11 years ago

#106

Am I Dreaming Or Apne Actualy Mein Update Kia? 😲

"Tujhe Dekhke Behoos Ho Gai Hogi" 😆

No Matter How Much Powers Amaan Has LOVE Will Make Him Weak But At The Same Time LOVE Can Make Him Even More Stronger It Depends On Sabaa n Amaans LOVE!

In Short, "Nothing Is More Powerfull Then LOVE" 😳